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Whilst the Galactic Empire remains at its peak control over the Galaxy, it brings with it a parallel progression of the Galactic Civil War. The Rebel Alliance, desperate to see the Empire crumble for their war-crimes that spread on an unimaginable scale, fight on-wards to see their cause complete, at whatever the cost. So when Bothan Spies receive information about a new Star Destroyer being developed, it would be no surprise that the Rebel Alliance would want to retrieve and exploit as much information on it to the best of their ability.

A Rebel Alliance espionage team, consisting of 7 able fighters under the name of Grim Seven, were deployed on Tatooine to gather as much information as possible, and weren't surprised about how long it took to piece together the information on the plan's development location. The lengthy time had paid off, and the team sent themselves once again to a mid-rim planet under the name of Housun, a mix between urbanised landscapes to dense forests and mountains secretly under the control of an Imperial Fleet. Due to it being controlled via incognito standards, a small team was predicted to be able in completing a retrieval mission. Those predictions were wrong.

A suspected traitor amongst the ranks of the Rebel Alliance spouted information of the Rebel's plans to steal the documents and potentially sabotage the facility, resulting in the team seemingly disappearing from existence within an instant. No word came through of their whereabouts, or current status, and remained like such for days to come.

But after a month of confusion and unanswered questions, a file began to be sent to a Rebel General's personal databank. Before the file was completely sent, its remainder data was cancelled, making the file corrupted. After opening the file, the Rebel Alliance were greeted by a holographic message from Jy' Naheem, one of the members of Grim Seven, that began to spout out the success of the mission. However, due to the file's corruption, the message was cut off relatively early through its playback, and key points were seemingly still unanswered; but this provided the Rebel Alliance with a place to start.

Knowing that the plans could still potentially be within their own hands, the Alliance began to become determined towards retrieving the plans, and potentially the original team if possible. Whether or not the information was still correct was uncertain, and a gamble between only failure and victory was juggled in the hands of the Council. After debates ended, a platoon of 54 Rebel Fighters were gathered in preparation for beginning a search for these plans, beginning with a dangerous place to start...

The Imperial Facility on Housun.





So, this is basically an idea around the Rebel's continuing their data-gathering stage. I guess it is very similar to that of Episode IV and Rogue One, but in a non-canon way. From that, there won't be any major characters from the actual canon series taking place in this idea. To gather a even more basic description, the players would take up a role of one of the Rebels from this platoon in their attempts to go from a standard retrieval mission to a full-scale battle. That means the action would potentially increase overtime with more and more tension building up as many mistakes are made.

Instead of constant success, the theme is constant defeat, seeing as the regular series usually ends with a major victory for the Alliance (If you don't count the expanded universe). I'm not planning on focusing it on this single planet, as the group'll become mislead or forced to retreat, but eventual loops will make them seem as if they are running in circles around an unwinnable fight. Basically, it's showing that hope isn't always going to beat an immense military superpower.

I want to focus this more on Character narration than star wars battles as such, but a nice blend between the two will hopefully keep it interesting if it does succeed. All of this is still, clearly, under development and discussion, and if those who are interested have any ideas to improve upon this basic one please feel free to share them. Same goes for questions and queries about the topic.
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I am very interested! This sounds right up my alley of random sci-fi knowledge and my LOVE of Star Wars.
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I am very interested! This sounds right up my alley of random sci-fi knowledge and my LOVE of Star Wars.


Nice! Good to know I've got someone! Do you have any queries about this?
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No the story seems very straight through. Though I wonder what all roles within the Alliance are we playing or are we playing the Grim Seven. Either way it would be fine with me I just want to be sure.
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No the story seems very straight through. Though I wonder what all roles within the Alliance are we playing or are we playing the Grim Seven. Either way it would be fine with me I just want to be sure.


To make it clearer, we won't be taking the role of Grim Seven. The platoon that was sent in response to their short message, still to be named, is our position in the story. The group consists of six pilots, two Captains, and fourty six soldiers all of different specialisations, but mostly the same area of combat. The platoon travels in three separate spacecraft, one gunship and two multi-use transporters, which will be specified in RP.

Each one will play in important role, even if their destiny is to fail based upon believing they can achieve based on will and spirit.
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Oh okay that makes a lot more sense. Thank you for clearing it up more. That sounds like a lot more fun actually since it opens up more opportunity for specializations.
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Oh okay that makes a lot more sense. Thank you for clearing it up more. That sounds like a lot more fun actually since it opens up more opportunity for specializations.


The specialisations will be focused on their weaponry, attire, advantages, disadvantages and equipment to expand their places to flourish and to assist in developing characters. All will be somewhat able in general firefights, but maybe not as effective as others.
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Sounds good. I will spread the word around to some people that I know that might be interested
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Sounds good. I will spread the word around to some people that I know that might be interested


Oh, wait, really? Holy shit that'd be awesome! I mean, you being interested is enough help but this is brilliant! In that case, I'll get to work on the official OOC tonight in return. I'll start it in an hour!
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Awesome that sounds good. That and in light of the loss of Princess Leia and her mother for that matter, it only makes sense that I do some Star Wars RP in her honor. No I wont be using them as characters obviously, but it will make me feel better.
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Awesome that sounds good. That and in light of the loss of Princess Leia and her mother for that matter, it only makes sense that I do some Star Wars RP in her honor. No I wont be using them as characters obviously, but it will make me feel better.


Mmmhmm. T'is the saddest loss of the entire year, in the line of celebrity deaths.
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Yep, it was as sad as David Bowie and Alack Rickmam.
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Yep, it was as sad as David Bowie and Alack Rickmam.


Sad things aside, I'm halfway through the OOC, and am just fining out all the terrible lines, adding a bit of extra plot here and there into the brief of the storyline. It'll give an insight on the Platoon itself and what characters we'll be taking up.
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Awesome! Sounds good. Just keep me posted when the OOC is done and I will share the link with some of my friends to see if they will join as well!
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Awesome! Sounds good. Just keep me posted when the OOC is done and I will share the link with some of my friends to see if they will join as well!


Will Do!
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I am interested as well.
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I am interested as well.


I'll also tag you in the OOC when completed.
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Instead of constant success, the theme is constant defeat

Sounds like it will die quickly then.
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Sounds like it will die quickly then.


Well...Not that constant. A few small changes keep it from becoming a total loss.
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