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<Snipped quote by Indra>

But they were artifical Lizardmen, created by Daphane. They weren't like an organic race created from evolution. This is an organic species. (Unless an organic lziardman race has already been made in Fairy Tail, which I doubt)


Well, technically...no
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Alright. I redid Alexander's sheet to put him in an S-Class space. HOPEFULLY this can work out.


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Here is one of my characters! Finally

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@Sarcelle Renard Just wondering how your updates to the CS are coming along?

@Lmpkio I don't think I need to really give you a full review, since you already know my opinion of Alexanders personality and his character in general. My basic gist was that I think he makes for an interesting antagonist and I like him quite a bit.

I'm still very apprehensive on parts of his history. Particularly the whole concept of simply absorbing a Lacrima and then becoming insanely powerful doesn't gel right with me. Other than the mentioning of attending a Military Academy when he was young, there's no real mention of him ever earning his power. It's just bestowed upon him.

The Magic is fine balance wise, but I can't help but feel as though it's redundant. We already have a character who uses Sun Magic, and unfortunately Alexander's variant doesn't really attempt to do anything unique to separate itself from theirs.

I'm glad you decided to rework Alexander to bring into the Roleplay even though he wasn't able to fill a Slayer Role. Though all that's really been changed is the fact that he's not a Devil Slayer anymore and that he's now been bumped up to S Rank. It's not really substantial given the problems I identified above. At this point I'm not really sure if there's a way for him to be accepted unless some major changes are made at least to his magic. I can live with the backstory, even if I find it to be a bit too convenient in terms of how he gained his power; but I'm not going to allow another Sun Mage.
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@Leslie Hall I have changed the Solar magic into Light Manipulation Magic. If that is still somehow not good enough, I have just one last power I can use as a substitude.
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@Leslie Hall It'll be up by tonight. I apologize for the hold up, I just haven't had time to sit down and finish it (on my phone right now).
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@Leslie Hall It'll be up by tonight. I apologize for the hold up, I just haven't had time to sit down and finish it (on my phone right now).


Your avatar doesn't exactly inspire confidence...
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@Leslie Hall If you still aren't happy with Alexander, I've made another more unique S-Class unit for Librarium. He's not really an antagonist, but what can you do.

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@Sarcelle Renard Okay! No pressure but we do have someone else who has put forth for the last S Class Position with the Librarium. As I stated to everyone earlier, these positions would not go through the same selection process as the Slayers did; it's first come first serve. Meaning the decision will come down to whoever's character is put up and accepted first.

With that in mind;

@Lmpkio Excellent character. Really like what you've created. I'll need to go back and find your Lizardman Race App to add to the OP.

I feel like you could have kept some aspects of his backstory hidden to be revealed later, but it's otherwise solid and acceptable.

Magic is fine. Though I feel like I should point out that having such versatility means you should be relinquishing raw power. Despite being an S Class, I think it's fair to assume that an A Class specialising in a certain element would be more proficient in it than Ulysses. He has limited ways he can use his elements so I think this is a fair trade-off.

EDIT: Accepted! 1/2

Forgot to add that part.
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@Leslie Hall I totally understand, as it is my fault for not turning off the waffle iron sooner. If it comes down to it, I am perfectly fine with tuning down this version to an A rank if need be.

@Indra and @Denny you fellas should rip into this one too.



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Second character done!

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I am making progress on my characters.
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@Fenris123 I like what you're going for with this character, but I think you may need to add a little more detail to the personality.

I see a promising antagonist here. Good job.
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I feel like we have too many antagonists though...
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@Crimson Raven I know what you mean. I've been thinking I should shut down Librarium apps. Though there are still a few people I know who are submitting CS' for it.

I think I might end up changing Ignis to a Cloud Chaser. We want more people on their side than the Librarium.
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I also think Leslie should limit S-Class characters in general, but hey I'm insane!

I have nothing against a large group of antagonists against a motley crew of heroes, but we should give the heroes their arcs and allow them to develop (and wat not).
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I feel like we have too many antagonists though...


The thing is though is that antognisits aren't essentially bad guys. Ulysesses and Ignis for example aren't exactly bad people, they just have different reasons for fighting for the Librarium though they aren't evil. Very few of the characters that the players control are actually evil so this really turns into a battle of different idiologies between the characters.

Edit: Though I do see where you are coming from.
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I don’t think Crimson was saying we had too many “evil guys” but rather we have too many opponents/enemies (which I’m not sure I agree so far).
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According to the character tab only 2 have been accepted.
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