Flames of Night and Flames of Earth are a bit... too many flames to handle.

Night Flames shouldn't be a problem at all, since none of our characters should be physically able to have them, and even then they're still grossly OP.

Earth Flames are... actually not so complex, but I think we'd all prefer to focus more on the Sky Flames to not over-complicate everything.

TwilightDragon said
Anyone wanna interact with my characters?

You should visit Rani and his flowers ^^

Durnehviir said Though, if the invented flames are a problem I could remove them no problem. I kinda hope that I can keep the character design as it is, but if everyone is uncomfortable with the character I have no problem making adjustments.

Well, it's not because they're custom I don't like them. It's because you don't elaborate on them at all, and the one you do elaborate on can easily be replaced by an existing one, in this case the Lightning Flame. In fact, it would make more sense that for your katana to conduct Sky (as in category, not individual) Dying Will Flames for different effects rather than make a new Flame that does exactly what another Flame already does better.

TL;DR: Sun + Lightning > Sun - Supernova/Kaos

Well, Enma's flame is just as overpowered as Bermuda's.

Also, lol, that wasn't too long to read. haha.
I see the point. However, I kinda wanted her more of a physically strong character. That's why I shied towards the Sun flames. I also figured that, out of the three Yakuza that I gave her, it wasn't befitting the Sky flame. If anything, the Sky Flame would be a member/successor of the Yamaguchi-gumi. Because I gave her the smallest of the three fictional Yakuza I wanted her to have a prominent ability, though not following the familiar Sky focus and I wanted to create an original flame for her, revolving around the Sun, that made her Yakuza family unique.

Basically, I was running all this stuff in my head at once and it produced this formula that spat out this character in the formally overpowered fashion. I downgraded her and gave her the hypercut, but that wasn't what the original ability was. The original ability was tossing about fiery explosive flames every which way. I gave her the hypercut to match her swordsmanship fighting style, but, like you've said, I could maybe make them more Sun like and focus around increasing physical strength for the same effect (of a super effective cut).

Though, essentially, the flames are produced by running the Sun flame through her weapon. I haven't given them any supplementary effect beyond that except the Hypercut. Basically, lol, there isn't really anything special about them other than their enhancement attribute.

Okay, after typing a 21-paged project as well as a presentation and 2-paged review, I finally have time to breathe.

I discussed this with the other two before and settled on strictly keeping this roleplay towards what's shown in the anime, and not the manga. I'm not really a big fan when it comes to people creating things solely for their character unless it's really (and when I mean really, I mean I should know all about it, given the fact that I'm a person in charge) elaborated on, as Grey stated.

EDIT: Accidentally clicked submit when I didn't mean to. Ugh. I'll finish editing this with what else I had to say in a moment

So does that include the whole of the Yakuza then?

Okay, screw it
I'm just gonna make a whole new post because god I'm so sick of typing after sitting for like five hours straight nonstop clicking a keyboard fuuuuufufuufuf

The whole yakuza organization is fine; they existed in the anime but only for a single episode if I can recall correctly, where they got absolutely destroyed. I also had it in my character's biography too, so if you had to get rid of it, I would've had to as well. What I meant with what I said was the two custom flames, but I think that with your recent edits and explanations, I think your character's fine unless the other two have any other problems with it.

Now, the way I looked at your character is that she was going to arrive in Japan at this very moment when the Guardians were still not officially selected in name and none of them have any fighting capability (or at least, nothing worthy of note) thus far. I'm only bothered by this because until they are officially revealed and whatnot, you won't really be able to participate. It's just a matter of getting you involved.

*peeks into thread*
*sees that Boss is taking care of everything*
*sneaks out*

Anywho, offer stands for anyone, not just Twilight: feel free to interact with Raniero if you wish.

Hmmm.. who would you prefer to interact with Rani?

Between Cyril and Fionn or in general? If it's the former I'll nab Cyril because IIRC you made interaction plans with Goth for Fionn and Angel. Don't want to botch it in case you're still doing it~

Ah. If you want you can make him walk up to Cyril. I got to go~

Maybe tomorrow, I gotta go as well.

I will not be reachable after this afternoon until Monday.

Solace said
Okay, screw itI'm just gonna make a whole new post The whole yakuza organization is fine; they existed in the anime but only for a single episode if I can recall correctly, where they got absolutely destroyed. I also had it in my character's biography too, so if you had to get rid of it, I would've had to as well. What I meant with what I said was the two custom flames, but I think that with your recent edits and explanations, I think your character's fine unless the other two have any other problems with it.Now, the way I looked at your character is that she was going to arrive in Japan at this very moment when the Guardians were still not officially selected in name and none of them have any fighting capability (or at least, nothing worthy of note) thus far. I'm only bothered by this because until they are officially revealed and whatnot, you won't really be able to participate. It's just a matter of getting you involved.

lol.

I edited the ability and removed the custom flames all together. I kinda went along with what Gray said and thought to remove them based on what I talked about with them. It states:

Calling upon her katana and running her flames through the weapon enables her to utilize her sun flames to their fullest. Using her regalia, the Mugetsu, she focuses her Sun flames through her arms and legs to enable powerful cuts and quick movement. With a swing of her sword she could cut a vehicle into two or through a brick wall. She is able to cut quickly and with tremendous strength. It's said that with her flames amplifying her sword skills that she's the strongest swordsmen in all of her Yakuza family

That instead.

Also, I don't have a problem waiting for a bit. I've played bad guys before.
Though, I didn't really make the character solely for fighting and could do some interactions, but I think waiting a bit would be best. So I'm with you on that. :0

Besides, if Durnehviir gets impatient he can always make a second CS :3

Or he could have her interact with us now and then later have her character be like "Oh you gotta be kidding me, it's you guys?"

Also, I shot that post for you Twilight.

Grey, you can have Ran follow Cyril.

Who wants to interact with Fionn?

TwilightDragon said
Who wants to interact with Fionn?

NOBODY WANTS TO TALK TO YUKINE
I'm gonna start making my second character.

MEANY POO POO FACE

I'm waiting on Venchi.

Also, can you guys post a bit of longer posts? It doesn't have to be that longer. Two paragraphs is quite enough. ^^