GravityFlux said
*whisper*No superhuman-like flying chap with a red cape and a blue suit?

I like....Superman references more then life. I like you.

Kal-El said
I like....Superman references more then life. I like you.

Great, we'll have fun together!

Also, isn't today when Gowi goes through the apps?

GravityFlux said
Great, we'll have fun together!Also, isn't today when Gowi goes through the apps?

I've been asleep, and then Gowi's been asleep, and we keep missing each other. BUT! I will not sleep until we have gone through the apps.

DruSM157 said
I've been asleep, and then Gowi's been asleep, and we keep missing each other. BUT! I will not sleep until we have gone through the apps.

Great!
ROW ROW, FIGHT THE SLEEP

GravityFlux said
Great!ROW ROW, FIGHT THE SLEEP

;D

IVIasterJay said Aaron Rayne

Before I can say anything, I need to see this finished—though naming conventions in Kataloni are uniquely Japanese as well as their weapons are reminiscent of that same culture. Keep me posted.

Gokiburi7 said Eden Kasratu

I know you understand the ramifications of the eternity force and the corrupting bits about it, so I’m sure you’ll be writing the overbearing virtuous natures of the eternity force. So I’m looking forward to that, and as I’ve said before I like bits about Ari—and the cultist background. Also, curious if you’re sticking with the Kasratu name as it sounds relatively Asian in nature? Was his family descended from the Salasi peoples? Kata? Ludosi? Curious.

“Over the course of Dalance's life, under the spiritual guidance of an ancient harmonic artefact, the group had laid the foundations of a plan to cease the very planet's orbit. Through this method, his father's insane notations announced, half the world would be scorched to nought whilst the other half would freeze and die. Life would be removed from the world, thus any scope for the creation of chaos would also perish.”

– I’d like to know a bit more about this even if it’s a bit laid in the backstory; also why does it sound to me like the totem here is one of the virtue named Justice rather than Humility, etc. Give me a reply on the above and I’m sure this thing will likely be ready to go.

GravityFlux said Tiberius Winter

The anglo-indian appearance intrigues me as you describe landeian origin, which I describe as “generic terran”. I wonder if that landeian ethnicity has been watered down through Khani (hindu) and Salasi (tibetan/shaolin) family members?

I have no questions or qualms with techniques or anything as is. Approved. Though I would like some notes on his earlier travels and such. =)

Noel said Lynnette Alwin

The only thing I’m really concerned about with this amazing piece of prose is the possession technique. How do you propose this is balanced and so on? Otherwise this thing is ready to go.

Gowi said
Before I can say anything, I need to see this finished—though naming conventions in Kataloni are uniquely Japanese as well as their weapons are reminiscent of that same culture. Keep me posted.I know you understand the ramifications of the eternity force and the corrupting bits about it, so I’m sure you’ll be writing the overbearing virtuous natures of the eternity force. So I’m looking forward to that, and as I’ve said before I like bits about Ari—and the cultist background. Also, curious if you’re sticking with the Kasratu name as it sounds relatively Asian in nature? Was his family descended from the Salasi peoples? Kata? Ludosi? Curious.– I’d like to know a bit more about this even if it’s a bit laid in the backstory; also why does it sound to me like the totem here is one of the virtue named Justice rather than Humility, etc. Give me a reply on the above and I’m sure this thing will likely be ready to go.The anglo-indian appearance intrigues me as you describe landeian origin, which I describe as “generic terran”. I wonder if that landeian ethnicity has been watered down through Khani (hindu) and Salasi (tibetan/shaolin) family members? I have no questions or qualms with techniques or anything as is. Approved. Though I would like some notes on his earlier travels and such. =)The only thing I’m really concerned about with this amazing piece of prose is the possession technique. How do you propose this is balanced and so on? Otherwise this thing is ready to go.

Sure, I'll give you the details, and yes, there was intermixing, which is why he's dark complexioned

I'd prefer to do it over some sort of IM though.
Do you have Steam? I can chat and tell you about it on there

GravityFlux said
Sure, I'll give you the details, and yes, there was intermixing, which is why he's dark complexionedI'd prefer to do it over some sort of IM though.Do you have Steam? I can chat and tell you about it on there

GOWI AND I BOTH HAVE STEAM AND SKYPE AND AIM : D

I neglect AIM though, like a bad child.

Gowi said
I neglect AIM though, like a bad child.

AIM is the worst

DruSM157 said
GOWI AND I BOTH HAVE STEAM AND SKYPE AND AIM : D

Gowi said
I neglect AIM though, like a bad child.

Great
I'm Arch Militant Grimicius Creed on Steam
http://steamcommunity.com/id/neilguy/

DruSM157 said
ICQ is the worst

Fixed.

Gowi said
only thing I’m really concerned about with this amazing piece of prose is the possession technique. How do you propose this is balanced and so on? Otherwise this thing is ready to go.

Well, like she mentioned Lynn can't fully control that many targets(as in actually being able to make them move around and such), if she wanted to fully posses something she'd have to direct all her attention on a single target so theres that. Other than that it is something she can only use to do stuff like see/hear through them and likely couldn't posses a lot of things if she was in combat or something since fighting and possession would both be things that take a large amount of focus, so trying to do both wouldn't work out so hot.

If its something you're too worried about she could say she can only use it on animals/creatures of lesser intelligence as well. Shes mostly used it for monitoring the swamps so she likely hasn't tried to use it on people very much if at all in the first place

Sounds excellent to me.

that damn picture hahahaha

Huzzahs~

NEXT STEP: IC POST.

Also, those who haven't submitted profiles yet, PLEASE STILL DO. WE HAVE ROOOOM FOR YOU GUYS

Noel said
Huzzahs~

Mako. You..please.....friendship....needed.

DruSM157 said
NEXT STEP: IC POST. Also, those who haven't submitted profiles yet, PLEASE STILL DO. WE HAVE ROOOOM FOR YOU GUYS

IT'S COMING! THE SAMURAI BADASS IS COMING! Working on Technique, Backstory, and Origin currently.

Okay, I'll start making the changes now! I understand what I need to fix, up until the last bit about justice and humility... Perhaps you could explain it a little more. Thanks anyway, I'm glad mine was up to standard!

Kal-El said
Mako. You..please.....friendship....needed.

Mako is love. Every kill la kill girl is love

Except Ragyou. Shes creepy