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Here it is! Like I said, the intro with Bruce was written a while ago, so I included it there, but from here on out he's yours.

Also, feel free to get us going on the investigation of Lex if you wish :)
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If it's cool, I'm thinking of mixing Kara's story a little to include some crisis and some animated series aspects. The major thing being that she came other earth and was essentially adopted by the Kents and lived with them in Smallville until finally moving to Metropolis at 20. Perhaps took up the moniker of Supergirl around 18 or 19 years old helping primarily around Smallville at first. I'm thinking that perhaps she's enrolled at Metropolis U as a student...
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That sounds good! I've always pictured those two being more older brother/younger sister in their relationship.

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Awesome! That's kinda more what I picture too. I'll definitely get to posting asap but it might not happen for another few hours as I'm stuck at work.
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Questions for you:

-What do you think Clark and Kara should find on their patrol? I'm thinking that maybe they can discover a shipment of nerve gas accompanied by League of Shadow assassins on the Metropolis docks? That way we can get Bruce involved rather quickly.

-Would you mind if I controlled Lex and you controlled Talia?

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both points sound perfect to me!

I especially like the nerve gas idea.
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Great! Will post here in a minute :)
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So I'm finalizing grades today(I teach for a living) AND I have an appointment to go to pretty soon afterward. Will post either Monday or Tuesday.

By the way, LOVE your portrayal of Kara and descriptive writing style. It's been fun!
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Ah!! Omg to have an educator say they enjoy my writing is truly a compliment!! Thank you =D I'm loving your take on Clark as well, so well done! No problem on posting. Take your time, I'll see ya when I see ya!!
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Of course! Can't help but tell the truth ;)

Thanks very much! I'm very tired of Snyder/DC cinema making him so broody, so I like to play him as more of a Dean Cain/Christopher Reeve type.

Update: Trying to tie up loose ends at work, so will get you a post later today! Sorry for the delay
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No worries on the delay take your time!

Also yeah. I do love Henry cavil and I feel like he fits the perfect look of superman and Clark. When he's fun loving and quirky he does so weLloyd but when he's broody it's just too much. And Snyder's interpretation on the universes leaves something to be desired. I want to love his films so much but ....uhg the writing is so terrible. (Batfleck though...omg I love Batfleck).
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Argh! Life is being very...difficult at the moment. Wife is sick, house inspection...well, you get the point xD

Will get you a post probably Monday or Tuesday. Thanks for understanding :)
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I owe you one! It'll be up today. Take your time from there .
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Hi there! After a very...interesting extended weekend fraught with sickness, I'm back! Will be posting sometime today! :)
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Ahh boo, illness is never fun. Glad to hear you're back and hopefully you're feeling better!
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I am, thank you! :D

Hey, quick question: what's on the video Bruce found?
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I was going to go with, in the beginning, simply Lex and Talia being in various places around the facility, nothing too incriminating seeing as Lex owns it. But as it goes on, I was hoping to have someone show up (hooded figure perhaps?) who seems like they might be a little shady and it could be interpenetrated that they are with the league of assassins (perhaps some sort of emblem will be seen in a reflection in the video, or something spoken despite there being no audio, is recognised?) I hadn't quite worked it out in full but that was my initial thought.

If there's anything you'd like to add, or you'd like to 'play' the video in your post, certainly feel free!
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Gotcha! Sounds good. I'll throw the post up in a bit and let me know if you'd like me to change/revise :)
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I'm sure it'll be perfect!
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Gave you a couple of options to explore :)
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