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@Tharraleos Polemistis
No @ "he can potentially reach a state of absolute infinite power." Nobody gets infinite power.

Also, you just have too many abilities. On the submission guidelines: "The whole point is to create a balanced character. If a character is a master of everything, while its constituent parts never rise above a 4 the synergy of the whole will potentially exceed the limit." -- your character, via the synergy of such an abundance of powers, definitely rises above the limit.

Also, please review the character submission guidelines again. You'll find that you need to submit an influence level for each ability and item in addition to the overall influence that you provided. :) I'd recommend the following for whatever you choose to keep:

Enhanced Appendages: 4
Enhanced Condition: 4
Battle Cry: 3
Enhanced Senses: 4
Flight and gliding: 2
Climbing: 2
Swimming: 1
Burrowing: 3
Combat Empowerment - no in its current form.
Pride Empowerment: 3
Pride Combat Empowerment: 4
Telekinetic Force Manipulation: 4
Telepathy: 4 (due to being able to see through illusions)
Aerokinesis: 4
Geokinesis: 4
Hydrokinesis: 3
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Fair point. I've edited the profile and removed the empowerments, psychic abilities and element powers. Perhaps the most simple solution. Besides, I'm more looking to have some fun with this new 8 limbed concept I've yet to test out. So hopefully this proves to be a bit more balanced (and I just realized I've gotta add the influences, and your recommendations seem quite accurate).
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Alrighty. I've made the necessary edits. Let me know if this works and if I can answer any questions
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@Tharraleos Polemistis Thanks for making those changes! You're approved.
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