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Hidden 7 yrs ago 7 yrs ago Post by Feisty-Pants
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Work in progress!!

@Feisty-Pants Now I want my thief-to-be to know your dragon... I like dragons...


Just wait to see her CS. He might not like her. XD

Is the artwork I chose acceptable?
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@Feisty-Pants Now I want my thief-to-be to know your dragon... I like dragons...




Work in progress!!

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Just wait to see her CS. He might not like her. XD


In all fairness, knowing someone and liking someone are not always the same. I look forward to both your character sheets.

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@Feisty-Pants
Artwork is indeed acceptable, though most critters take the form of a specific humanoid race.
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Artwork is indeed acceptable, though most critters take the form of a specific humanoid race.


She is prideful of her dragonhood. Part of her weakness, for she will never hide her true self. The transformation is only for the convenience of moving around in crowds.
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<Snipped quote by CollectorOfMyst>

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In all fairness, knowing someone and liking someone are not always the same. I look forward to both your character sheets.


Well, then if he goes off appearances at first, her pictures are up and working.
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@Feisty-Pants Just a heads-up, benevolent dragons are merely uncommon rather than exceedingly rare.
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@Feisty-Pants Just a heads-up, benevolent dragons are merely uncommon rather than exceedingly rare.


Gotcha. Fixing.
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Also seems a bit early to say "when history discusses the deeds of" unless she's done some exceptional things in her twenty-two years. That said, I kind of like the duality of a benevolent dragon being almost the same age as Htraknu's return.
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Also seems a bit early to say "when history discusses the deeds of" unless she's done some exceptional things in her twenty-two years. That said, I kind of like the duality of a benevolent dragon being almost the same age as Htraknu's return.


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@Feisty-Pants Cult isn't causing trouble for random people yet. Rival nobles, marauding orcs and so on are good substitutes.
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When I said explain, I kinda meant "How did the non-human parent and human parent meet?". Other than that, looking good.


Well, they would have met in a normal place, while the magical parent was in human form. I'm not really good at explaining this kind of thing.
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Well, they would have met in a normal place, while the magical parent was in human form. I'm not really good at explaining this kind of thing.


But what was the magical parent doing in that normal place?
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But what was the magical parent doing in that normal place?


Trying to blend in with humans, get a taste for how they live their lives in contrast to its own.
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Trying to blend in with humans, get a taste for how they live their lives in contrast to its own.


A far more innocuous motive than that of Erika's mother. Sounds good.
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@Feisty-Pants Cult isn't causing trouble for random people yet. Rival nobles, marauding orcs and so on are good substitutes.


Gotcha.
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I believe my CS is done!! Please review at the top of the page. Forgive me, as it's been awhile, and I'm a little rusty.
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I believe my CS is done!! Please review at the top of the page. Forgive me, as it's been awhile, and I'm a little rusty.


I think it looks good. Because I'm co-GM, I think that means I can accept you. Mardox will kill me if I'm wrong, but oh well.
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I think it looks good. Because I'm co-GM, I think that means I can accept you. Mardox will kill me if I'm wrong, but oh well.


Woo!!
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@BlondyMcHuggles McHuggles, you done goofed but fortunately for you, I am a benevolent and merciful overlord and your life will be spared.
@Feisty-Pants Your application looks good except for two things. The first is your motivation. Hunting that witch is a good goal that you can certainly pursue but that section of the app was for explaining why you're embarking on a quest to slay Htraknu. Examples of motivations include but are not limited to: gold, glory, altruism (stop Htraknu from hurting people), a sense of destiny/a deity asked you to, etc. etc. If your elven nobles had a hold of some magical artifact that would be beneficial in god-slaying, then we could blame Htraknu's minions though they probably wouldn't take your land. Second thing isn't so much an issue as it is a desire for clarification. How does the cleansing breath work? Did your character enchant herself?
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@Mardox Sorry, but I think I'm going to have to withdraw. While the premise does make me want to stay, time limits IRL mean that I'm having to choose between my current RPs and recent ones. Thank you for accommodating me, and I apologise for not being able to stay.
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