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Name: Taiyou “Tai” Munashii
Nickname/Alias: Tai of the Inferno, The Ice-Cold Flame
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 23, born 9/15/452
Age Appearance: Young, enough so to be confused for a student (17~ish)
Sexuality: Heterosexual

Parents: Hina and Tonbo Munashii
Length and build 5’09” (175 cm) with a small, thin build
Weight 152 lb (69kg)
Favorite weather and season Rain and fall



Village: Amegakure
Birthplace: Amegakure
Organization: Amegakure ANBU

Clan/Bloodline: Munashii

Rank: ANBU (A)

Chakra Nature: Fire



Appearance:



Personality: Tai is a blank slate, wiped clean with bleach and thrown in the river. He loves nothing, hates nothing, and feels for nothing. In other words, he’s the perfect soldier. His life is sworn to protecting the Rain, and that is all he is. There is nothing he will not, or hasn’t already done, for the Rain. Though he doesn’t love or like anything, he acts kind and overly gentle towards people of Amegakure, being careful to keep himself from burning them.

He is also superstitious, believing that the sun hates him. He doesn’t like doing assignments on sunny days because he sees it as a bad omen. But when it’s raining, he sees that as a sign that the Rain is with him, pushing his actions, guaranteeing him success.

In battle, Tai either stands in one spot and annihilates his targets from a distance, or he gets close and burns them to ash. Which he chooses really depends on how much time he has to spend on his target.



History: The Munashii have always had a special relationship with fire. They sacrifice livestock to the flames, and in return, fire does not burn them. At the age of five, every Munashii child undergoes a ceremony, a birth of fire. The child is thrown into a fiery pit and left there for five days. If the child dies, they were unworthy. If the fire goes out, they are exiled from the clan. But if they live, they are celebrated. The clan has all but disbanded in recent years because parents of the children refuse the ceremony.

When the clan leaders checked on Taiyou after five days, the fire in his pit had gone out. Instead, it was the boy that was on fire, radiating heat hot enough to have melted the bottom of the pit and crack the bricks lining the inside of the building. He had passed. The test was supposed to force the children to give their chakra to the flame to keep it alive and from burning them, but Taiyou had gone beyond that. The flames fed him, made him strong. The flames couldn’t have burned his skin, for the flames were his own.

Tai spent only long enough for the next Chunin Exams to come around as a Genin, and even less as a Chunin. His prowess with fire release, and more importantly, his unwavering loyalty to his village, is what got him singled out to join the Amegakure elite ANBU.

Theme Song:


Weapons/Items[u][/u]:



Skills/Abilities
Excellent chakra control
Skilled in Nintaijutsu
Skilled in Taijutsu, none of which are listed because it's all just physical attacks
Average speed, without factoring in techniques
Only uses fire release



Special Traits
Average chakra reserves
Absorbs fire and heat and converts it into chakra. He can’t use flames he’s created out of chakra, and natural fire won't become chakra, but another ninja’s fire works.
Only kills when he needs to. If it isn’t part of a mission, he refuses to fight, unless doing so would endanger the Rain or its people.


Kekkei Genkai:

Name of Kekkei Genkai: Flame Blessing
Clan:Munashii
Description: Absorbs fire and heat and converts it into chakra. He can’t use flames he’s created out of chakra, but another ninja’s fire is fine. Natural fire doesn't convert to chakra.



Jutsu:



Custom Jutsu

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Name: Rei Yamanaka
Nickname/Alias: Poltergeist , Ghost
Gender: Female
Age and date of birth: 10, born 1/13/65
Age Appearance: Young, her body looks ten years old
Sexuality: Heterosexual

Parents: Inori and Shinobu Yamanaka
Length and build: 4’02” with a small build
Weight: 65 lb
Favorite weather and season: A clear summer day, without a cloud in the sky to hide the sun.



Village: Konohagakure
Birthplace:Konohagakure
Organization: -

Clan/Bloodline: Yamanaka


Rank:Genin

Chakra Nature: Wind



Appearance:



Personality: Rei makes friends easily, like really easily. She’s never once met a person who she didn’t like, and she’s never met a person who didn’t like her back. Rei is excitable and bubbly, but also can be quite shy around people that look scary. She very much judges books be their covers. To her, if a person looks “pretty” (she calls males and females pretty) then they must be good. Her favorite hobby is making up stories about people she sees, even if they can hear her, especially if they can hear her. She really doesn’t care about consequences, and there isn’t a punishment she can’t either make into a game or avoid entirely. Her unapologetic nature carries over to when she’s in a fight, never taking anything seriously, always dancing around and acting like everything’s a game.



History: Rei’s parents run a flower shop in Konohagakure, Yamanaka Flowers. Most of the customers that came through the doors really only came to see little Rei, and more specifically, what antics she was getting away with that day. It probably helped sales that she gave out free hugs to anyone who left with flowers, and usually to those who didn’t. Rei’s mother likes dressing her up as if she’s a doll, and she’s also the one who bought Rei the gigantic hat that has become a permanent part of her attire.

Rei became proficient in the Yamanaka clan’s basic technique early on, and most of her childhood was spent trying to shoot her mind into various people and things. She got yelled at a lot after people found out they’d been possessed. It was during these experiments that she created her signature custom technique. Her parents saw her as ready, so they put her through the academy, and now Rei’s a Genin. Her parents really just needed the break of her being out of the house for a few hours a day. She’s a real handful.

Theme Song:


Weapons/Items[u][/u]:



Skills/Abilities
Good chakra control
Very little chakra
Not very athletic
Physically the weakest in her class
Smart and quick to improvise



Special Traits
Talks about people like they aren't standing right there
Good at having fun
Names any inanimate object that she brings to life Mr. / Ms. (insert object name here)
Is prone to spontaneous hugging
Makes paper necklaces and bracelets that she gives to people she meets


Kekkei Genkai:

Name of Kekkei Genkai: -
Clan: -
Description: -



Jutsu:



Custom Jutsu

@IVIasterjay

Nice, two CS's. Here is my review :

- Taiyou “Tai” Munashii

1. ) The personality and history are for me alright. So no need in my opinion to change that.

2.) The skill are a bit off, so to say. Would you mind changing it to 'high speed', instead of faster than a speeding bullet. I doubt somebody would like to move at that speed as it would not only result in a tunnel vision, but some other nasty traits as well. Same goes for the nintaijutsu. If you would please change that, that would be great.

3.) I am saying no to : Fire Release: Great Fire Annihilation. Great Fire destruction is already something I find a bit much, but am willing to accept it. If you would please remove Fire Annihilation, that would work for me.

4.)

There are some custom jutsu I find a bit too powerful. Not to mention that I would like to see a number of handseals, as using powerful jutsu without a handseal or such is a bit too much, in my book.

1. Fire Release Armor ;
Concept of the jutsu is fine with me. Nothing wrong with that. I do think the fact that anybody near him for 30 seconds is a bit too much. Same goes for that he can melt anything that touches. If he is really fast, then that means he can just try to stay close for 30 seconds and then your dead, which means the weakness isn't really that great for a S ranked jutsu. If you would please mind to tone it a bit down with the power, then I would be fine with it.

2.) I think the speed needs to be toned down a bit. If he can augment his speed by the use of fire, while already being fast that would a bit too much. I prefer you would say the range of the jutsu, as flamethrowers can go for some length and it would be nice to know how far this jutsu can go.

3.) Solar Flare is able to cut like a blade is bit iffy. You need some super heat to cut with fire through material as it often sets things on fire, rather then cutting through it. At least, like I get your jutsu.

4.) Fire Release: Rising Dragon sounds more like a S ranked technique to me. Not to mention that I find it a bit too much that the dragon can re-create the dragon if somebody manages to get him out of the ring. The fire itself is already a good defense, but that he also can cover an area with a blanket of fire is a bit too much.

I need to go to work soon, so I will review your genin later. ;)

Haha, not surprising considering I wrote most of Taiyou at 3:00 in the morning. I'll go in and rewrite most of both characters in a bit. I forgot to include some things as well.

Am I missing something? It tells me on my end that the OOC has 228 posts, but I can only count 4 on this page, not including mine. And I know that each page is meant to have 20 posts, so this one ought to be comprised of 8 if that's true. Did the mods come through here?

Anyways, enough waiting for my squad, I guess I'll have to take point once again

i think Alice is missing. im calling a search party!!!

@IVIasterjay

Is alright. Please pm the staff of the RP once you have made edits to your CS's. Also place the link in that pm. Way easier to make us retrieve it and review it.

@LJN92

Some person started and wanted a drama. I called in the mods as I am not in the mood to deal with it, as it has little do with the RP and what not. If you have any questions regarding the matter, send the staff of the RP a pm and we'll do our best to answer you asap.

@Shadow

Yes, Alice has been a bit sick. She will likely post the Breakdown tomorrow as well.

As for the teams, I'm trying to keep the roster updated. PM your sensei (player) if nothing is happening etc. Else let me know what your current status is and I will do something about it asap! Promised ;)

aww i hope she feels better soon! im going to make her something that will make her happy when she comes back.

I know this might come as a shock...but I think I will post tonight. Im still confused as to where I need to post.

As far as I understand we basically have 2 arcs going on at the same time. This one on the guild is basically after a short timeskip/finishing of the arc and on the backup site we're basically finishing the arc. I'm just confused as to where I need to post at the moment.

Anyone checked my OC yet? Previous page.

@Masaki,

Its better to pm the GM's a link to your CS if you want them to review it. It saves us time fishing and makes it easier to respond more quickly with a review.

quick question, team roster updated? j8cob posted? Alice posted? (in short:) My turn again?

after quickly scouting the OOC i see i was the last one to post for team 7 and that Ezuri has no contact with the other hyuuga whatsoever.
and that ill wait for Rini, Kimi, however Alices character is called before posting with Kazen.
soooo, answered my questions myself already

Did you even finish your Jounin? Because I can't find him and without a sheet you are not allowed to post. If you did, can you link me to it so I can properly fix the roster? ^^

Is there a series of fighting posts going on right now IC because all I see for like 3 pages are two people going back and forth.

Gamer, do you read specific posts of specific people or?
Try to read again. Teams are meeting up.

Still waiting for teams and approval of third edited genin