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@Inkarnate I'd definitely agree with this. It seems every wants to be the alien with the gimmick, like the Spock of our crew. But human characetrs are also needed. Your Chief of Security is approved by the way, she's free to take the Lt. Commander rank and double as our Second Officer.

@Alan Hawke@Hannibal Looking forward to seeing what you come up with.
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>>has 31 years of experience like Captain Antares
>>is only lieutenant commander

Sounds like some CHARACTER DEPTH and DIALOGUE OPTIONS
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I originally made this character as a head of security but I was a little late and I overestimated the power of the dibs. So I settle with First Officer while I cry myself to sleep.
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@Warborn123 This is not literally a Star Trek RP, so feel free to play a character from some kind of warrior alien race, but they can't literally be the Klingons. You can create a new alien race like some of the other players, or be a human for a particularly war-like colony with the same personality.
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The aim of this RP is to capture the style and tone of Star Trek, without it taking place in the Star Trek universe.
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On an unrelated note, it is pretty amusing to imagine the three currently accepted characters have similar terms of experience and likely graduated from Starfleet at the same time. I imagine that's a story hook that can have some promising character development/relations going for it.
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Sorry, hopefully this is enough. I'm very busy today. I wasn't sure if it's enough but since none of us are too familiar with this universe just yet, I intend to build on his life more as we learn more.
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@ZeusTheMoose Shoot, I will have to be the klangons then, the completely original alien race that isn't based on the klingons. (just kidding)
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(Not my best work, I can revamp if needed)
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@ZeusTheMoose here's a updated version


On a side note, if I can't be a First officer, can I be Xaone's second-in-command?. Like another soldier.
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@Hannibal Engineer Hong is accepted. One small change though. It's the Martian Legion not the Martian Federation.

@Alan Hawke Science Officer Sloane is accepted.

@Warborn123 Commander Roger River is going to be our First Officer. It makes sense that a Martian Legion representative would be offered the position, as a sign of good faith in the Alliance. Roger and Thaddeus will also have a good dynamic given that one is a hard edged soldier and the other is an idyllic explorer that resents militarism. Roger being sketpical of the Alliance mission at first makes sense, somebody that violent and militaristic likely wouldn't appreciate the Captain's notion that exploration and discovery can be a means of bridging the divide.

@Gunther We still need somebody at the helm, given Glenn's skillset she's a perfect fit. She'll have to take the rank of LIeutenant since she wouldn't be a ranking bridge officer, but she's welcome abaord. Accepted under those terms.
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And with that, our bridge crew has been more-or-less rounded out. ALthough a second character at the Helm could still fit it. For pilot banter purposes.

Once everyone has made the slight adjustments to their CS and posted them all in the CHars tab we'll begin. I'll make the first IC post sometime this weekend. It's THanksgiving here in Canada so I have some family obligations. Very mild obligations, it won't be a problem.
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@Hannibal Engineer Hong is accepted. One small change though. It's the Martian Legion not the Martian Federation.

@Alan Hawke Science Officer Sloane is accepted.

@Warborn123 Commander Roger River is going to be our First Officer. It makes sense that a Martian Legion representative would be offered the position, as a sign of good faith in the Alliance. Roger and Thaddeus will also have a good dynamic given that one is a hard edged soldier and the other is an idyllic explorer that resents militarism. Roger being sketpical of the Alliance mission at first makes sense, somebody that violent and militaristic likely wouldn't appreciate the Captain's notion that exploration and discovery can be a means of bridging the divide.

@Gunther We still need somebody at the helm, given Glenn's skillset she's a perfect fit. She'll have to take the rank of LIeutenant since she wouldn't be a ranking bridge officer, but she's welcome abaord. Accepted under those terms.


It was originally Stoyer but Sloane actually sounds a lot better. Kenneth Sloane. I like that. Thanks actually lmao. :D Also, what would his rank be?
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I just get the impression from Roger’s FC that he should be twenty years older.

@Alan Hawke Lieutenant would seem the bar minimum, I wager.
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I just get the impression from Roger’s FC that he should be twenty years older.

You are sort of correct. 30 is very young for a Commander. I was a Captain (Equivalent to Lieutenant for our purpose) when I was 30. A Commander would be 35 at the minimum, but more likely late 30s or even early 40s.

I'll rewrite Damaris' history and age to make her more appropriate for her position as helmsman. 37, may be old enough for a Commander/First Officer, but too old for a helmsman. I may even change the image because Gina Ravera is actually a bit older than this.

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I realized that Roger's age made no sense, so I changed his age from 30 to 55, he is now a true crotchety old fart
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@Alan Hawke Lieutenant would be his rank.

@Warborn123 Yeah I meant to bring that up, but glad to see the change made. To be that bald at 30 would be pretty rough...
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I will make the changes needed and post it to the characters tab when I'm off work.
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@Alan Hawke True I have no idea why I said Sloane. To be honest I liked Stoner more if only because Sloane is so similar to Xaone. Your character, your call. I'll just refer to you as Ken haha
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