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Good luck.


Thank

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Until then, back it all up with what energy you have left. I hope you have an external hard drive of some sort.


Didn't get the chance.
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I read your IA species book. I think the abilities of the Tzarians might well have been mentioned early on, but other than that I think the races are interesting and well-developed. If they have special cultures of their own, especially customs, those are really important to the identity of a race--not just its abilities.
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I read your IA species book. I think the abilities of the Tzarians might well have been mentioned early on, but other than that I think the races are interesting and well-developed. If they have special cultures of their own, especially customs, those are really important to the identity of a race--not just its abilities.


To be fair, if someone told me there was a race of humans in Czechoslovakia that had super powers and could psychokinetically destroy objects and then told me they had a rich culture with good food, I'd probably care a lot more about the powers than the food ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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I read your IA species book. I think the abilities of the Tzarians might well have been mentioned early on, but other than that I think the races are interesting and well-developed. If they have special cultures of their own, especially customs, those are really important to the identity of a race--not just its abilities.


Thanks for looking at it!

It's far from a finished product. I expect the final draft of it will have a minimum of 20 pages. There's loads of stuff I plan to dive into.
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To be fair, if someone told me there was a race of humans in Czechoslovakia that had super powers and could psychokinetically destroy objects and then told me they had a rich culture with good food, I'd probably care a lot more about the powers than the food ¯\_(ツ)_/¯


Yeah, but when you're actually writing them? Who they are is more important than what they do to distinguish them as a race in readers' minds.
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pls be doing rythian
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Yeah, but when you're actually writing them? Who they are is more important than what they do to distinguish them as a race in readers' minds.


You think so? If I'm reading the book, the dude who can blow things up with his mind distinguishes him way more for me than the dude who sings traditional songs on the eighth of September. I'm not saying it's the case for everyone, but for me, actions speak louder than culture.
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pls be doing rythian


I'm not in a position where I can switch accounts and post in every scenario I'm involved in atm, so I'm posting everywhere that isn't my own plot so that I can focus on everything as much as I need while I multitask.
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I'm not in a position where I can switch accounts and post in every scenario I'm involved in atm, so I'm posting everywhere that isn't my own plot so that I can focus on everything as much as I need while I multitask.


oh ok

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You think so? If I'm reading the book, the dude who can blow things up with his mind distinguishes him way more for me than the dude who sings traditional songs on the eighth of September. I'm not saying it's the case for everyone, but for me, actions speak louder than culture.


I like both *shrug*
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oh ok

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I like both *shrug*


Tastes.
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PHYSICS IS DUMB CUZ IT MAKES ME FEEL DUMB
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PHYSICS IS DUMB CUZ IT MAKES ME FEEL DUMB


do you need
help
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do you need
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No, I just hate how simple some of the things you stare at for a long time can end up being so simple.
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No, I just hate how simple some of the things you stare at for a long time can end up being so simple.


me in calculus
five hours on one problem only to realise double integrals were so much simpler than I thought
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PHYSICS IS DUMB CUZ IT MAKES ME FEEL DUMB


Physics is dumb because we can't break it.
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bed, ned
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8 AM tomorrow, so night.
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jacob
i gave these relevant details like the Venus fly traps at the beginning of the test
aron doesn't have to be the only one with the answers
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Finally started playing the copy of AM2R that I downloaded, and its got me hooked.
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Finally started playing the copy of AM2R that I downloaded, and its got me hooked.


AM2R?
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