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@Kitty You got a few disconnects here and there where it looks like you went back and added or edited things. Namely in the middle of the Appearance section there's a paragraph that starts with talking about her height, then a couple sentences afterwards breaks up between one topic and discussing her height again before breaking back into another topic. You also reference Katalina's sister by two different names later in the background section lol.

Other than that, it looks alright enough to me.
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@Kitty You got a few disconnects here and there where it looks like you went back and added or edited things. Namely in the middle of the Appearance section there's a paragraph that starts with talking about her height, then a couple sentences afterwards breaks up between one topic and discussing her height again before breaking back into another topic. You also reference Katalina's sister by two different names later in the background section lol.

Other than that, it looks alright enough to me.


Sorry about that, there were a few things i realized I forgot that I tried to add once I had finished. I will definitely read through it again and make it flow better in the morning. Also the names were probably due to lovely autocorrect by my browsers grammar add on, it really didn't like the names I had lol. Thank you for catching the ones I failed to catch and fix myself.
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Just so nobody is blindsided, Alden's C.S has undergone some (approved changes). The mpst important is the addition of heirlooms.

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@Lionhearted@Alfhedil@HushedWhispers
I went back and reread everything and edited it so hopefully it is better now. Please let me know if there is anything else I missed! Thank you!
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@Kitty You're good to toss the CS over into the Characters tab.
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I'm close to beginning the RP as I have my character finished and I'm starting on the IC post!

@Divine Darkness@CollectorOfMyst@CrystalApple

How are the characters coming along?
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@Lionhearted I mean, I never stated that I was making a character sheet. I was being a slightly-less-than-silent lurker. However, I have been thinking about creating one.
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@Lionhearted I mean, I never stated that I was making a character sheet. I was being a slightly-less-than-silent lurker. However, I have been thinking about creating one.


Sorry. Saw your interest and assumed so. If you make one, then just make sure to post it here. If you don't, then you don't.

Thanks for replying anyway.
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@HushedWhispers@Alfhedil@ihinka@Polaris North@hero@WolfLover@Queentze@Monacho@Kitty

Alrighty! I have finished my character, Ambrosia Sanguis, and I made the introductory post. We have officially pushed the ball so it's actually rolling now! lol? Everyone is now free for posting, that has had an accepted CS of course.

We are still open for recruitment so if anyone that hasn't made their CS yet, you are still welcome to join, but I wanted to get this RP started before the interest was lost.

Have fun everyone~!


Also, if anyone has any trouble with posting, contact me or any of the GMs for assistance!
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Will try and post over the Week-end :) still thinking about my post/s.
Good choice for your Vampire Leader :)
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Sorry for the double post, but another note:

Please PM other people if you find that your character and theirs would have an already established relationship, prior to the start of this RP. I strongly encourage you to do so!
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I FINALLY DID IT. Sorry, I've been working for DAYS on this guy and I finally finished! @Lionhearted, tell me if you need anything more from me for him. I'd be more than happy to change it up.
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I'm close to beginning the RP as I have my character finished and I'm starting on the IC post!

@Divine Darkness@CollectorOfMyst@CrystalApple

How are the characters coming along?


Turns out my character is too identical to @Hero's character in the way I wished to use the Compel ability and that I wanted her to be a kind of arrogant vixen. (Yes, I too am creating a female vampire.) Hero and I also had similar ideas for our characters' occupation as I was thinking of having my character run a night club.

So I'm trying to figure out what my character's role will/should be in the coven and in Salem as well as how to make her a little more different than Aimee. I believe once I figure that out and can get moving and complete my CS.

The only things I have settled on so far as of this post is that she was born in Transylvania, she is half Romani (gypsy), and that she was in Romania during WWII.

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<Snipped quote by Lionhearted>

Turns out my character is too identical to @Hero's character in the way I wished to use the Compel ability and that I wanted her to be a kind of arrogant vixen. (Yes, I too am creating a female vampire.) Hero and I also had similar ideas for our characters' occupation as I was thinking of having my character run a night club.

So I'm trying to figure out what my character's role will/should be in the coven and in Salem as well as how to make her a little more different than Aimee. I believe once I figure that out and can get moving and complete my CS.

The only things I have settled on so far as of this post is that she was born in Transylvania, she is half Romani (gypsy), and that she was in Romania during WWII.


My b fam.

EDIT: I mean I think you should do what you want but it's up to you.
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@PrincePierce Looks good to me, could use more guys in Salem at the moment lol.
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@Lionhearted Should let you know that I’ve decided not to create my hunter character since we already have a few but I’ll be happy to fill in anywhere else. :) Probably the vampire section.
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@Queentze
I made the discovery, after many thoughts of finding the face claim of your character familiar, that our face claims were in a photoshoot together. What a coincidence lol.
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@Kitty Oh they were, that is a coincidence. Great mind think alike right lol.
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My Character is up, if anyone wishes to look her over! :D
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Can we start posting or should we wait?
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