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I managed it and I feel so much better now ^^

If I remember correctly she saw he's first attempts at magic just before the capture, in my head that'd be a yes to your question. Though a note I'd like to make is that right now his magic isn't controlled, at all. It'll be a withering mass that acts on its on, the concentration and control needed to keep it in check are gone. Oooh, thud fight scene is gonna be good x3
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Not quite what I was asking, but good enough, I suppose, so long as you're okay with the details I put in there for what that manifestation of power looks like. That provided sentence did not give me a good visual on what Thea would see, only what Byrce felt. So let me know if you want/need me to change anything!

Oh, and yep! She was the first person to see his ice powers. Like I said, I was unsure if it was a sensation--and only a sensation--for Byrce or if it rolled over into a visual that Thea would see. So, thanks for the answer!

Edit: I did get the rough time correct, yes? At the beginning of dawn?
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I still have to work on descriptions so any help would be great :)

What I might have trouble with is how to describe his powers acting on their own while he's not in control (if that makes sense) time to put my thinking cap on x3

And yes, you did great! Now they've met again and are in the same time-frame xP
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I can't really give suggestions at the moment on descriptions without anything specific to go off of. The only advice would I have to offer at the moment is to write what you "see." Visualize it in your head, like a movie, then turned those pictures into words. A motion picture, only with letters instead of colors.

Hmm. For how his powers would act... How are they typically controlled? Maybe they would act like a wild animal of their own, acting with the primal instincts of the wolf. Lashing out with a purpose, but perhaps less of a plan. Not as focused, but still enough to be capable of recognizing what the wolf's after, and subconsciously working toward that goal. Wild and out of control, yet centered on its feral desires. Maybe it would even accidentally get in the wolf's way, or unintentionally lash out at him if they both acted at the same time or just close enough to collide. Pretty sure I just repeated myself a few times in different words, but hey. I tried. xD
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Thought I'd drop by and say happy belated Thanksgiving, merry Christmas, and happy New Year! xD Yeash. Major holidays. They and I have a love-hate relationship, I think.
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I took a break from the Guild for the holidays, things get hectic herd so I thought it for the best. I'm back and ready ;)

Happy late holidays to you as well ^^
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I pretty much did the same. Heh. Got on a couple times, but did not get anything written.

Many thanks! ^.^
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Twins x3

Of course! Anytime ^^
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Just wanted to say hello and make sure you're still alive out there somewhere, in some sense of the word!
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I'm finally a able to log on x,x it's been a week since I've been on here, so I'm alive just haven't been able to get on x3
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Yeah, the site's been acting stupid for pretty much everyone, from what I can tell. Hopefully that gets taken care of soon!
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