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Whelp, my image is not what I was looking for... and will have to photoshop it... but damn, finding anything even remotely more useable was just seemingly impossible.
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Moved to char tab.
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@DoomFlavoredI don't mind if Maul becomes a Sith Lord a few years earlier, but it looks like Burning Kitty wants to play Maul, so you'll have to speak to her.

Just post the CS here, so I can approve it.
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Alrighty.
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Hey there, what do you think of the things i suggested? Darth Maul having an apprentice, and possibly having achieved the rank of Sith Lord a couple years earlier in comparison to canon timeline.
Don't think you'd really need to change anything CS wise since what you had was more or less not tied to dates.
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Could always do like Vader did in legends and have a secret apprentice that Sidious doesn’t know about.
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@TheUnknowable Updated Maul with a list of Force Powers and combat techniques.

Also added a ship my Mando Ex-Jedi.
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I am going to attempt to make my CS tomorrow as i don't have work. Hopefully it will let me post it.
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@TheUnknowable@Burning Kitty Here's the CS. Let me know if anything seems off or can be changed to better fit anything.



Name: Xalles Sunflare

Species: Human

Age : 11

Force: Apprentice, Sith

Force techniques:
Force Valor - Some proficiency
Force Speed - Low prociciency
Force Jump - Some Proficiency
Battle Precognition - Minimal Proficiency
Telekenisis - Low proficiency

Combat Techniques:
Form 7, Juyo - Moderate Proficiency
Form 4, Ataru - Low Proficiency
Jar'Kai - Low Proficiency

Equipment:
Lightsaber
Blaster Rifle with long range scope

Personality:
Xalles is nearly always bitter and angry, showing hatred that is just as often legitimate as it is sometimes forced for appearances. While submissive to the will of his master, he treats others with the desire to gain power and control over them, not afraid to resort to cruelty to do so. Occasionally he is able to find great joy in relatively simple things, or company that he grows fond of, but this is rare, and never while his master is nearby.

Bio:
Xalles was born on Nar Shaddaa from a slave. His very early years were made as pleasant as possible by his mother, though there was only so much she could do given their conditions and her position. The relatively kind years ended when they were sold off at the age of five, a woman in dark clothing having visited and taken some kind of interest in him. Something about sensing he could be useful. The woman turned out to be a sith under the title of Darth Maul, who took Xalles to be her apprentice. As a first measure to instill hate into the boy, the woman killed his mother in front of him, slowly dragging a lightsaber through her shoulder and into her abdomen before going all the way through.

Almost immediately, not even letting Xalles time to grieve, the Sith Lord began training him, forcing him to learn how to fight. Xalles was beaten and battered, put at his lowest point to instill hate and despair in him. Unfortunately it worked. Xalles has been formed into a sith apprentice over the last six years, being trained mostly in combat with a lightsaber in often fatal battles, which the boy took to much more easily than the use of the force. Even the force came easier to him when using it to fuel brutal melee combat, amplifying his body's abilities. His strongest ability being Valor, which by now can surpass the majority of adult human men.

Now, Xalles follows his master to assist her in her mission, and to slaughter her enemies. Hopefully there will even be an opportunity to face the hated Jedi.
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Could always do like Vader did in legends and have a secret apprentice that Sidious doesn’t know about.


Oh and I left the stuff revolving around Sidious purposefuly vague for you to be able to decide what action Maul has taken with this. Whether she's told Xalles about her own master, and what those plans are. If any.
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@DoomFlavored Love the last name.

In Legends Sidious began training Maul while Sidious was still an apprentice. Technically a violation of the Rule of 2. Plagueis allowed it because Maul was trained to be expendable, ultimately led to Plagueis' downfall. I'm thinking the same thing applies here.
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@Burning Kitty Thanks :)

Sounds good to me. I figured Maul would train Xalles to be very expendable, just as or even more so than she is. Were you thinking that Maul would have told him about Sidious with plans to overtake him later? Or kept him in the dark?

And I think you were saying you also were thinking that Maul was keeping Xalles a secret from Sidious as well.
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Also. As this is a Star Wars rp......... I am obligated to post this.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U9t-slLl30E It must be done.
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Maul definately hasn’t told Sunglare about Sidious.

If Maul didn’t tell Sidious, I’m thinking Sidious knows anyway and is bidding his time on how to deal with it.
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If Sidious (secretly) knows about it, probably would deal with it in the Sidious way heh. Wait and see how much potential he has and decide which of the two he'd rather have for himself :P
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Could make Maul and Sunflare dual to the death.
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Heh. Xalles would get shrecked right now but 10 years down the road... would be a ridiculous fight.
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So uh... is my CS okay?
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@DoomFlavored that would be up to @TheUnknowable
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@DoomFlavoredSorry, I forgot that I needed to approve some CSs. Your's is approved.

@Burning KittyMaul Also.
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@TheUnknowable@DoomFlavored Yes I named the Jedi Knight being hunted after the Marvel Superhero who has a movie coming out soon. I needed a name and it was literally the first one to come to mind.
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