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Hi Perp I was confused and wrote this up, I hope it doesn’t come across as a debate of your suggestions but a request on clarifications.



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Seems fair to me, I was a bit hyperbolic in my original run through of it. I would cut those bits you suggested, but I still think she's still a little powerful. To me, I think her Personality is the weakest bit of the CS and needs more depth. If her only two tenets are that she's friendlybto those she likes and all business to everyone else it makes her a bit two dimensional. I would compensate with some character flaws in her Personality. Just flesh it out a bit more.

I should probably just cut and paste "add a couple of character flaws" at this point.
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Paladin and Rai have been helping me test drive her personality

I know Yvonne's is short but frankly most of the personalities I've ever written up never survived my first interaction
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You got like the exo suit from stalker!
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@RumikoOhara Alright, that's fine. I've had that problem before. Just be sure to develop her personality as the game goes on.
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The "pilot without peer" bit is still in but apart from that it's all good.
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The "pilot without peer" bit is still in but apart from that it's all good.


lol, sorry forgot that
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Ay folks, we're looking for two more players.
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can we get some roleplay please, we are great people who want roleplay.
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two more players first - roleplay second
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