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@Legion02 sounds interesting, it will be nice to have a more 'evil' nation.

@UltraCraftGames thanks, I hope you understand that you may need to make your writing a better standard to be able to participate properly.
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Welp i dont know how i should flesh out my application because as i suck at making long posts.
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@UltraCraftGames just try and create a bit more backstory for your nation and characters, we can't see into your head and know everything about them so we need you to tell us. Also being based on a set of flying islands with powerful dragons(even if they are smaller) and the ability to summon resources out of nowhere makes you completely overpowered, try to make things slightly more realistic.
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Ill try to get something up
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ima try again

Name of nation:Draconia

Name of leader:Lord Draconus
Brief introduction to leader:Draconus is a very old dragonborn. When the dragonborn clans were combined into this one nation he was the one who started the operation. Most of the nations decisions are decided by a council so he is just the main member of the council. Hes also the only person in the nation to have a dragon thats not for military purposes.

(Name of other character:Cryst
Brief introduction to other character:Cryst is a struggling apprentice to a sage. Usually spending hours trying to learn magic but its very hard for him. He wishes to become an Archmage but with his struggle with magic most people think its impossible.

Culture:Draconia is quite the land of magic. Usually everyone tries to become a mage. Usually most people who have trouble learning magic are treated like outcasts and theres few jobs they can get. Draconia however does try to offer the best magical education as it can.
Usually their buildings are mostly made of stone. Clothing is mostly a mix of yellow and blue.

Religion:Basically all of them worship a dragon god called Faurus who they believe created the universe and everything in it. Most people will have a special bible devoted to him and banners. Alot of artists in Draconia paint about Faurus.

Attitude to magic:They see magic as some sort of force given to them by Faurus. They believe magic can doe anything if its strong enough and they seem to absolutely hate people who dont like magic. People that cant use magic in Draconia are usually treated like outcasts and can get very few jobs.

Brief history:Before there used to be alot of dragonborn clans and they all were in war with each other trying to gain the title of the superior clan. Once a leader of a clan who was Lord Draconus started thinking that maybe he could try to unite the clans and stop the war. He eventually started going to every single dragonborn clan telling them how great peace would be. Till eventually they all united under one nation.

Military:Most of the nation is swordsman and mages. Dragon riders doe exist but dragons are only used in the most elite forces of the nation. There currently exist only 5 groups that use dragons. Usually most dragons are even smaller then normal regular only used by the highest ranking generals.

Government:The goverment is mostly a democracy. There is a council of 13 people including Lord draconus who is the leader of the council. The council decides most of the nations actions.

Main sources of income:The dragonborns that have trouble using magic are usually the ones doing labor trying to get materials. Usually the tools are enchanted to make the process a bit more efficient. They also offer magical services to people to gain resources as theyre a nation that uses alot of magic.

Current goal:Theyre goal is to become the worlds leading nation in magic. They will constantly try to get better and better at magic and make more magic schools and stuff like that.
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I'd like to join, if I may.
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@Kipsateking

Usually a map is provided first thing and we draw on it as part of our application process, but OK I guess...
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@Dinh AaronMk I wanted to do it differently so that people aren't so limited in their options, it's just a small change and it shouldn't make too much of a difference.
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@Golem yeah sure there's still space.
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@UltraCraftGames that's a lot better now, I'd just like a bit more detail if possible.
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I'm at my work on my phone. Changed a bit of it. Am of the mindset to let other players choose what diplomatic challenges Treblea has to start.

Also, replaced fish resource with flatland horses on their plains. Can't officially edit in the horse bit from my phone unfortunately. Fish seems too OP to give a country that might end up being landl9cked when an official map is drawn. So if my nation wants fish, magic items, rice, masonry (they don't have quarries or stonemills yet), et al., then they'll have to either venture forth or get off their lazy asses and ride those horses to go trade with other nations.

Lastly, in keeping with my "I won't create another charrie on RPGuild" bit, any and all citizen reps of Treblea are going to not be all that fleshed out by necessity. This restriction may be lifted if the Trebleans host a giant festival.
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Hmm i already spent alot of time thinking of details to add i dont know what i could add more. If theres anything specific you want me to add ill try to think of it.
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Hmm i already spent alot of time thinking of details to add i dont know what i could add more. If theres anything specific you want me to add ill try to think of it.


Try using the nation sheet template provided by @Lady Amalthea . She's amazingly detailed and thinks of almost everything.
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@Kipsateking Cool! I've made a map we could use, if you like it.

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@Golem I was already making my own, but I will definitely use that at least as a base for mine.
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Hey everyone here's a map update:

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@Golem are you going for a more ottoman/middle eastern style (purely based on the pictures).
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@Kipsateking Yes, kind of. But not entirely.
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Ok so to generalise we have:
Spanish
Russians/Germans
Eastern Europeans
Music people? (Probably linked to the Spanish and Eastern Europeans)
Mountain dwarves
Wasteland orcs
Ottoman dwarves
Fancy dragon people
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