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I believe that this character isn't going to fit in with Skybreak. While little matters besides results in this organization, the Overseer cannot draw any benefits to having this member added to the squad. You are more than welcome to rework the character or create a new one but this one will not work, sorry.

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Ahh so i need to fix the benefits ok thank you ;)

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Less just about the benefits and more that this guy is blatantly a criminal who's in this for glory rather than saving the world. It's even more unstable than an already accepted character so the Overseer sees it as a liability more than a benefit.

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Skybreak Dossier

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Date: 05/16/97

Division: BATTLEMAGE


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TITLE:Mr. Jericho Steele
FULL NAME:Jericho Kilroy Steele
KNOWN ALIAS':RAGER
D.O.B:10/19/67
P.O.B:Detroit, Michigan
ETHNICITY:Hungarian
SPECIES:Human

AGE:30
SEX:Male
BLOOD TYPE:A+

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Conducting Doctor: Dr. Issolas

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HEIGHT:6'7"
WEIGHT:350
HAIR COLOUR:BROWN
EYE COLOUR:HAZEL

PHYSICAL FEATS:- Very strong, appears to be jacked.
- Huge in height, good reach and swing.
- High pain resistance and good stamina.

PHYSICAL MALADIES:- Pretty slow
- A big target for gun fire
- Robotic legs that can be destroyed
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PHYSICAL FEATURES:Six foot seven, 350 pounds. He appears very muscular and somewhat charismatic and handsome, although he looks rough around the edges.

- Two Powerlifter legs 

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Conducting Doctor: Dr. Reesa

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PSYCHOLOGICAL EVALUATION: Loud, like a typical amercian he is nationalistic to america even though we are united in space. Team player but only with people who are like minded like him, enjoys going to the gym and purusing 'hot women'. He can be calm and nice and even compassionate but he feels like he has a higher purpose in life and is deeply religious in a sense. Not to any man or xeno religion but his own. He is deeply intrested in aliens and supports them apparently.
PSYCHOLOGICAL DEFECTS: - Low IQ, 75-90.
- High Religious Fevor
- Arrogant.
-  Occasionally rude
- Uses drugs and combat drugs
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APPLICABLE SKILLS:- Heavy Weapons Trained
- High Pain Tolerance
- Good communications
- Technology Savvy
- Teamplayer
POSITION IN THE TEAM:Tank
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REQUISITIONS

PENDING APPROVAL FROM OVERSEER


ITEMS:x1 Blastfuck Minigun (5mm)

x1 Crater-Electro Maul

x1 Corporate grade exosuit and armor

- One pound of coke a week.

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Suggestion to work on proof reading your post! There were points where I had to reread thing several times to get what was intended.

I don't know if English isn't your first language, but if you have a friend you can help proofread your work - or even use our own roleplay members to assist you - then I recommend you do so.

I hate having to exclude someone but if this sort of thing is persistent it can introduce problems in the flow of the roleplay :(

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Please create your CS's objectively. That is, from the viewpoint of a medical professional making clear, blunt points to each feature!

Skybreak Dossier

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Date: 05/16/97

Division: BATTLEMAGE

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TITLE: Sergeant Culicid Anjus si'Seval
FULL NAME:si'Seval - Anjus - Culicid
KNOWN ALIAS':Mosquito
D.O.B:02/11/44
P.O.B: Xic'Si Homeworld
ETHNICITY:Culicid has for his kind, darker flesh and his armor seemed to have adapted to sunlight, as Culicid chose to spend more time outside, in the light of the sun of his homeworld.
SPECIES: Xic'Si 

AGE:53
SEX:Male
BLOOD TYPE:AB-negative

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Conducting Doctor: Dr. Issolas

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HEIGHT:6' 2"
WEIGHT: 219 lbs 
HAIR COLOUR:none
EYE COLOUR:none

PHYSICAL FEATS:Retains usual species immunities and traits: able to see in multiple directions in a wide field of view

resistant to electricity and thermal changes to some degree

Medium strength sharp attacks are mostly ineffective

Culicid also proves to be a very good runner, being able to cross over 100 meters in 9.30 seconds. Also proves to be proficient with navigating narrow paths. Also is an excellent specimen when it comes to marching; Culicid was able to march at least 21 kilometers carrying a load of 80 lbs.

Culicid is also effective at sneaking up on others, choosing to remain absolutely silent at time, even as he moves on his own legs, he avoids wearing any leg or feet wear. The subject seems good at being able to follow people without being noticed, Culicid exhibiting usual behavior of an infantryman stalking his enemy.

Culicid stated that he was experienced with conducting ambushes or shadowing enemy infantry or movements. This was justified by his military history as well as his own being a very good runner and long distance marcher. Culicid stated that the reason why he was and remained a sergeant was that he enjoyed his duties. Repeatedly offered promotions but Culicid declined to both his own kind and to the UFH.

Further justified by his history as a reconnaissance trooper in the ranks of the Xic'Si before transferring to the UFH, continuing to serve in a reconnaissance role until he chose to enter this team. 

PHYSICAL MALADIES:Unable to conduct fine tasks. Cannot determine or appreciate fine art.  Blunt attacks seem to deliver devastating internal damage and chitin damage which takes extensive time to repair. Unable to use optical, neurological or leg-based cybernetics.

PHYSICAL FEATURES:Culicid is a curiously beautiful individual, having painted his own armor (on his head and on his shoulders) with some left over paint (which Culicid claimed he bought from a small child). He is also tall, slightly heavier than average and seems very well built, conclusion thus based on his time as a soldier. He is of 50 years of age roughly and Culicid reports that although some of his chitin is becoming weaker, he states that he still is able to serve and wishes to continue until the day that he thinks he cannot due to either death or weakening chitin. Culicid has some scars on his sides and legs as well as arms. However, Culicid proves to still be able to hold a rifle well and do other infantry related duties. Finally, Culicid seems to be obsessed with having to wear or at least attach a few feathers to his head, saying that it helps to keep his mind cool.

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Conducting Doctor: Dr. Reesa

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PSYCHOLOGICAL EVALUATION:"Friendly most especially towards children and females. Seems incredibly curious of humans and enjoys their company. Subject is at good terms with his own kind but still would prefer the company of other creatures not related to his kind. Subject tends to be irritated when not allowed to spend time out in the sun. Subject is also opposed to smoking of all kinds and would prove to be hostile towards anyone smoking anything. Drugs of any kind that prove to cause mental issues or withdrawal symptoms seem to be a subject of hostility for him as well."
PSYCHOLOGICAL DEFECTS:None so far. However, subject shows extreme hostility towards smoking and people who smoke. Narcotics is also a big trigger for the subject.
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Contributions to Skybreak

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APPLICABLE SKILLS:Infantry combat, cleaning infantry equipment, maintaining infantry weapons, other basic infantry skills. Subject also seems proficient at dancing, sprinting, long distance marching and running, some lifting and cutting various vegetables or fruits. Subject also seems to be practicing how to fix prosthetic limbs after watching a man in a prosthetic limbs shop fixing one for a woman the subject identified as one of the soldiers that fought by his side.

Possible skills and things to consider that subject has that may provide him another position in the team are the following: 

Capability to move silently and without being noticed by others should he choose to remain absolutely silent
History of conducting ambushes and shadowing enemy units over long distances without being detected
POSITION IN THE TEAM: FIGHTER / SOLDIER / ASSAULT or FIGHTER / RECON TROOPER / STEALTH
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REQUISITIONS

PENDING APPROVAL FROM OVERSEER

ITEMS:Standard issue United Front of Humanity carbine, standard issue United Front of Humanity pistol, additional armor plates attachable for use, several feathers, a large military backpack, a long combat knife (7 inches), a universal tool set, a PDA, an ID card for UFH, an ID card for Xic'si, a small and portable translator, a small plastic container of yellow paint, a small brush, a Xic'Si NBC mask and a UFH Xic'si communicator.

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It seems to me that Culicid would be better suited to division Dreadnought in The Art of War. If you can convince me that he'll be good in stealth-focused operations then I'll be more than happy to accept him!

The only thing I would change, is the items of the requisition. The UHF (United Front of Humanity) wouldn't specially make Xic'Si based items. They would just hand over Terran weaponry which would work just fine due to similar anatomies.

Besides those two points, this CS looks good to go! Give it a little fix and port it over

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It seems to me that Culicid would be better suited to division Dreadnought in The Art of War. If you can convince me that he'll be good in stealth-focused operations then I'll be more than happy to accept him!

The only thing I would change, is the items of the requisition. The UHF (United Front of Humanity) wouldn't specially make Xic'Si based items. They would just hand over Terran weaponry which would work just fine due to similar anatomies.

Besides those two points, this CS looks good to go! Give it a little fix and port it over@Dr Catfish

Edited and maybe good to go now, my dude! :D

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Looks good! If you like you can choose whether you would like to wait to admit the character for Art of War in the Dreadnought division...

Or sign up for the Art of Deception in the Battlemage division! Inform me through Discord and move your character to the tab!

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DUE TO RECENT DISCOVERIES OF A PLAYER META-GAMING, THE ROLEPLAY HAS BEEN FORCED TO REVERT BACK TO A FORMER STATE. AS SUCH IT CAN NOW BE RECONSIDERED AT STARTING AND WE ARE IN NEED OF NEW PLAYERS!

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