I may have done that a couple of times in my post..maybe
I ain't see nothin 🤫
I may have done that a couple of times in my post..maybe
‘Her smile still playing mischievously at the edge of her lips.’
Playing would make it present.
Tbh it’s good feedback. Though may be getting flashbacks from my English lit A level 😂
Well thanks! :) I’m glad haha
‘Her smile still playing mischievously at the edge of her lips.’
Playing would make it present.
Tbh it’s good feedback. Though may be getting flashbacks from my English lit A level 😂
@BleedingLover Excellent job conveying Priscilla's feelings. I could feel the tension between her and Edwyn.
@Danelaw Baldric will be late for dinner. Hard day preparing the raiding party for the upcoming strike.
@BleedingLover Excellent job conveying Priscilla's feelings. I could feel the tension between her and Edwyn.
@Danelaw Baldric will be late for dinner. Hard day preparing the raiding party for the upcoming strike.
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Thanks, Gunther. I had a great writing partner that helped make the scene realistic.
Whoever that guy is. >.>
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Just some intelligent, wise, charismatic, handsome, cool guy.... Idk either!
Jokes aside u did great
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I giggled at that first line though. :)
Thanks but so did you though. I think we captivated their relationship greatly in that post. I can't stop reading it!!!