I assume everything is fine with my profile? I would also like to recite my request to be on the Small Council. Either as Hand or Master of Ships if possible
I assume everything is fine with my profile? I would also like to recite my request to be on the Small Council. Either as Hand or Master of Ships if possible.
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Not exactly.
This is a Great House. Even though they're new to that scene, the Tyrells need more fleshing out than a single (contradictive) character with a biography spanning just two paragraphs. As I've said previously: I'd like to see more on his weaknesses, as well as some effort to even out his personality. As it stands, Matthos looks more like a secondary character than a main one.
I refer to my earlier remarks. Not that I want to brag, but I advise you to take a look at my own WIP House Sheet. This should give you an idea of the nature of the sheet we are looking for. Another point to elaborate on would be the Tyrell relationship with their bannermen. They're a young House, with a questionable claim to overlordship of the Reach. There are other, older families with a better (blood) claim to Highgarden and the Lord Paramount title.
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Is it better now?
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Who is Lucien?
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Who is Lucien?
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Ok there we go. It should all be the right name now
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I appreciate the efforts you've taken so far.
The weakness you list is one that regards his house and situtation. While I believe it is a correct assessment regarding the times, it does not relate to him as a character. Where are the flaws in his personality? Right now he's a Gary Stu.
Were you planning on adding more House members?
Ok there we go. It should all be the right name now
A weakness doesn’t always have to do with one’s personality. The things I’ve listed could bring the character down just as well. However, if you’re adamant on one regarding personality, you can say he’s overly ambitious which I do believe I’ve mentioned but just not in the “Weaknesses” field.
And perhaps in the future
We've got a good roster of pirates! I can't wait for some high-seas shenanigans 😎
Ruby forcibly dragged me (but not really) out of my extremely long absence from Roleplayer Guild by dangling this roleplay in front of me. I'll be posting one or more character sheets in the near future, just wanted to make my presence and interest known.