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@Jing Heya, just want to let you know that the fog/regret event and the Starweaver wake up call are two seperate event. They can certainly happen at the same time, but if this is the case, can you go ahead and add some clarification that they are two seperate events, because it doesn’t read like that to me in your CS.

Next thing is power. We’re just gonna do some adjustments for the sake of balancing. So if you have watched the 2008 Jumper movie, we would prefer a teleportation power like that. Basically, no visually/remotely teleportation. If he wants to teleport, he touches the things/people and takes them with him. Also please make the power works only for tangible things, no intangible or power teleportation. Let’s also set a limit to what he can teleport, so maybe a dude/a dog is easy no big sweat, but a full sized fridge is hard and a car is gonna hurt your back a lot.

Self-teleportation has the same limits. He needs to see the locations he’s going to (postcards, pictures, maps) and it has to be within a reasonable distance. So maybe just teleporting downtown or a couple of city blocks, not breaking a sweat. But do that for a while and you get tired. From cities to cities that are kilometres away, that’s far more tiring and you need to rest up for a while. Anything further than that probably kill you.

We’re not gonna hard enforce hard distances/durations during actual IC gameplay. Just be reasonable and it’s all good. Also the discord link at the front page is fixed.
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@RedDuskThanks, the two events happened at the same time for Morgan, I added a bit at the end to mention that.

And I tweaked the teleportation to make it more suitable. The only major new things I added that might need changing is if Morgan can choose whether or not teleport something else with him (I.e. if he touches two things at once but only wants to go with one), and sensing how exhausted he'll be if he teleports via images. Other than that, everything should be fine?
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@Jing I’m gonna say that he will need about 30 seconds wind up before teleporting long distances like a mile. Shorter can pretty much be just a few seconds and longer distances obviously need longer wind up. Otherwise yeah your CS is all cool and good, you can put it in the CS tab after you’ve made the adjustments.
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@Jing Since your character just popped in, I’ll retcon the opening post a bit because it makes no difference this early on.

Your character also received the magically insistent letter. For the sake of flow while you’re writing up the posts (and for everyone else who didn’t opt for the in-person visit), if the character signs off on it, assume Sentinel sends back an instantaneous reply telling them to meet at the Temptress. Same as what he told the Fight Club over there near the end of their talk.
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Sorry I'm late on this. This took a lot longer to fill out than I anticipated. Let me know if there's anything I need to adjust/clarify.



EDIT 2/14/21: Readjusted abilities and parts of history.
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@Vermicelli (forgot to tag, so this edit ping will probably fail, but for whenever you come back)

In the homeland, a strict two-child policy imposes limits on the average household.

Just clarify that to be either some pocket of China/China prior to the the Third Calamity if the experiment’s been going for a while.



Savyna's Starweaver ability differs greatly from what her mal'akh blood would suggest. She possesses the ability to call forth her life energy or energy she has stored into manifested weaponry, taking on the forms of blades or projectile attacks. As an additional effect against living targets, attacks from this power will sever their connections to the mortal plane, debilitating their magical properties and eventually leaving them as soulless husks.

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Overuse of this ability can cause the power to reach a state of complete instability, overtaking Savyna's body and turning her into a feral being.

Starweaver ability differs greatly from what her mal'akh blood would suggest: Starweaver abilities have nothing to do with racial magic; please adjust.

...blades or projectile attacks: this is fine.

...severing connections to mortal plane: ambiguous, probably not fine. Clarify further.

...debilitating magical properties:
ambiguous, if the phrase means turning off someone’s power, that’s not fine—I don’t want players with that ability. If you mean a general debuff like weakening the effects of someone’s power, that may be fine depending on how you rephrase it.

Any ability that directly and negatively affects other players’ control of their powers (as opposed to just general debuffs/status), I will be very harsh on. I don’t anticipate creating a lot of GM-led PvP scenarios, but it’s necessary to be conscious of what players may want to do within reason. It might be easier to just nix this whole part and stick to magic projectiles or rework it as a sort of small-scale, area effect general speed/strength/movement debuff where her projectiles land.

...overtaking Savyna's body and turning her into a feral being:
What is the intended effect? If she becomes a stronger monster/being on overuse, regardless of IC control, it’s transformation or a sort of uncontrollable berserker state + magic projectiles. If that’s the intent, then not approved.

If her power turns off on overuse and she also loses her sanity for a bit, then that’s acceptable, but you would then need to rewrite the section in her history regarding her lab outburst.


Additionally, please clarify in the powers section exactly what racial abilities she has, if any, given her status as a non-standard, half-Mal’Akh clone. Her lack of general Mal’Akh features and mellifluous voice has been noted, I’m just curious if she’s entirely lacking all their abilities and is also unable to utilize normal human magic.
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@January

Edited her abilities and some details about her escape. I hope this is more in line with your specifications.
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@Vermicelli Looks good, you can throw it in the CHAR tab. I’ll do the same for you as Jing; assume Savyna received the same letter as everyone else did. I’ll edit the post to add that momentarily.

You can write up a solo intro post for the character to cover what they’ve been doing before the letter, what they’re like, how life’s been, what pushes them to take the offer, etc. You’re also free to organize other character interactions with players in a collab or two during the interim before next update. As my co-GM would say a bit flippantly, “The world is your oyster.”

Feel free to ask about environment questions if you’re doing something specific somewhere, but if you create an area that would reasonably fit within the confines of the universe’s very open-ended expectations, it’s pretty much approved—like the fighting ring in the collab IC post.
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Apologies again on my delayed updates. Currently dealing with the winter storm down here in Texas and it's been pretty rough. I'll try to get in a post either today or tomorrow.
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@Vermicelli No rush on posts. Take care of yourself first. The situation in Texas is the phrase ‘when Hell freezes over’ so don’t feel pressured at all over this. Even if we move on without you, I’ll always be able to write in some way to include the character at whatever point.

Stay safe.
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Appreciate the patience. Could I get the Discord link? It seems like most of the OOC discussion is gonna be there.
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@Vermicelli It's under the banner in the opening post. But here as well.
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