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It's appreciated. I wouldn't blame you if you didn't want to touch a thing in this lab.
*The machine riffles through the papers and encloses over them, projecting a pitch-black sphere lazily through the air, which is absorbed by the cylinder*


*Watches while speaking*
I really don’t. But I know how paper works at least.
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*Knocks on the top of your head*
Your head’s in the right place. Just a wee bit, yeah. I have him beat anyway.


*chuckles*
What happened with him? From what I hear he normally doesn’t interact directly, like his pops.
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*chuckles*
What happened with him? From what I hear he normally doesn’t interact directly, like his pops.


Just another disaster on the mountain. A fight at the base from what I saw. I didn’t stick around.
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Just another disaster on the mountain. A fight at the base from what I saw. I didn’t stick around.


That’s even more odd. Huh, new times create new scenarios I guess.
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That’s even more odd. Huh, new times create new scenarios I guess.


*Laughs*
As if conflict at the base is something that has ever changed since it was created. He was just spectating, which I’m sure he and others do more often than you come to think about.
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*Laughs*
As if conflict at the base is something that has ever changed since it was created. He was just spectating, which I’m sure he and others do more often than you come to think about.


Ohh, thought the kid was fighting himself. Yeah then that’s normal operations then.
*laughs*
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*Watches while speaking*
I really don’t. But I know how paper works at least.


Even papers can be magic batteries when dad makes them.
*The cylinder emits a soft hum and the frosted glass gradually becomes more translucent*
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*breathes a short sigh, and teleports to FB's castle, walking in*


*Sits by the roaring fireplace, reading a book*
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*Sits by the roaring fireplace, reading a book*


*gently places my hand on your shoulder, looking to you*

Pretty good book, eh?
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*gently places my hand on your shoulder, looking to you*

Pretty good book, eh?


*Turns the page*
It’s not bad. I don’t like the deuteragonist very much, though.
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*Turns the page*
It’s not bad. I don’t like the deuteragonist very much, though.


Hmm? How come?
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Hmm? How come?


He’s a little too helpless, and the buildup for his love interest with the protagonist is far too obvious. She’s a much more interesting character.
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He’s a little too helpless, and the buildup for his love interest with the protagonist is far too obvious. She’s a much more interesting character.


Interesting. How is he too helpless?
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Interesting. How is he too helpless?


It’s like everything he does is a setup to make the main character look good. He never solves the main problem himself. The formula is getting boring.
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It’s like everything he does is a setup to make the main character look good. He never solves the main problem himself. The formula is getting boring.


Oh? is it intentional?
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*face-plants into our couch and groans*
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Oh? is it intentional?


Which part?
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Which part?


The deuteragonist setting things up to make the main character look good. Maybe it's intentional? And act of love perhaps?
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*face-plants into our couch and groans*


You good?
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The deuteragonist setting things up to make the main character look good. Maybe it's intentional? And act of love perhaps?


Maybe. But it's done poorly.
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