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WHEN??????
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im gonna make the post.
or not. maybe tommorow.
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it's confusing. it's like, three sentences at a time, and I don't want to go through several pages of dialogue and get confused.
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It's the posting style that's hard.
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THIS IS HURTING MY BRAIN
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actually I'm just gonna wait until there's a point I fully know I can jump into.
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I'll help with that tomorrow. or not. I have a party to go to so...
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@LimeTime966 well I also have a party to attend. we play games like "sleep", "binge youtube and eat gummies", and "cry because life will only get worse and you're going nowhere in life". so i'm having WAY more fun.

*quiet sobs*
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Dam that is more fun.
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Sorry, I just got back. Just respond to my latest post.
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Sorry, I just got back. Just respond to my latest post.


ok
gnarp'll like, fall through the roof or something
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<Snipped quote by Artifact>

ok
gnarp'll like, fall through the roof or something


Sure, that works.
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fuck Im getting anxious
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I tried.
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I tried.


Try to write first person.
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<Snipped quote by LimeTime966>

In general, we don't get to learn what characters are thinking unless they say it. But you can imply it through their actions and expressions. If you really want to sneak it in, you can sometimes push emotions as drivers before certain actions, like

*Rolls my eyes, exasperated*

But obviously, rolling one's eyes implies exasperation


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Hey, try to follow this convention for *actions*. So little embellishment, no ellipses/caps lock, no thoughts, etc.
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this feels like throwing my writing style out the window.
and for that, I must go.
gnarp's probably okay, just teleported somewhere else.
but yeah, I'm not really in tune with how many punches this rp threw on me, in an hour. (and I will admit, I had made mistakes too, like a raccoon usually does)
so for that, peace!
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No worries. Have a good one!
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more on that first sentence; I'm an expressive writer more than anything. one sad part about using RPG is the fact that actions show more than words. so I try my best to do just that in text since I'm not a great artist and pictures are limited and I don't want to pay someone $20 for something i'll only use once. but with reading lime's most recent quote (and other quotes directed towards me in the ooc); and all I just said, and the fact that I got off on a way wrong start with the other characters, I'll be leaving this rp until further notice (most likely never).
so once and for all,
ℊℴℴ𝒹𝒷𝓎ℯ

PS; no offense towards any of you. you all are wonderful people, and I hope to see y'all again sometime in the future!

(ok this is WAY too hefty of a goodbye letter but ya get what ya get i suppose)

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Cya, you tried.
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