I'm sorry I'm not detailed like some of my other friends who are detailed, at least they didn't criticize the way I write my roleplay, they gave me advice yes, but they never criticized. Which by the way they write similar to the way I write professionally. You think my text is a brick? Imagine a wall of text consisting of 10 or more lines per paragraph.
They write in more detail, and honestly I don't normally write detailed for things that don't matter or isn't important for the story. That commander, probably won't ever see him again. I only attempt to go into detail for NPC characters that would be important to the story and would most likely show up later in the story.
Also the reason I don't go into much detail with my characters and such, is because I go based on their pics and since whoever I'm roleplaying with already know what my characters look like, I shouldn't have to go into detail on what their appearance is, since they could literally look at the picture in Character Creation, unless I want to add something that they can't see within the pic. I'm here for story not great detailed explanations on every characters exact movement or emotion. Simple words can explain a lot about a character, it doesn't have to have to have detailed movement on how they reacted. Just because I don't show how she reacted in one post with how angry she is, doesn't mean I won't show it in the next.
I was thinking you'd give me advice or some sort of suggestion, but all you did was criticize. You gave one suggestion, but the rest was nothing but criticism.
If you can't accept the way I write my roleplay, perhaps we should stop right now and forget about the roleplay.
They write in more detail, and honestly I don't normally write detailed for things that don't matter or isn't important for the story. That commander, probably won't ever see him again. I only attempt to go into detail for NPC characters that would be important to the story and would most likely show up later in the story.
Also the reason I don't go into much detail with my characters and such, is because I go based on their pics and since whoever I'm roleplaying with already know what my characters look like, I shouldn't have to go into detail on what their appearance is, since they could literally look at the picture in Character Creation, unless I want to add something that they can't see within the pic. I'm here for story not great detailed explanations on every characters exact movement or emotion. Simple words can explain a lot about a character, it doesn't have to have to have detailed movement on how they reacted. Just because I don't show how she reacted in one post with how angry she is, doesn't mean I won't show it in the next.
I was thinking you'd give me advice or some sort of suggestion, but all you did was criticize. You gave one suggestion, but the rest was nothing but criticism.
If you can't accept the way I write my roleplay, perhaps we should stop right now and forget about the roleplay.
