ImportantNobody said
Maybe the thirty minutes stun requires much longer charge time and overloads the gun for a long time? Or I could just remove the option to have it last that long it if that's not good enough.

No, man. As I said, at full-charge, I am fine with it KO-ing a person for a half hour or longer. So that's totally fine. No need to remove that. But perhaps a short charge-up period to reach full-charge would be logical.

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Also, Someone other than me will need to review DQ's character. I saw it... and had to restrain myself. If I review that character, I cannot promise I would be polite about it in any way shape or form. No offense intended, DQ... just... I can't take it seriously, and that irks me a lot more than it should.

I had him geared toward high tier but switched out mid character sheet and apparently didn't change stuff like that well enough.

Dragqueen;

- Decrease the running speed to about 80-100mph-ish (Any other character in the tier is unable to reach the same -constant- speed unless using a charged ability or a special ability, as far as I can tell, so for balance sake, decrease it slightly.)

- Loving the beard form, but add in a hefty speed decrease (specify what speed he can reach in beard form) to compensate for the sudden strength and endurance boost. Also be a bit more specific about what kind of damage he can shrug off in this form. You might have to add in a charge (1) requirement to change into and out of the beard form, but I'm going to have to get a second opinion on that.

- Specify the speed of which he is able to fly. Does he have to remove his hoodie to use his wings?

- The not-a-light-saber/Plasma hilt needs more description. Can it change shape during combat? How quickly does it turn on and off? What kind of things can it cut through? Is the hilt itself hot to the touch? Is he immune to it?

- The hammerspace backpack is an intermediate tier as long as you're able to pull -any- non-weapon item out of it. What kind of limitations does it have? What happens if someone else goes inside it? What's the maximum sized object you could pull out? You mentioned pulling out a zebra, does that mean you can pull out a shark?

Green, I don't know how you were as nice as you were. I bow to your superior kindness.

Now if you would be so kind as to post in Necropoli, I won't have to tear your lips off and pleasure myself with them.

That's disgusting. But alright, I'll get right on it.

Edit: So, quick question Beta; How far away from the mecha is Ysolda? Roughly?

Green said
Dragqueen; - Loving the beard form,

Indeed. Frederick Blaze would be secretly envious despite his own glorious beard. They could fight only with their beards for an epic showdown. (although he's not being submitted to the multiverse)

Green said
So, quick question Beta; How far away from the mecha is Ysolda? Roughly?

Just outside the blast radius of the initial missile attack, so like what... a quarter mile or so? Less distance than that mech is tall.

Posted.

Oh you, with your trying to annihilate me in one fell swoop. So Kawaii.

Now it's fun.

Two birds, one planetary annihilation beam.

Yes... annihilation. That's TOTALLY what's about to happen.

HueHueHueHueHue

Heya folks, I won't be reviewing anything for a couple days, I nastily cut my hand open and now have 6 stitches in my thumb.

Beta, the Spike punch was exactly the perfect way to describe it. It's actually what it was based off of, with the rings providing the extra punching.

Huuuurm kinda itching for blood. What role are you guys lacking right now, and are there any easy plot hooks I can use for my character, such as a common big bad or faction.

Valeric said
Huuuurm kinda itching for blood. What role are you guys lacking right now, and are there any easy plot hooks I can use for my character, such as a common big bad or faction.

Angar Rylla are the evil space empire me and Khan are affiliated with, for very different reasons. There is also Khan's faction of Death Cultists who are the only ones putting up a decent resistance to them thus far and that's going down in the Perdo Wastes.

TheBiddz said
Beta, the Spike punch was exactly the perfect way to describe it. It's actually what it was based off of, with the rings providing the extra punching.

You watch Toriko. You regained a portion of my respect.

LeeRoy said
Heya folks, I won't be reviewing anything for a couple days, I nastily cut my hand open and now have 6 stitches in my thumb.

I know that feel. The other day, I was cooking food and knocked a knife off the counter... landed point down in the top of my foot.

MelonHead said
Angar Rylla are the evil space empire me and Khan are affiliated with, for very different reasons. There is also Khan's faction of Death Cultists who are the only ones putting up a decent resistance to them thus far and that's going down in the Perdo Wastes.

So making a character that opposes the Angar Rylla would be the best way to get into the thick of action right now?

Valeric said
So making a character that opposes the Angar Rylla would be the best way to get into the thick of action right now?

In theory, though you would have to engage either Fury, who I'll be posting with very soon to knock out General Freedom, or Khan's skeletonface speedster in a spaceship.

Posted in Necropoli, Green. Now we just need to wait for LeeRoy's thumb to not hurt so HE can post.

And before people rage... Yes, you can combine charms like that in Exalted. If you read her abilities and charms, the Dodge-Based Charms I combined have a note in the details stating "Combo-OK". When making a combo, an exalt pays an extra 1 mote of essence for each charm past the first, and an additional temporary willpower point for creating a combo on the fly. I did the math properly, and the total cost of the combo is listed at the bottom of the post.

Okay so, I read the review on Kanitah, and the machine ADDS one more ring. It doesn't reduce it to a single ring. It adds one more ring to the two that are already there.

The backpack is in a burlap sack on his back,it can be used at any time but it's not an instant effect. And it cripples him for the time that it takes effect, leaving him totally exposed to being killed execution style.

It works the exact same way his power works, adding 1 more ring onto the 2 force amplification rings that he already has.