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..........
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okay, I am BEYOND intimidated by these posts... maybe I shouldn't have joined...

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I posted but I am chewing my nails down to the quick with how nervous I am about it...
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Zacharius said
A broken youtube link?(I'm so hilarious)


Precisely.

(Here's what I was actually going for-assuming it works THIS time-: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OQlC_O2ToME)
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Myst said
..........0__ookay, I am BEYOND intimidated by these posts... maybe I shouldn't have joined...-EDIT-I posted but I am chewing my nails down to the quick with how nervous I am about it...


Your post was great! Really enjoyed it (although it's Saxon rather than Saxton)

Ruby and I tend to get carried a way a bit when writing, please don't be intimidated, we don't expect that kind of length for posts :)
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Myst said
..........0__ookay, I am BEYOND intimidated by these posts... maybe I shouldn't have joined...-EDIT-I posted but I am chewing my nails down to the quick with how nervous I am about it...


The only problem I can see is if the posts were TL:DR. If you read and enjoyed the posts? Then relax! I'm, in real life, something of a writer. Zach and I have been RPing together for years. Naturally we're going to be long winded and overly involved with our posts. We want them to read like pages from a novel. But what good is writing novella like posts if you do so in a vacuum? There is no good, it sucks. ^_^

So trust me, your post was great. I gobbled it up shortly after you posted it, and can't wait for my characters to run into your characters!
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Kingfisher said
Precisely. (Here's what I was actually going for-assuming it works THIS time-: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OQlC_O2ToME)


Fang Noir, we're calling it. >>
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thank you for the encouragement. I really appreciate it. And whoops sorry Saxon! Going to fix it right now!
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Myst said
..........0__ookay, I am BEYOND intimidated by these posts... maybe I shouldn't have joined...-EDIT-I posted but I am chewing my nails down to the quick with how nervous I am about it...


I don't mean to just mimic what Zach and Ruby have already said, but I too thoroughly enjoyed your post. The use of flashbacks and Real time was very cool.
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Kind of responded to you a little Myst, but left it open in case you didn't want to go down the direction of meeting up too early.

Hope it suffices. Please click the Chopin as you read it - I think it adds a sense of what my Ventrue is about.
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Would you mind putting your sheet up in the thread for accepted sheets, Instantes? It'd help me keep check.
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Ooh, posts! I'll have a read, and get something up over the next few days: I've got exams soon, so I'm frantically revising - it might take me a little while to get a post I'm happy with written.

On a side note, I hate quadratics and cubics. :'(
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Palm Springs folks approved.
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Awesome, will try to post in the next couple days. :)
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Raptorman said
Awesome, will try to post in the next couple days. :)


Cool! Don't forget to post the CS on the CS thread!
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Will do
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Would you mind putting your sheet up in the thread for accepted sheets, Instantes? It'd help me keep check.


done
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First Sleepwalker post is up, if people wanna check that out...n'stuff.
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I got a post up - wasn't really that.. related, or good, but eh. I'm gonna be collabing with Roobes over the next few days, too. c:

Might make a sheet for an unrelated faction, or something, sometime soon.
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Squrmy said
I got a post up - wasn't really that.. related, or good, but eh.


I actually really enjoyed it...Just sayin'
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I actually really enjoyed it...Just sayin'


On that note, I found the nosferatu section of your post rather excellent. Not that the rest was bad (other than debatable breaking the masquerade by allowing people to run but meh) but I thoroughly enjoyed being in the mind of the twisted vampire.
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On that note, I found the nosferatu section of your post rather excellent. Not that the rest was bad (other than debatable breaking the masquerade by allowing people to run but meh) but I thoroughly enjoyed being in the mind of the twisted vampire.


Cheers, I really do appreciate that :D I'm glad you enjoyed it. As to the the breaking of the Masquerade; I do plan to follow that back up in the next post.
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