[OOC] You never see it coming[Freedomliveson/The Elvenqueen]

[The Elvenqueen]

Seemed like a good opportunity to squeeze Sho back in a little bit, feel free to shunt her off somewhere else again if it's appropriate, or she could hang around a little XD

You want to have them meet up with Nuly and start talking with him? And/or finding some more clues, either way :P

[freedomliveson]

I wanted to keep her around for a bit. Wouldn't mind seeing her in action, so yay for ambushes!

Feel free to kill them off in the next post

[The Elvenqueen]

Awesome, working on it now! Bad weather forecast for me today so possibility of loss of power, if I vanish suddenly xDD

[The Elvenqueen]

Apologies for the delay, I am making progress with the post but trying to integrate some more of Sho's fighting styles and such into it, and after a busy work day my creativity is a little mush XD

I appreciate your patience as always and will have the post out at some point tonight hopefully ;-;

[The Elvenqueen]

Seemed a bit too barbaric for them to kill the last dude just for the hell of it, so I had Ari knock him out to be captured, feel free to ammend that as you wish xD

EDIT: also an update, my backup computer just died on me D: and my laptop is still out of action so I'm restricted to working on the mobile site and on Google docs via phone to write posts so will be much slower till I sort out the laptop or another backup plan xD sorry about this, I have the worst luck with computers >_>

[The Elvenqueen]

Soooo, I've got a lot of stuff going on right now and just having constant computer troubles on top of it is the icing on the cake right now.

I will try to keep up being active but I'm finding it very difficult to write at all right now so I may have to take a bit of a hiatus.

Really sorry to have to but I'm just struggling to write and it takes so much longer for me to get a proper quality post out, and I don't want to end up skimping with shorter posts so I think I just need a break for a week or so, hopefully I'll be a bit better by then. I'll still be logging in to check in though and I promise I won't be vanishing for ages

[freedomliveson]

Hey, I totally understand. I've had to take a couple of breaks myself in order to rejuvenate and get the creativity going again. You just go take care of yourself. I'll be here! I'll be posting something in the next couple of days and updating that Act II page as much as I can.

Hope everything gets resolved and you get the rest you need! :)

[The Elvenqueen]

*army crawls back in* I am ALIIIVEEEE

My sincerest apologies for such a delay, last week was a nightmare >_< but there we go! :D feel free to add or change anything there before they actually head down and try to find this place, figure they should update Malu on the goings on a little first?

[freedomliveson]

*waves profusely*

Good to have you back in the land of the living! Did the week off help in terms of getting the creativity flowing again?

I'll be checking in on the post in a few. Need to do some reading/curriculum development.

[The Elvenqueen]

*waves back* Yess, loads better! I should be back in the game now! (But still a bit slow while I'm stuck to typing on phone till laptop is fixed XD)

And no worries as always, work comes first! :P

[freedomliveson]

Yay for being better and wow, bless you for typing on a phone. That would frustrate me to no end xD

Got a post up! Figured I could give Ari a way to change/modify what Malu has up her sleeve. Be prepared for some of Voldon's personal baggage to be exposed!

And ah...well, I don't know if I want to do this yet, but I've been...well, let's just get to Manus and Voldon before I say anything else xD

[The Elvenqueen]

Argh, it can be a pain...curse this tiny keyboard (and autocorrect!) *shakes fist at* XD but it's doable haha

Oooooohhhh, poor Voldon! D: now I'm intrigued! *bounces in seat impatiently*
I'm toying with a few ideas regarding Cheriss myself, but kinda waiting to see if it's workable before I attempt anything hehehe

[The Elvenqueen]

I didn't want to go too far ahead and mess up anything you had planned there, so hope that works okay! XD

As always I can ammend if needed, but otherwise feel free to have the Faceless appear next? :3

[freedomliveson]

Faceless incoming!

So I looked at a handy galaxy map and noted that about halfway between Wild Space and coruscant is Kashyyk. Might be interesting to have the shuttles crash/emergency land on the planet and have the initial confrontation between Vo and the Qyaari in the Shadowlands. What say you? Any other ideas?

[The Elvenqueen]

Ooohhh, that sounds EPIC! *excited girly squealing*

Ahem, I mean yes, let's do that XD

[The Elvenqueen]

I came up with two options for how this could proceed to the inevitable confrontation, but figured I should let you and Voldon decide exactly how, especially if you have another idea I haven't thought of! :D

[freedomliveson]

Yeah, Voldon's going to put Sho in a tree somewhere. A Mandalorian sniper comes in handy for back up xD

[The Elvenqueen]

I figured as much, Sho is down for that XD The term "spider monkey" comes to mind? hahahaha

[freedomliveson]

Manus turned out better than I thought! Trying to make him both parts delusional and cunning, so here's hoping I pulled it off xD

Figured that they would disarm the bombs, but let me know if you want to change that!

[The Elvenqueen]

You certainly did! I like him already haha

Nah I imagine Sho has the smarts to help them figure that out. Forgive the cliché-ness of the "red wire" thing but I have no clue how else to disable an explosive aside from that and after what happened in Manchester I can't really Google it without the police ending up knocking on my door XD (All is fine over here, thankfully I live far away enough we weren't affected beyond emotionally feeling for everyone who was involved ;-; )

Ari kind of ran away on her own a little there at the end, but it might be an interesting concept to explore that Manus is cunning enough to get into Ari's (or even both of them, potentially?) head and make her start to doubt the Qyaari's motives a little?
Let me know what you think about that! It is of course up for debate and just as easily dismissable as girly emotions over ruling logic if it turns out to be less viable :P