@Solace lemme know when we can talk family
@NarcissisticPotato Is also making the lord, so you should include him as well! If no one wants the Lady of Lear, I'll make her.
@HushedWhispers Okay, we've looked over your sheet and I'd like to say, this critique is mostly clarification. This is because we haven't mentioned or touched upon anything about the king.
- The name of the king is Soren Rathmore.
- Since she's not an original member of House Rathmore, you can have her come from anywhere else. This can be the north, the south, or even the west. This should also be specified under her allegiances other than House Rathmore.
- Her titles should only be "Queen" and "Lady of House Rathmore".
- You can paste this under her the "Family" category:Her father's name - Father (alive or deceased)
Her mother's name - Mother (alive or deceased)
Soren Rathmore - Husband (alive)
Alexander Rathmore - Cousin (alive)
Soren Rathmore II - First son (deceased)
Feye Rathmore - Daughter (deceased)
Archer Rathmore - Second son (alive)
- She shouldn't be born into House Rathmore; this is considered incest and, of course, incest is forbidden.
Other than that, it's good to go! You'll probably have to make changes once the king is made himself, but for now, put her in the character tab.
Isla Lear (@Ellion)
- The players of the North will be going over the charries in PM in order to see how the biographies can meld together easily. But we've reviewed your sheet, anyway!
- @Solace's character, Sigurd Lear, had been planned to be the oldest-- yet, he is willing to discuss the age with you and readjust if need be.
- The title should be "princess", not "lady".
- The family will be discussed at a later time, so that can be blank for now.
- As this is a WIP, it should be edited a bit with the creation of the lord/lady. :)
Maria Condoterri (@Wernher)
- Your character is good to go.
- I would like to ask for you to place your charries in individual hiders in the character tab, as your post there is currently a large wall of text. ^^;