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Really interested in joining this, hopefully the character is alright, I tend not to be best with character flaws, at least in the sense of portraying them correctly to where they're actually easy to spot as flaws, hehe.
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I think you did pretty well here, we get the understanding she is a padawan so she wouldn't have the abilities a knight or master would. We also get the sense that she is a bit implosive -- hint hint this could be a foreshadowing of a path down to the dark. DUN DUN DUNNN. Lol. Anyway. We get a sense of character flaws too, which is good; and I'm sure they may show up more organically in play. So. Tossing Xeviiy up in dat bin right now.
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Name: Markus Bionte
Race: Human
Age: 39
Sex: Male
Jedi rank Knight
Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-bzWSJG93P8 ( someone had to do it right?)

Appearance:
Markus has the usual height of a human. his eyes are dark brown and almost always wears his armor. even when out of combat. His hair is nicely combed backwards and his beard is also kept in pristine condition. And when he somehow would not wear his armor he would be wearing a normal robe like any Jedi.

Markus can barely remember his parents as he was taken away from them from a very young age. Though reports suggest that he was born to two slave parents on the planet Zygerria. And was discovered to have force powers at a very young age. His parents, seeing the possibility for there son to have a better chance in live where able to smuggle him of planet. thanks to a group of smugglers who helped freeing slaves, for a price of course. His live now free of slavery Markus was dropped of on Dantooine and was trained in the ways of the force.

As he grew it was quickly noticed that Markus had a knack in sword fighting becoming one of the best of his class. His force abilities where average if not sometimes a little below average. But not that below average that it turned out to be a problem during training. Markus loved to learn about history and sword fighting. Watching old holovids about history and ancient sword fighting techniques. Mostly such things would be appreciated by the Jedi masters but when Markus started looking into sith history a little too much. He was forbidden for visiting the library and that the knowledge he oh so much desired would be delivered to him. Too make sure what he learned wasn't corrupting in any sort of manner.

Markus, being rather miffed about this sighed and accepted it. Considering the fact that maybe learning too much wouldn't be for the better. But at the age of 18 his boring life at the temple would finally change. He was given a human female master by the name of Telera Hasew. At first the two couldn't stand each other because of there different personalities. And Telera was at the point of sending Markus back to the temple But through sheer luck she didn't and kept Markus at her side. There first mission are just boring patrols through the outer rim helping whoever they found to be in need. However it wasn't until Markus reached the age of 20 when there first actual mission would begin.

It all started when they received a distress call from the planet Zygerria. Apparently there was a major slave revolt going on and the slaves had captured a communication tower begging for help. The duo immediately responded hoping to save as many slaves as possible. But when they arrived in orbit around the planet they where shocked to see an entire battle going on planet side. Apparently the slaves where able to get there hands on some major firepower and what first had looked like like and easy rescue mission had turned into small scale war. Telera wanted to warn the Jedi council but before she got the chance they where shot down. Apparently the Zygerrian slave traders had gotten word of the slaves, broadcasting for help. And in there paranoid ways decided to shoot down everything that got to close. This including the Jedi's ship. However instead of exploding the ship crash landed into the middle of the fighting. Markus and Telera, now stuck in a war zone decided that it was in there interest to find a ship, get of planet and warn the Jedi council.

And so they fought against the slave traders cutting there way into the spaceport. However there they faced the most deadly force a Jedi could face, Mandalorians mercenaries. There where six of them well trained and deadly.
But behind them stood the ship that would get them out of this hellhole. The fight hat followed would be the hardest one Markus would ever face. For an entire hour they fought on the spaceport using whatever methods he has learned to fight them off. Then Telera was killed. A sword right through here gut. The anger that flowed through Markus that day is said to have been as great as a supernova. In his blind rage he killed them all. But he went even further. His blood lust still not fulfilled he jumped back into the killing field killing both sides, rampaging though uncontrollably. That was until he faced a certain old man with a sniper rifle. For two days the two played cat and mouse with each other. Until the sniper got himself cornerd on a rooftop. Markus ready to bring the finishing blow looked into the man's old eyes. and then he realized something. The man he had been fighting wasn't a random slave. It was his father.

The sudden realization put him out of his rage. The two looking at each other for a few seconds until his father not having realized that this now full grown man was his son fired his rifle almost hitting Markus. Markus then fled the rooftop leaving the old man confused and alone. Makrus made his way towards the spaceport hoping that the ship was still there, which it was to his surprise. He then fled the planet send a single message towards the council about the attack and then just disapeard for years. He was to shamed by what he had done to come back to the temple and simply isolated himself. That was till he heard the whispers of a war about to begin. After 19 years of isolation. He now travels with all haste towards Dantooine hoping to aid his fellow Jedi once again.

Personality:
Likes: food, reading, light saber combat, history, drinking and music, meditation, sun bathing and swimming.
Dislikes: gambling, mandalorians, slave traders, bounty hunters and flying his ship. ( he cant fly for crap)

Markus'es sense of humor is very dry and sarcastic.

Emotional state is currently regretful and ashamed with a flurry of anger. Hard to break considering he has seen the worst since his exile and is used to it.

What is your character’s reputation?: Markus has no reputation since he made himself disapear into nothingness. Everyone actually thinks he is dead.

Status exiled Jedi knight

Virtues: brave, honorable, patient ,intelligent, trustworthy, strategic and protective
Vices: Judgmental, restless, hard to trust, resentful.

Perception of the world: Markus sees the world in a very pessimistic view. Only seeing the bad in everything. With live being more of a struggle than a journey. Then again he also believes that some people still have some good in them even though they rarely show it to others.

has a low sense of morality. doing what it takes to get the job done.

Markus knows 4 languages currently and isn't interested in learning any more at this time.

Attitude: cold, and sarcastic

Markus'es greatest secret is that ever since he was forbidden for searching up history on the Sith he has been actually doing it in secret.

Quirks: For being such an isolated Jedi for years he still has not learned to behave to the proper code of conduct. Cutting through someone talking and a just rather respect less behavior all together. Also since his time of long isolation he has started talking to himself. Much to his own annoyance. He has also started to drink too much sometimes even being somewhat of a drunk. Though he always drinks alone and never shares a drink with anyone. Though when he is drunk he will start to feel sorry for himself and even start to cry.

Hobbies: He likes to practice his light saber skills, and learn a lot more over the dark side of the force. Which is something he does not wish to join but to just learn.

His main goal is to make up for what he did on Zygerria. His second is too aid the jedi in the war to come and his third objective is to protect those in regiment.

Dreams Makrus dreams of being able to find inner peace within himself and to never fall to the dark side. Even though he walks such an uncertain path.

Skills/Abilities:

Markus has always focused more on light saber combat than actual force powers usually only using them in combat to give himself a better advantage over his opponents. Markus has been practicing the 8 ways of light saber combat mastering the ways of niman. and being an expert in Soresu In his last years before returning home to the temple he was able to obtain a crude way of the combat forms of gem sho and Juyo.

as for force powers he is an expert in force push and force pull but that is mostly it. Beside that he is also able to pull mind tricks on other alien species. He also has a knack for survival considering the fact that he has lived on his lonesome for some years. However he is horrible at flying his spaceship having crashed his on numerable occasion. Beside that he struggles to fix even the most simple of machinery. He also has a lack of power in the force which is why he started focusing on light saber combat in the first place.

Well..... HERE GOES NOTHING !!! XD my first star wars chara sheet. Hope its acceptable :)
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Think I'm about ready to accept it. Had me concerned for a moment until you said he isolated himself, lol. Historically, Revan was a great pilot... so it's kind of hilarious that Markus is horrible. We have a pretty diverse cast in terms of personality, I'd say!

Small note: Looking up and reading a lot about the Sith could definitely be a secret, but I feel like his greatest secret would be killing in rage. Killing quite a few, in truth.

Ah, there it is. Did a quick scan before I found what would be something to edit. Being an exiled jedi knight, he wouldn't have access to the masters anymore. He'd have few holocrons or masters to learn these forms from in that kind of abundance. I'd suggest you cut down the number of forms he knows, and the number he has mastered.
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@Dark Wind will do good sir !
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@Dark Wind fixed it
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Hmmm. Not quite! Lol, sorry if it feels like I'm picking on you. I'm not, I swear.

Some answers needed here. How long has he been in isolation? He's 39, so that suggests it might have been some amount of time. He's old enough to have somewhat of a knowledge of the Exar Kun War (would have been a teen then, perhaps).

Anyway, it's still unlikely he'd master four forms. He has age, experience, combat experience, so I'd say a certain level of expertise in two forms is definitely feasible. A crude knowledge of the other two forms you included is fine with me, after all; he's exiled and without a master to learn from. I'd say I recommend you have him be a master at one, and an expert at another. Intermediate or less at others. That many forms is just a lot, that's a lot of power especially because he's also expert at force push and pull. The combination of those and the numerous saber styles he has puts him on the level with high masters in the order!
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@Dark Wind this is my first time making a star wars character. so i'm not surprised honestly.
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@boomlover It's alright, I remember when I made my first one and it wasn't top notch, they still aren't sometimes. :P Important thing is to not get discouraged. :)
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@Dark Wind THREE TIMES THE GODDAM CHARM ! XD@Sohtem and thank you for your kind words.
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@boomlover Well I just know how it is when you're first making a CS for something you haven't done before and discourage can set in with criticisms which are almost never meant as a personal attack and just didn't want you feeling like that. :)
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If anyone knows anything about HK-47, I'm kind of excited to see Markus interact with him. When we get to that point, and I so hope we do... Oh it'd be so good.

Alright, boomlover. You did well for an organic meatbag :P

Accepting your CS! I might edit slight grammatical things here and there when I have the time, but that's really it. I don't have many qualms. Allow me to throw Markus into the binnnn
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@Sohtem oh im used to being chewed up and spit out. and then being chewed and spat out again! seriously i actually want you to critizie the fuck out of me. Because i will never learn otherwise.
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Alright, I know I'm waiting for a few other parties to make their CSes (POOHEAD in particular) but I don't believe we'll get so far in the IC they can't easily jump in. I'll be writing the IC Opener. Hopefully we shall commence on our peaceful home of Dantooine rather soon in the next few days.

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Alright glad to hear it.
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I assume we will write alot of post toghter ?
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@boomlover I'll be writing an intro post. Setting up the world, Revan, some foreshadowing, etc. Give room for people to get their characters introduced into the story-line. I am indeed hoping we will all be posting a lot. Make sure to give others time to post and catch up if they've fallen behind, etc. Think that falls under common sense but I'll say that anyway.
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Just so you know HK-47 shouldn't be n this roleplay unless we're starting in the jedi civil war because he was made after the final battele. @Dark Wind

[url]starwars.wikia.com/wiki/HK-47[url]

I wanted to bring this up before you made any plans for him.
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@vancexentan

No worries, I'm aware. Being hopeful is all. If we managed to reach the end of this so I could start a Jedi Civil War sequel, I would be OVER JOYED.
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