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I'm making the Jaeger now. In Process
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@2b3heart Ah! I didn't see this earlier, my apologizes. Looks good, but I do recommend maybe some more history will do it good, unless she's like brand spanking new. But otherwise she looks good. :)
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Name: Adramalech / Oni

Gender: Male, but not in the sense that humans understand

Age: Old

Race: Outsider (He has...fallen into this dimension)/Cyborg

Faction: GDF

Personality: Adramalech hasn't fully grasped this worlds mannerisms and nuanced speech, instead observing others more than interacting with them. This has caused a bit of alienation among his new peers, in addition to his monstrous and often time abstract appearance. However this does not bother him in the slightest, having little in common with mankind and only loyal to the GDF out of gratitude for freeing him. In fact Adramalech does not believe any of the kaiju's attacks as anything inherently wrong, only as the strong proving that they deserve to exist.

First and foremost one must remember that Adramalech is an alien to this world and doesn't conform to a conventional morality. On the one hand he sees nothing wrong with killing anyone as long as he perseveres them to be a challenge and worthy of battle. He also has no reserves against killing a superior if he believes them to be incompetent or lacking in power. However he also has a strong loyalty to those who prove their strength, following orders unquestionably as long he perceives them to be worthy of command. In addition he adheres himself completely to debts and contracts, following them in spirit and without taking advantage of loopholes. Adramalech's word is is absolute bond and he expects others to follow suit for should he discover he has been cheated or betrayed, there will be hell to pay.

History: What can be deciphered from etchings in the Phylactery and what little Adramalech has revealed himself is this, he was betrayed. For this indiscretion he went to war, a long and brutal conflict that ended with his defeat. As punishment Adramalech was imprisoned in a Phylactery, a slice of home confined within. Bound to the land by hook and ward, Adramalech was cast out to be forgotten... rotting away until the end of time. That is, until he fell through a crack. A rip through the fabric of the universe sucked him through and deposited the Phylactery deep within the Pacific.

Eventually the Phylactery was discovered, an oddity to be picked apart and studied. It's study was about to be called off, a waste of time and resources when nothing bore fruit, until an unlucky lab assistant... amputated their hands accidentally while applying high levels of electricity. With lifeblood given and a connection to this world established, Adramalech awoke and began to speak from within the Phylactery. With his guidance and the combined knowledge of science and the occult, Adramalech was able to be free. With a new lease on life and new parts to replace what was lost, Adramalech has taken up the title of "Oni" and is ready to begin repaying his debt to the GDF.

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Fatum Reactor: The energies of Adam's home plane aren't fully understood and in some cases run contrary to established scientific laws. The Phylactery generates all the power Adramalech could ever need to employ his weaponry, seemingly without end. However it seems to almost be... alive, a force that grows tired while in use but comes back in full force soon after.

Hellfire Cannon: Adams left arm is completely cybernetic, all the way up the to shoulder. The armor is durable enough to be used as a club and can take a good number of hits. However it's intended use is to house the Hellfire Cannon, an energy based weapon that uses Fatum as power. The Fatum can manifest in two fashions, a single extremely devastating blast or a continuous laser like projectile that while still incredibly dangerous, has a gentler touch. Of his abilities, the use of the Hellfire Cannon tires the Fatum the quickest and has the least efficient energy transfer. Maybe one day an upgrade will be available, but for now it is only used in short bursts.

Belphegor Rocket Batteries: Almost like a dull green, metallic backpack, lies a large rocket battery system used to rain pain upon opponents. This rockets are usually loaded specifically to combat certain foes before deployment and while very effective against his intended target, may be less so against another.

Assisted Rocket Sprint: Using Fatum energy and conventional rockets, Adam is able to charge across the battlefield with supersizing speed for a being his size. However he does not have much control in moving around as he'd like and it tires out the Fatum energy almost as bad as the Hellfire Cannon.

Cybernetic Leg: Adams right leg from the knee down has been replaced with cybernetics, nothing incredibly fancy but it has grounding spikes to keep him from being jostled too much.

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Strength: As befitting a being his size, Adam is incredibly strong and can keep up with the rest of them.

Durability: broken bits not withstanding, Adam's carapace is incredibly tough and can take a beating before having to retreat.

Bone Blade: An incredibly strong, incredibly dense bone blade juts out of his right forearm. The blade reaches past his hand a bit, looking more like a punch dagger than anything else. However when energized with Fatum energy a large, crackling fire spreads from the blade and out. This fire refines into an almost plasma like blade that can be used in melee combat or thrown an impressive distance.

Phylactery: The core, the Phylactery keeps the little Fatum energy Adramalech has alive by carrying a slice of the home plane with him wherever he goes. When things get too hairy Adramalech can retreat into the Phylactery, taking refuge on home turf and allowing his injuries heal at an increased rate. While within the Phylactery Adramalech can speak to others, forcing his will outside and speaking within the minds of others. Beyond this however he is powerless to interact with the outside world. The Phylactery itself however, is another story. Those with sufficient wills can move the Phylactery with but a thought and while not a weapon in and of itself, the defensive blades are impossibly sharp. Do with that knowledge what you will.

Size: In his true form Adramalech stands at a mighty 75 meters in height and has a great deal of weight to throw around.

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Tell me what you guys think, any feedback would be nice.
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@Pathfinder Ah, I see you've used the Cyberdemon from Doom. (I love Doom lol, especially the current game, I even based his design in an Overwatch-like RP I participate/d in, in fact you used pretty much the exact picture I used for it lol)

And I can tell you've used some chunks of Doom lore (Soul Cube reminds me of Doom 3, and both Argent Energy and Cyberdemon design being from DOOM 4). Now while the general concept of him looks good, I feel like he should be a bit more original. The design is perfectly fine as well as most of his backstory and vice versa, no problems with it, but the main concern in the use of Argent energy. While DOOM is a very good game, I feel like some of the stuff used in the game shouldn't be in this RP, specifically argent energy. And yes, I see he comes from a different dimension, buuuuut still I think we can make do without argent energy. I perfectly mind a substitute for it if it needs be, but I just don't many of DOOM's elements be partaking in this RP, as for to me it simply doesn't fit in. (I hope I'm making sense)

If you want to see my take with him, here's my CS based off him in another RP:



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@Lmpkio
I only used Argent Energy for a lack of a better term, if you got another idea for a good name I'm all ears. I could change Soul Cube to Phylactery as well.
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Holy crap, lots of characters in a short span of time 0.o

@Pathfinder
It is said that the HDD experimented on Adam while he was in his "coma", maybe they did more than just tinker with his Soul Cube? I wouldn't put it past humanity to "fix" what was "broken". We could say that Argent energy existed in HIS dimension, but disappeared into nothing because of the lack of hellish presence in OUR dimension. The scientists would later tinker with his weaponry, replacing the demonic power with nuclear or plasma based energy (the choice is up to you). This will probably put a limiter on his abilities instead of being infinite, but we should probably make him more balanced anyways :P (Or, make up some crap about his Argent Reactor recycling the power source used like it would Argent energy). Just a nickel for my thoughts.

@Lmpkio
We have alot of "good guys" in this RP, don't we? XD

I might change Ghidorah up a bit, still being "good", but intolerant of the GDF and other human organizations and their meddling. (Reasoning? They're usurping his "rule" over Humanity) He wouldn't actively seek them out, but if they somehow got in his way... Well, they wouldn't miss losing a mech or two, would they?
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Alright, made a lot of new differences. Replaced Argent Energy with Fatum, an almost living force that... doesn't make much sense if you try to look at it academically. As long as there is a sliver of "Home", there can be Fatum to manipulate. It just can get... tired if over used.
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Question, whats the cap for monster heights? I want a big guy, but I don't want him /BIG/
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@Pathfinder
I don't know in all honesty, but I'll put some perspective:

King Ghidorah was originally going to be 150 meters tall, towering over the two Pacific Rim Kaiju (Leatherback and Otachi) by twice their height.

The heights were changed so that Ghidorah was only 100 meters, and the Pacific duo were changed accordingly. Similarly, Godzilla was reduced from 100 meters to 60 meters. Unless your character is larger than Ghidorah, I think you should be okay.

Edit: I'm totally not saying that everyone should be shorter than my blonde beast because I like having him as the tallest Kaiju... not at all...
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@Lmpkio
I only used Argent Energy for a lack of a better term, if you got another idea for a good name I'm all ears. I could change Soul Cube to Phylactery as well.


That works for the cube and in regards of fantum. All good there. :)

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Question, whats the cap for monster heights? I want a big guy, but I don't want him /BIG/


100 meters is the tallest ATM, going to Ghidorah. Like Ian said, I reduced the height to make it a bit more fair to the kaiju.

(And yeah that's good with Ghidorah @ianzerep)
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@LmpkioKong: The bigger they are, the harder they fall.......I know this from experience.
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@LmpkioKong: The bigger they are, the harder they fall.......I know this from experience.


And the bigger they are, the more unfair it is to some other players :P

(It's also simply for the mechs as well but regardless I think it's balanced)
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Ay I'm interested still got room
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Ay I'm interested still got room


Come on in, there's plenty of room!
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cool, so whats taken or just plain off limits
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Character wise, this is the list of already established characters (from the movies, etc), that have been taken (OCs don't count because they're already original anyways):

Godzilla (Me)
Godzilla Jr (Me | NPC)
Kiryu (Me) (Me | NPC)
Gipsy Danger (Me)
Otachi (2b3heart)
Leatherback (2b3heart)
Biollante (spiderfucker)
SpaceGodzilla (spiderfucker)
King Ghidorah (ianzerep)
King Kong (Holy Soldier)

Size wise, the limit is around 100 meters (with Ghidorah (or Biollante) taking said title as one of the largest kaiju around). And whats is limited depends on what you make.
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Let me reserve the giant turtle, the defender of children the great Gamera
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Let me reserve the giant turtle, the defender of children the great Gamera


Yay! :D Go for it man.
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