@arockysmith Feel free to post! Since it's a small get together and not much has happened yet, you can definitely make a post and not cut off someone's ability to respond at this point.
sorry for the delay on my part. I only get online a couple times a week on reliable internet (my personal is slow as cold molasses and it invites much swearing and threatening of computers). I shall endevour to get a post up in a reasonably short time.
I don't know if you would consider this or not but I am an old fart and reading the spoken parts of the narration (a sort of deep fuchsia/purple color) is impossible for me unless I highlight it. Is there any chance I could encourage you to change it to a different color...something lighter that stands out against the black? Don't want to be a bother so I can just keep highlighting it if changes make it difficult for others.
The start of this reminds me of that movie Would You Rather on netflix. Each person chosen for their skills though rather than because their family is having health issues. and instead of playing would you rather and possibly dying its "go on this quest and maybe don't die"
I will be posting very soon. I do apologize, I've been dealing with a little touch of heat exhaustion. The hellfire of summer hasn't dissipated from my locale just yet. Anywho, I'll be getting a post up very soon! Sorry for the delay!