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I see. I'll work on here as a character in my next post. xD Death and War are about to cause a massive amount of chaos and destruction. xD And with Viran out of commission it's most likely going to be a hell of a fight.


Isn't it a bit early for that type of fight? O_o

I think it'll be best if we hold off and get some actual character development done before going fully into another major boss battle. After all, the mana fight was a major killer since we were constantly fighting for more than three months.
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Mike where did the explosion come from when you're in a dojo? Last I checked your only power was shape shifting and you didn't post a fight post in the IC so nobody knows what the hell happened...

Spike, Take no offence on what I'm about to say but in all honesty I think you should read everyone else's posts and then your own. Everyone is giving off details about what they are doing and exactly how they are doing it as are we all following a lot of logic in our posts (with few exceptions like making the human body handle a punch from our speedsters... punches than could make entire bodies explode). We all try and contribute to the RP in some way, shape and form and while I do understand that you just joined, you're also causing a lot more questions than you are answers and half of these questions are getting ignored in your posts, causing the up-most confusion.

I don't like putting labels on RPs that I am in though in this case I can honestly tell you that this RP is a high-Casual RP where we all do try to focus on the qualities of our posts and give a decent quantity. Similar to the Advanced section though we are not as strict when it comes to posting. Sadly though you're not giving us much quality, which I think is mostly because of your posting style more than you itself. It's different though I also think that it's also out of place here and that you might be better off in another RP than this one.

The problem isn't you as a person as much as it's you as an RPer right now. From what I can tell you're used to free and low-casual RPs where things happen fast and posts can effectively lose a lot of information and still be called good. This is okay though (I honestly can't handle Free myself) but that RP style is rather out of place here. Now, We, the GMs are willing to give off a final chance if you truly think you can make an improvement in your posts to better fit into the RP. Though, By GM decision, if you can't I'm afraid the best option for you is to leave this RP and find one that is more suited for your RP style.
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Drakel said
Isn't it a bit early for that type of fight? O_o I think it'll be best if we hold off and get some actual character development done before going fully into another major boss battle. After all, the mana fight was a major killer since we were constantly fighting for more than three months.


Oops. I posted before I saw that. I can have them leave and let the titans deal with the after effects of what they did though. I'll try and edit my post.

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...And I just saw that Sinna's father lives in Eden. Crap.
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I was going to explain the explosion in the next post, though looking at it after the post. I should do some alteration to it myself as for Free to low casual. Honestly, I want to leave the free rp section, too many one liners and plots that happen too fast so I'm never ever sure about what I'm doing
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Oops. I posted before I saw that. I can have them leave and let the titans deal with the after effects of what they did though. I'll try and edit my post.EDIT...And I just saw that Sinna's father lives in Eden. Crap.

Tis all good...

And yeah, He does... as does her sister since they are the cliche rich family lol xD

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I was going to explain the explosion in the next post, though looking at it after the post. I should do some alteration to it myself as for Free to low casual. Honestly, I want to leave the free rp section, too many one liners and plots that happen too fast so I'm never ever sure about what I'm doing

That wasn't really a good idea. Things like that are major things and if leaves the reader questioning "How, why and when?" than it might need some explaining then and there... I also suggest again that you read everyone's posts and do a compare and contrast between our posts and yours if you really want to break away from free. Remember, quality. Contribute in some way, shape and form in the IC, give off explanations for simple things (like the explosion and what happened in the fight)...
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I've edited the post, giving a lot more but I'm wondering if I need to do more studying on beast boy's powers.
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I've edited the post, giving a lot more but I'm wondering if I need to do more studying on beast boy's powers.


Yes
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Alrighty then, I'll put some time aside to study on him tomorrow to get a better understanding of his powers
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I'm considering a high level fight between Prime and someone. Who's game?

As to Grant, I'm writing his post.

EDIT: Google Cyborg-Superman (the new 52 version for an idea of his general body shape. His face is this:
his general body shape is this:
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Shadowhawk and the Sentinels?

Keep in mind there are eight of them
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Well, prime has a body made of Prometheum and is superstrong plus he can fly. I'm sure he can handle a few of em.
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Keep in mind everyone who is about to fight that Eden is now pretty much a flaming wasteland under attack from shadow creatures. Hundreds of them.
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I apologize for not posting for my characters. Lately I have felt unwell and depressed.
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Shadowhawk and the Sentinels? Keep in mind there are eight of them


Posted for Prime, Stryder.
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DeathstrokeSW said
Well, prime has a body made of Prometheum and is superstrong plus he can fly. I'm sure he can handle a few of em.


So then the team could deploy separately: Darkstar , Shadowhawk, Ironsight, and Surge could fight Prime

Ace, Bishop, Spellthief, and Archangel could fight the shadows
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Posted for Prime, Stryder.


Coolio, and now I shall think up nice post
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Can anyone tell me what has happened lately? I am kinda at a lost.
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What? He just walked in? O.o

Also, don't say the team is doing anything, those are my characters, minus Spellthief who is Drakel's

you do remember what the Sentinel Base looked like right?

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I actually saw it as more of a " alarm in the city/fight in town square" thing. I can edit if you wish....
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I actually saw it as more of a " alarm in the city/fight in town square" thing. I can edit if you wish....


Please, I made in edit in that post I made above.

Is he attempting to fight them? If he is then actually have him do something offensive
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