[OOC] Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG Season 2- New Horizons (Closed)

[VATROU]

I still prefer Citadel myself for Maddy. As Valencium sounds complicated to say and just not as fun.

[Alternax]

You know, honestly the name isn't that bad. What is bad, however, is that I've only felt like writing late at night recently. Is it the same for any of you guys?

My Hider

I'm sorry guys, I can't edit this anymore or I'll go mad, I'm on like draft 7, it's not worth it. I just wanted to fight an airplane, and then go fight the Hounds with everyone.

[VATROU]

Good times, I don't get a day off from work until after next week. Gonna put me in a tough spot writing wise. But I'll see what I can do to not fall behind.

[nitemare shape]

I'm trying to get something going, but I'm having a major case of writer's block. I'm gonna try and keep at it today and hopefully something will work

[Fallenreaper]

I'm trying to get something going, but I'm having a major case of writer's block. I'm gonna try and keep at it today and hopefully something will work

@nitemare shape

*takes out your brain, gives it a shock then inserts it back in* there, now try it?

[Dedonus]

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*takes out your brain, gives it a shock then inserts it back in* there, now try it?

@Fallenreaper

That probably would do more damage than good. lol

[Fallenreaper]

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That probably would do more damage than good. lol

@Dedonus

Nay. It's just like jump starting a car. Just got to give it a kick start.

[Jaredthefox92]

Hello everyone, I was just wondering if I could enter my supervillainess Girliath onto the side of the villains. If anyone would be nice enough to direct me to a template and a place to post her info that would be greatly appreciated.

[VATROU]

@Jaredthefox92 Post them in this chat to be approved.

Character you have created:
Alias:
Speech Color:
Character Alignment:
Identity:
Character Personality:
Uniform/costume:
Origin Info/Details:
Hero Type:
Power Level:
Powers:
Attributes (Select one at each category):

Height:
Weight:
Strength Level:
Speed/Reaction Timing Level:
Endurance at MAXIMUM Effort:
Agility:
Intelligence:
Fighting Skill:
Resources:

Weaknesses:
Supporting Characters:
Do you know how to post pictures on RPG boards?:
Sample Post:

[Dedonus]

@Jaredthefox92: All necessary info is in the OP.

[Jaredthefox92]

Character you have created: Lulissa Thomas
Alias: Girliath
Speech Color: Pink
Character Alignment: Neutral Evil
Identity: N/A
Character Personality: Young, energetic,playful,ditzy, naive, emotional, loyal, dense, temperamental.
Uniform/costume:
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Origin Info/Details:

As a child Lulissa was always mocked due to her lack of intelligence. While she was quite capable of preforming minimal and routine tasks that normal people could do and was quite gifted at dance and culinary arts she was still belittled due to her inability to match up with her fellow students in terms of academia At most she would receive average grades and worst she would come home with c-‘s at best. About the only class she really excelled in was gym class, where she was known to be very athletic and one of the quickest in terms of reflexes, eventually leading her to becoming a cheerleader.

However that all changed when she accidentally inhaled a strange top secret chemical from a leak near Atlanta’s Center for Disease Control center. While many thought this was a terrorist attack, Lulissa was quickly forced into quarantined as she was forced to be tested for biological agents such as anthrax, secretly the people in charge of the CDC were working on a top secret chemical that could be used to give someone a benign and non-malicious form of super cancer that would alter the subjects’ very on DNA to turn them into what the US government believed could be considered “super soldiers”. Lulissa was cleared by the CDC to not be infected by any form of life threatening ailment and released publicly.

Once she came back to school however word had spread of this incident and people became cautious that she was still contaminated. Soon her social life dwindled and eventually she was so upset that she quit her school’s cheerleading squad. Eventually though she started to notice she had become larger and taller when angered. While at first she just thought she was still going through puberty eventually at one point she grew so large that her head broke through the roof of her house. At first she became worried but later on she was able to control it and revert herself back to normal.

An incident happened at school that would forever lead Lulissa down the path of villainy. She returned to school one day only to find that she was replaced in her position in the cheer squad by her rival, Becky. Lulissa became furious about these events transpiring that her anger fueled her new found powers to where she grew up to 13ft. Still agitated Lulissa burst through a wall of her school and stomped over towards the football field where the other cheerleaders were rehearsing. As Lulissa approached them she grew larger and larger until she was no less than 30ft tall.

The girls saw her approach and frantically tried to flee from her, however Lulissa was able to grab hold of Becky and bring her up to her face. She intimidated Becky so much that the young woman passed out in fright. Lulissa then realized what she did and looked behind her to see that she had totaled several cars from the school’s parking lot to the field and caused other damage. Worried that she would get into more trouble Lulissa put Becky down and ran away to hide from the police. Eventually this event would follow her down her life as she became more in more trouble with the law until she decided that a life of crime and villainy was her fate.

Hero Type: Brick/Muscle (even though she changes size, basically it's to become stronger and more durable.)
Power Level: City Level
Powers: Size-manipulation, growth, super strength, super endurance, concussive resistance.
Attributes (Select one at each category):
Height: 5,0ft-100ft (Usually around 30ft-50ft, however around 100ft she begins to strain herself and consume a lot more stored energy thus this is limited to last ditch effort.)
Weight: Varies due to power
Strength Level: 70-80 tons (I think)
Speed/Reaction Timing Level: Normal Human (She can actually become slower when giant,however her legs do allow her to cover more distance.)
Endurance at MAXIMUM Effort: 3 hours
Agility: Human (to slower when giant.)
Intelligence: Slightly below average, to around average. 90 IQ
Fighting Skill: Untrained
Resources: Minimal

Weaknesses:
.Slower in reflexes when giant
.Easily confused
.Able to be overwhelmed by multiple smaller opponents
.Her emotions tie into her power and cause her to shrink back under certain circumstances.
.She cannot dodge well when giant.
.Nearly every non-conventional attack can affect her. (Anything other than dakka)
.If her metabolism wares out she will shrink back to normal.
.Lack of planning and strategy.
.She makes poor AA, all she can do is swat at jets and helicopters as well as toss objects at them or attempt to punch them out of the sky.
Supporting Characters:
Do you know how to post pictures on RPG boards?:

Sample Post:

(Note: This is old and from 2015, please take into account I haven't used her in a while and also I've added her Dixie accent later on.)

Lulissa had been running all day, sweat was dripping downwards from her normally clean and dry face. She had hidden in a dank and dark alleyway for at least ten minutes now. She crouched low behind a nearby dumpster while holding her nose as she saw beams of light beaming out from the entrance to the alleyway.

“Oh, why won’t these knuckleheads just leave me alone?”

For the past several weeks Lulissa had been on the run. Ever her little ‘incident’ at her college football field, she had been away from her family and was on the lam, running away from the law. She was happy that she found a way to revert back to her normal self on her own, but she felt that she was branded for life as a criminal, or worse a monster.

Lulissa watched and waited for the flashlights to go away and for the police car to continue on its search. She could hear the rain drops drizzle. On the police and their car as they looked around. This combined with the chatter in their walkie talkies made her more and more tense. Soon however the police gave up their search and moved on to a new location. The rainy sky hovering over Atlanta started to pick up and soon the rain was pouring upon the tacky fedora she stole.

“Great, just great” Lulissa muttered.

She poked her head out to see if there was anyone nearby starring into the alleyway, fortunately the path was all clear of onlookers and she felt it was safe to move out behind the rancid dumpster. She quietly crept out of the murky alleyway while covered in the ugly and smelly trench coat and fedora she had the displeasure of acquiring.

“At least I’ll look so bad nobody will want to deal with me.” She thought to herself as she casually walked out of the alleyway and onto the sidewalk.

Calmly, the young woman started to walk while putting her hands inside the coat’s damp sleeves to stay warm. It was abnormally cool that night and she always preferred nice and warm summer and spring weather over the chilling winter personally. Still she had little choice but to deal with it.

As she walked, began to notice that much to her luck others were wearing such attire, not including the fedora of course due to the weather. However they had the good fortune to own umbrellas whereas she did not.Lulissa tried not to think about it and calmly walked down the rain covered sidewalk in order to find a nice and warm place to seek shelter for the night. All the times she had complained to her parents about the thermostat or her bedroom she began to immediately regret.

However Lulissa knew she couldn’t go back now. She was now a wanted fugitive and to make matters worse, she was more than an embarrassment to her mother and father, she was now dangerous to be around them whether she wanted to be or not.

“Man I gotta find someplace to crash tonight, I’m getting really tired” she said as she let out a slight yawn.
While Lulissa continued to tread down the rain covered sidewalk she could see fewer and fewer people walking down the streets. It was past midnight and she was moving in Dekalb County, one of the most dangerous parts of Atlanta. She began to feel lonely and worried about where she would sleep. As she walked she started to dose of until something caught her attentions someone had walked up behind her, someone a little bit too close.

“Hey their hun, where you goin this time of night?”

Lulissa started to get nervous. She tried to ignore her follower, but he grabbed the side of her shoulder. She thought fast and tried to conjure up what she could make as the best male voice she could muster.

“Why um, I’m just going home to be with my family mister.”

“Heh, you ain’t foolin nobody with that silly accent girl. I can see that pretty little blonde hair you got there.”

“Darn” she said in her normal voice.

“Now why don’t we just walk over there behind that store?” The man said while pointing a pistol to her back.

“Uhh-ok.”

“Good, now just keep walkin and don’t try any funny stuff.” The man said as he poked his gun into her back.

Lulissa complied and she slowly moved back into yet another alleyway, yet this time she was accompanied by this unsavory individual. As she moved she could feel the barrel of the gun continue to poke her in the back. She had but little choice as she wouldn’t be able to escape.

Soon she entered this alleyway. Above her the sky started to clear radiating moonlight above her. The man seemed to be able to see her clearly and was right behind her.

“Ok, now take off that coat of yours, rains gone.”

“But, I.”

“Take it off now!” He said, taking off the safety of his pistol.

“Ugh, fine.” She said, taking off her coat to revel her outfit she wore on the day before the indecent.

It was a simple pink shirt and grey sweatpants. Nothing flashy or major, however it did still catch the attention of her captor. She turned around and starred as the man who seemed to be observing her body with somewhat of a pleased expression.

“There, happy now?”

“You bet. Now move back over to corner over there.”

“Make me jerk!”

The man then aimed his weapon at her chest. However Lulissa had had enough, her entire day and night made her miserable and she was very cranky due to the lack of sleep she was not getting. She had enough and just couldn’t take this unsavory individual having his way with her.

“Don’t make me bust a cap in you hun.” The man said with a bit more exclamation.

“Go ahead punk, see what happens next.” She said

Soon Lulissa forcefully approached her captor as if she wanted to move past him, the man in agitation fired a shot straight at her chest. She closed her eyes and heard the whizzing of the bullet as it moved closer to her right before it impacted her chest. She heard a clank and then opened her eyes.

The man was astonished as he witnessed what happened. The bullet had not only had little impact with her, but it was bent as if it hit a hard surface and ricochet onto the ground.

“What? You wearing some sort of armor or somethin under dat bra?”

“Pff you wish creep. Now’s the what happens next part!”

The man panicked and unloaded several more rounds at her. He seemed to have horrible aim as most of his shots were aimed below her head. The bullets whizzed at her and impacted her belly, her lower torso, and her sides. All had the same effect as previously however.

“Y-you ain’t human!”

“Shut up! I’m no more of a monster than you are!” She said.

The man dropped the gun and pulled out a knife in fear in order to engage her in melee
combat and then make his example, however Lulissa merely grinned. She closed her eyes and before the man could blink, she had grown larger than him! She was no less than seven feet tall!

“You freak!” The man said while swiping at her in a panicked and uncoordinated way.

Lulissa simply grabbed him by the arm and lifted him up. He started to groan in pain as his body was hoisted up by his arm. Soon he saw her as she became larger and grew another foot.

“L-let me go! Let me go!”

“Oh I’ll let you go.” Lulissa said as she grinned.

She then grabbed him by the shirt and before he could free himself, she turned around and tossed him at several trash cans at the end of the alleyway. He was flung almost effortlessly at the cans before impacting them and causing a loud clang as both of the can's lids tossed over and spewed garbage all over him.

“Hmph..horrible little man, now it’s your turn to smell like junk.” She said.

Lulissa began to shrank back to normal and proceeded to pick up and put back on her trench coat, then her fedora. She then walked outside of the alleyway while she could hear the groaning of the man. She had to get out of there before she was discovered, she knew that he wouldn’t be getting up anytime soon but the gunshots would alert anyone around her. Soon she heard sirens and she started to run in the opposite direction.

“Just my luck” Lulissa said as she sighed.

[Dedonus]

@Jaredthefox92: I don't know if that's just a WIP or a completed CS, but please reference the OP for information on how to correctly fill out the character sheet.

Things you are missing:
-Sample Post
-Correctly filling out the "Power/Attribute" section
-Origin section needs to me more than a sentence

[Jaredthefox92]

Right, I fixed her bio but what would be a sample? I mean do you want her to just monologue or do you want something from my actual story she was in? It's a very old story so I didnd't have her talk all that much.

[VATROU]

Right, I fixed her bio but what would be a sample? I mean do you want her to just monologue or do you want something from my actual story she was in? It's a very old story so I didnd't have her talk all that much.

@Jaredthefox92

Usually a short story that could be either plot related or something you just whipped up that may or may not take place.

[Jaredthefox92]

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Usually a short story that could be either plot related or something you just whipped up that may or may not take place.

@VATROU

The story I've written for her didn't build up until the final part where she was giant. However, I do have this. I don't think it's good though but hey this story was made back in 2015. I've kind of had Girliath on the shelf due to her being an OC and more people seem to take intrest into my FC's. Anyways, I'll try to post what I have.

[nitemare shape]

My only real concern is just how big she can get. I'm not sure that someone who can grow to the size of a kaiju really fits with this setting. Might I suggest limiting her growth more to the levels of say, Giant Man or Giganta.

[Jaredthefox92]

My only real concern is just how big she can get. I'm not sure that someone who can grow to the size of a kaiju really fits with this setting. Might I suggest limiting her growth more to the levels of say, Giant Man or Giganta.

@nitemare shape

Alright, I can do that. Around which ballpark would you think fits for a decent and yet formidable maximum size?

[Dedonus]

I would also suggest changing the 9/11 reference. Although we have a sliding timeline (since time passes faster in real life than in IC), the current year is somewhere between 2014 and 2018.

[Jaredthefox92]

I would also suggest changing the 9/11 reference. Although we have a sliding timeline (since time passes faster in real life than in IC), the current year is somewhere between 2014 and 2018.

@Dedonus

Okay, I just tried to do the DC/Marvel thing now where they try to tie in real life events. I wanted to make her backstory semi-realistic.

[Dedonus]

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Okay, I just tried to do the DC/Marvel thing now where they try to tie in real life events. I wanted to make her backstory semi-realistic.

@Jaredthefox92

Tying her backstory to real life events are okay. 9/11 is just a little to far in the past (she would be in her late 30's in the IC otherwise).