@Rawk I had received complaints about that before - I wasn't convinced it was that bad until I re-read it on my phone and realized it was really straining to read.
I have an RP going in that universe right now and I'm honestly enjoying it the most I've ever enjoyed an RP (might be due to having an amazing partner, but still!) so I'm definitely thankful that I decided to keep that shit laying around.
If you ever find time, I'd love to do another RP in that setting.