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Timelines are great, and so is a division between the upper and lower classes in Hylo.

So is there a sort of nobility in addition to the Royal Family?

Where does the religion get it's priests? Are they nobility, or do they specifically look for people who could be taught to build and repair Colossi?

What sort of power does the Colossi Priesthood have? They must be in some level of control of the military, if we're going with their role as the technicians in charge of the their mecha.

So priesthood brings some prestige with the upper classes(though, possibly some disdain from the lower in recent years). Imagine poorer, desperate people "selling" their children(after extensive intelligence and aptitude tests) to the priesthood. They would have a better life, and would cease to be a strain on the family. But in return, they are disconnected from(and possibly even completely rejected by) the lower class community that they were born into.

So how does the Hyloan royalty keep their control of the lower classes? Or, maybe they don't. Maybe in the last eight years they have been quickly losing control of the populace, and are resorting to military measures to keep the peace in their own borders.

EDIT: Oh, and what exactly did the Outcast Guild start up for? What's their mission statement, and who started it?
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Timelines are great, and so is a division between the upper and lower classes in Hylo.

So is there a sort of nobility in addition to the Royal Family?

Where does the religion get it's priests? Are they nobility, or do they specifically look for people who could be taught to build and repair Colossi?

What sort of power does the Colossi Priesthood have? They must be in some level of control of the military, if we're going with their role as the technicians in charge of the their mecha.

So priesthood brings some prestige with the upper classes(though, possibly some disdain from the lower in recent years). Imagine poorer, desperate people "selling" their children(after extensive intelligence and aptitude tests) to the priesthood. They would have a better life, and would cease to be a strain on the family. But in return, they are disconnected from(and possibly even completely rejected by) the lower class community that they were born into.

So how does the Hyloan royalty keep their control of the lower classes? Or, maybe they don't. Maybe in the last eight years they have been quickly losing control of the populace, and are resorting to military measures to keep the peace in their own borders.

EDIT: Oh, and what exactly did the Outcast Guild start up for? What's their mission statement, and who started it?


Yes there are lords and ladies, Dukes, Barons etc, its a pretty wide class. There are also select wealthy families who make up the elite class.

The Monks are more like shamans than priests and they are recruited for their historical knowledge, a lot of them spend their days as archeologists, uncovering old statues of the colossi and early mecha designs.

The Hylo empire is the least war damaged of the 3 nations after the great war so most people stay there for the highest standard of lving, But the nation is so proud that it doesnt let any of its citizens in or out of the country (legally) so a lot of people are arrested and killed at the borders. Which instills fear into the citizens. The taxes are also very high which essentially keep most people shackled to the empire.

The Outcast Guild is going to be the faction of the players in this RP, its an Adventurer/Explorer/Mercenary group that represent the fortune reigon as a whole and to keep an eye on disturbances and activites in the area, specifically from the other 3 nations and to learn what they are up to.
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@Dynamo Frokane

WHO DARES SUMMON THE GREAT SKEPIC!?

OH...... ITS YOU........ (dammit, I'm busy making tacos right now,)

I like the idea in concept. There's plenty of potential that not only you could flesh out, but other players could in their backstories. So yeah, you got my interest. I'm game if this takes off.

Takes off.....

*Cries in corner* Don't worry, my little Ava, I shall revive you in this RP! (I jest, I jest)
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I'll pull up a rough draft of a CS and see if you like it ( cs draft of another rp and will be edited to fit but lemme know what you think.) Adding it in a second



Remember I will be editing this but this is what I was thinking for a cs or at least the beginning concepts
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@FallenTrinity Well I will say the Mech profile seems fine, obviously I havent quite figured how to work in all the specs for the mecha character sheet but I can see your machine being pretty well adapted.

But as far as the actual character, youre better off creating a totally new one. What youve got submitted is suited to an alternative earth 'realistic' style RP. Real world countries like the USA and what not do not exist on Orio, also our RP characters would not be part of any national military as they are in the fortune state (they may be ex military or from a different reigon originally) Also I would be using Drawn/CG images for our characters as apposed to real life pictures.

So in short, Mech is fine, character needs overhaul.
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Oh I figured as much but first the rp will need to be sorted out before any work is done to my character. So far what do we have?
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Fortune Reigon (The Freelands)


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Oh I figured as much but first the rp will need to be sorted out before any work is done to my character. So far what do we have?


Ive just added some full descriptions of the Hylo and Therux nations, along with post war synopsis, to help flesh out the world. I'm currently writing up profiles for the Leadership of each nation, and ive added some pictures for some areas in the Fortune reigon, its important that I get the lore of the world built properly first.
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(WIP) LEADERSHIP



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So if there's a Prime Minister, I take it there is a series of other ministers(Minister of Defense, Minister of State, Minister of Agriculture etc).

If you like, I can come up with a series of short bios for such people as them and various nobles in Hylo. Just to kind of fill the ranks, you know?

EDIT: Is there gonna be an aesthetic differentiation between mechs from different countries?
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So if there's a Prime Minister, I take it there is a series of other ministers(Minister of Defense, Minister of State, Minister of Agriculture etc).

If you like, I can come up with a series of short bios for such people as them and various nobles in Hylo. Just to kind of fill the ranks, you know?

EDIT: Is there gonna be an aesthetic differentiation between mechs from different countries?


Yes you have full permission to fill out the ministers, also a few of the Lords, Barons and Duchesses of Hylo.

There are no major differences, Mechs are very personalised to the individual, but Hylo mechs tend to be of brighter noble colours such as red, white purple and gold. and Therux Mechs usually are of more earthy colours such as brown, green and grey.
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Swell, I'll throw some things together for those.
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Oooh, character idea.

Solar poacher: Has a mech with a large built in battery, and on board equipment to receive the microwave beamed energy from orbital solar farms. Hangs around the solar receiving facilities, illegally siphoning off power from space, and selling it in out of the way villages.
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Just though about this...if there is nobility in this... Is there a possibility that the only reason a coalition was even created was because of a promised marriage arrangement?
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Just though about this...if there is nobility in this... Is there a possibility that the only reason a coalition was even created was because of a promised marriage arrangement?


No, at least not in this case. I have to write up the Bio, but although she is supposed to miss her husband, Barval is fiercly independent, and Idelogically is very against everything the Therux stand for (Democratic Socialism, Secularism, Free Trade) and vice versa. The reason the coalition was formed was because of joined fear that the Northern Frontier was going to stockpile Super Elite Mecha Weapons and attempt to take over the world. The present time in the RP is actually the day the Coalition is dissolved, which sets the story in motion.
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Oooh, character idea.

Solar poacher: Has a mech with a large built in battery, and on board equipment to receive the microwave beamed energy from orbital solar farms. Hangs around the solar receiving facilities, illegally siphoning off power from space, and selling it in out of the way villages.


This would be a Hylo Noble who is working outside the law?

EDIT: I'm going to start work on the OOC, just to keep it all nice and clean, if you could submit the Minister and Royalty ideas in this interest check, and then when I approve them I'll post them in the OOC main thread.
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This would be a Hylo Noble who is working outside the law?

EDIT: I'm going to start work on the OOC, just to keep it all nice and clean, if you could submit the Minister and Royalty ideas in this interest check, and then when I approve them I'll post them in the OOC main thread.


Oh, no, that idea wasn't meant to be related to my write up for nobles and such.

Probably my main character, and they would be a sort of black marketeer in the Fortune Region.
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