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Blake hit the nos making hisncar get a boost as he jumped over the bridge and and making it to first place. And he watched as he worried for Adelfa
.come on come on please make it over or stop st the end. Be safe. He watched as cars got over the bridge
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Adelfa made it to the bridge, headstrong on her decision to jump it. She knew where he installed the nos switch, but then again... When should she hit it? At the base of the bridge? In the middle? At the end? Adelfa didn't have time to think. Actually, her thinking cost her time! She was nearly at the end of the bridge when she finally hit the switch. Her car sped up until finally she was sent flying over the gap. Her heart seemed to stop in the few moments of airtime she had.
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Blake watched and said," come on come on land make it make it." He looked worried as this was her first race and well he was just worried about her
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Adelfa's car hit the other end of the bridge. "I made it!" she screamed within the confines of her car. It was true, she had landed on the other side of the bridge, but due to the late activation her car was still emitting the last bit of nos, and she was struggling to keep control of the car. It was easy to pick out her swerving car amount the perfectly landing cars.
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Blake watched and said get control. Don't lwt it swerve.." He stepped forward and was about to get ready to get into his car.
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"I know, I know!" Adelfa shouted, trying to keep control of her car. Why did she do this anyway? She couldn't remember, and it didn't matter. Akita's car swerved and rolled over, luckily not crashing into any of the surrounding. Her car came to a stop, but not without obvious damage. During the roll, Adelfa's head hit the roof of her car, causing her to lose consciousness.

"Adelfa!" Calix screamed from where he stood in the audience. He raced to the wreckage, glad there was no smoke emitting from the car. Why hadn't he stopped her from competing?
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Blake said," damn!" He go into his car and got her her as her brother got there. He got out and said," help me get her into the car." And he opned the door to her side and said," Calix hurry!"
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"Right!" Calix shouted pulling his twin out of the car. At one point he wanted to strangle Blake for getting her into this whole racing thing. On the other hand, this would be the quickest way to get her to the hospital. He scooped his sister out of the driver's seat and transferred her to Blake's car. He placed her in the back seat and hopped into the front. "Hurry, we need to get her to the hospital!"
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He hopped into the drivers side and nodded and the took off full speed as he quickly went to the neatest hospital and he said," hold on Adelfa we're almost there at the hospital." As they got there. Blake got her out and ran into the hospital with her and the nurses took her from him and sighs. Punches the wall.
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Calix angrily watched his sister get wheeled off from the emergency room. He heard Blake's fist hit the wall and shook his head. "This is all your fault," he growled, clenching his fist. "Come on, let's go outside," he muttered. There was no point in being inside the crowded waiting room. At least outside they could both get fresh air and think.
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He said," i told her not to jump." He nodded," yea it's my fault. Its all my fault." He walked outside, and leaned his head against the wall.
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"She shouldn't have been in the race at all!" Calix shouted. He went to the nearest bench and plopped down. He was surprised that Blake admitted his mistake, he expected some sort of argument. Calix pulled out his phone and opened up his contacts. He lingered on his mother's phone number. "What do you think I'm supposed to tell her? 'Hey mom, dad! Your daughter just got in a major car accident from a street race! Yeah, I'm not sure how badly she was hurt, there was some blood and she wasn't awake... I'm sure it'll be fine!' How can I say that? Why was she even in the race?"
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He looked at him and said, We'll think of something. Im not sure wasn't it for her birthday?" He sits down next to him and said," should have stopped her from jumping that bridge even if it costed me the race. I was way to ahead to of her and the other races." He looked down and sighed
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"I need to tell my parents soon," Calix said and turned off his phone's screen. "I don't know what I would do if..." he muttered. Why did he let her race? He shook his head. Hoping and wishing wasn't going to help anything. "I don't know if I can stand the wait."
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He looked at him and said," she's strong i believe she could get through this." He looks down and clenched his fist.
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"What do you know about her?" Calix asked, his voice full of venom.
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He said," I know she's stubborn, kind hearted person." He looked at her and sighed as he stood up.
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"That's all you know?" Calix asked, shaking his head. Anyone could see those attributes on the surface. "Look I'm going to call my parents, they need to know." Calix once again withdrew his phone and lingered on the number. How would he say it?
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He looked abd sighed. He didn't say anything. He looked as he walked into the hospital to get whats going on. After a few hours blake was in there and looked at her and sighed.
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Finally Adelfa was out of surgery and in a room, where Blake, Calix, and her parents stood around her bed. The doctors informed them she wouldn't wake up for some hours, but she would be okay. Parts of her face were bandaged, she had a minor concussion, and she fractured her wrist, but nothing much more serious than that.

"I'm glad you'll be okay," her mother said, setting a gentle hand on her daughter's face.

Her father looked from Adelfa to Calix. "What she did was stupid. You should have stopped her Calix. I thought you were better than this." It was easy to see how disappointed he was in his son.

"But dad, I..." There wasn't much Calix could say.
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