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Oh. I dont know if that would be necessary. With Chic at around the top floor and Easy at the front door, Eli was going to sneak in the back.
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Oh. I dont know if that would be necessary. With Chic at around the top floor and Easy at the front door, Eli was going to sneak in the back.


Well either way, I'll wait for your post before doing any updating.
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@Superboy Wont be able to post tonight, but I'll get something up tomorrow.
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What sort of specifics were you looking for about Vis manipulation?


Okay, so my questions are:

1. Limitations and ranges. How far can Anton teleport himself or something else?
2. Does Anton need to be touching something to teleport it?
3. What would happen if a Draoi tried to cast a spell without a focus?
4. How is advancement handled? Is Anton, as a weak, out-of-practice Draoi, completely unable to cast anything besides teleportation spells, or can he perform other Lux spells with less proficiency?
5. Enchantment and alchemy. How long does it take to enchant something, how much can it do, and what limitations are there? And what can be done with alchemy?

I've probably got more questions, so I'll write them as they come to me.
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Okay, so my questions are:

1. Limitations and ranges. How far can Anton teleport himself or something else?
2. Does Anton need to be touching something to teleport it?
3. What would happen if a Draoi tried to cast a spell without a focus?
4. How is advancement handled? Is Anton, as a weak, out-of-practice Draoi, completely unable to cast anything besides teleportation spells, or can he perform other Lux spells with less proficiency?
5. Enchantment and alchemy. How long does it take to enchant something, how much can it do, and what limitations are there? And what can be done with alchemy?

I've probably got more questions, so I'll write them as they come to me.


1. Range should likely be kept in a two to five mile radius. This could fluctuate pending what exactly Anton is teleporting with him.

2. Up to you, if he was a Hyperhuman I would say yes but because his teleportation is based in Vis manipulation he could cast it without physically touching an object if you so wish. I would suggest keeping it to objects within visual range. But you could make it so he can summon items via teleporting them from say his apartment.

3. Without a conduit, a Draoi channeling the Vis is like using a wire with too small of a gauge for the current going through it. So while the wire will transfer the current, it's also burning itself out until it destroys itself. Likewise, a Draoi might be able to cast a spell or two without a conduit but it's going to be incredibly harmful and ultimately lethal.

4. He can perform other spells with less proficiency. In terms of advancement, I just look to you as a writer to develop your character preferably in a natural way. There may be times in the IC where time is skipped and you can have your character develop off screen as well. Ultimately as the RP progresses and Anton uses his abilities, it is assumed his proficiency and skill is also increasing.

5. Enchantments are limited to a single effect per item. The time to create and potency of an enchantment is directly related to the Draoi performing it. So a Master Draoi could enchant a cloak to repel almost all forms of harm while a novice Draoi could make the cloak resistant to tears or cuts. The size of the object being enchanted is also a factor to consider. At most, an enchantment is going to take a couple hours to perform.

Alchemy and Enchantments are directly related as most enchantments are based in alchemy but alchemy is also directly related to the creation of elixirs. Elixirs are beneficial consumables compared to potions which generally are used for more harmful effects. Due to the time it takes to prepare these concoctions, they are more potent than spells. Elixirs may have permanent effects, such as increasing one's life span but potions often have a much less duration of effect due to the increased potency. However as many potions are lethal, duration of effect isn't much of a concern.

Hope that helps.
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...

I didn't want it to be that long but I feel like there is just so much I need to cover. x.x

Edit: So probably don't read all of my post. I should have probably cut stuff.
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Fear agus Beithíoch

Gavin O’Brien Januray, 1982 ( 35 ) Male HyperHuman

"If you see something going down, and you can stop it. But can also inadvertently make it worse easily, should you intervene?"

▼ A P P E A R A N C E:

"I may not look like much, but that is because I don’t feel like killing anyone right now."
//STATS:
◼ HEIGHT | 5’ 10”

◼ WEIGHT | 173 lb.

◼ BUILD | Muscular, slightly malformed.

◼ HAIR COLOR | Black.

◼ EYE COLOR | Iris and Pupil is same shade of black.

◼ OTHER | Due to the genetic alteration caused by the Hype-Gene, this all approx. 100,000 miles of Gavin’s blood vessels are illuminated orange at different intensities depending on context. This varies from 30 to 60 lumens (bright enough to be noticeable through skin, but not bright enough to read something in the dark)

//DESCRIPTION:
Due to the luminous blood, Gavin opts to cover his entire body. Typically he wears boots, cargo jeans, a pair of work gloves, long-sleeved t-shirt under a hoodie, and a mask covering the face.
While his entire blood has a soft glow, normally, only blood in the superficial veins/arteries will be noticeable.
Gavin is slow to trusting others and tends to reveal little about himself. Preferring solitude, he can on occasion be prodded into working in small groups.

▼ B I O G R A P H Y:

"Sometimes I can still hear the screams."
Gavin was born in central texas to a 5th generation military family. So it was just natural he continued the tradition and enlisted shortly after turning 18. Since Gavin wanted to help his fellow soldiers and preferred small teams, he decided being an Explosive Ordinance Disposal (EOD) technician would be the best fit. After a few years of training he finally got certified and shortly thereafter got deployed overseas.

Nothing really notable happened until his second deployment in the Middle East. In 2011, while clearing a route from Improvised Explosive Device (IEDs, basically bombs made from junk) his team tripped one connected to several tanks buried underneath the road filled with mustard gas. The last thing he remembers before blacking out from the pain was insurgents storming out of a nearby building and gunfire.

When he woke up, he found himself the only one alive, knee-deep in the dead, covered in blood, and some of his bones were dislocated. Gavin then developed nightmares in which he killed the insurgents and even his own squad mates with his bare hands. He later realized, to his horror, that this was actually a repressed memory as he could not come to grips with what he had done. He just went berserk and killed everyone near him and seemed to gain increased strength. That was his first experience to what he calls a ‘Ríastrad’ as it shares similarities to what fabled hero Cú Chulainn could do in Irish Mythology.

Gavin starts to become mentally unstable as he is crushed by what he did and gets honorably discharged before he can hurt anyone else. For the rest of his life until this point, he became more distant to his family and friends as he fears of harming them or anyone else. He opts to live alone at least half a day’s travel from any point of civilization. Over time his Ríastrads progressively got more intense, though due to his distance from population centers, he usually never killed another human. Instead, sating his bloodlust on various animals near him until the Ríastrad passed. Around this time his skin began to show an orange glow along his blood veins, perhaps an Omen of the danger he is becoming.

About a week ago, he started traveling towards Crescent City. Gavin is unsure exactly why he decided to make this spontaneous decision, attributing it to the idea that maybe he could help the progressively worse situation. A way to redeem himself from the atrocities he did before. regardless of the reason, he just feels an urge to go there.

▼ M O T I V A T I O N / O B J E C T I V E:

"uhhh, Wit is one letter away from Twit?*fits pumps, ‘Nailed It!’*"
Ultimately, to learn to control his Ríastrads before it controls him.

▼ A B I L I T I E S / S K I L L S:

"When all you have is a hammer, everything looks like a nail. Likewise, sometimes all I see is prey."
//ABILITIES:
◼ Ríastrad | Gavin undergoes one of three stages of his Riastrad based on how much stress he is undergoing. Inactive, Passive and Active. Inactive is a neutral state in which he is no more exceptional than a particularly hardy mundane. Passive: Gavin gain an extraordinary amount of strength and resilience. He can exert an amount of force equal to roughly fifteen grown men and can shrug off light arms fire.Active: Gavin’s Strength and resilience further increases, but he mentally decays into his base animal instincts and becomes increasingly aggressive to anything nearby. Friend or Foe. He becomes immune to conventional methods of harm and while there is no upper limit to his strength, the maximum he has ever achieved is equal to roughly 150 grown men. I should also note that his blood glows in intensity relative to which stage he is in.

Whenever he has a Ríastrad his body acts like a battery. The amount of strength he has is directly proportional to how much energy he has. A specialized organ in his body produces astatine and distributes it through his blood stream (the amount produced is proportional to how much stress he has). The astatine undergoes radioactive decay and emits energy absorbed by his blood cells for distribution to the musculature system. Due to half-lives of radioactive elements, his body will still absorb energy even after astatine is no longer being produced. Typically Gavin’s Ríastrad will last no more than thirty minutes after combat or other high-stress situations. However, Excess energy can be absorbed by the consumption of sources of energy to extend the duration of his Ríastrad. Particularly notable sources of sustainment would be animals (including humans) and most radioactive materials.

◼ Increased healing | Gavin has greater than normal rate of healing. While by no means can he shrug off death or grow tissue immediately, it is still notable. The rate is tied to which stage he is in and can grow, say, an arm in four to forty-eight hours.

//SKILLS:
◼ Adept with light arms | While by no means a master marksman, he can be effective with mearly any low cal weapon. Particularly handguns.
◼ Survival | Years of living away from civilization has trained him for living off the land, establishing shelter, tracking animals to hunt, and several other skills related to surviving alone.

//LIMITATIONS:
◼ Self-Control | Not only is his strength tied to how much energy he has, it is also tied to how strong he is willing to become. Fearing what he can potentially do, he rarely surrenders control to his animal instincts

//WEAKNESSES:
◼ Mentally Unstable | Past trauma has created an alternate persona he ‘Beithíoch’ or animal in Gaelige. This idenetity assumes control whenever he enters the active state of his Ríastrad. Beithíoch is hyper aggressive and has an insatiable bloodlust and seeks only to kill. Perhaps Beithíoch is a part of Gavin, the part that doesn’t care about mundanes. A part that feels like it is a wolf among sheep and should not abide by their laws. When not in an active state, Beithíoch may still occasionally try to get Gavin to do things he would not do.

◼ Exhaustion | After a Ríastrad, Gavin wil need a period of rest before he can have another. This is proportional to the intensity and amount of time spent in a Ríastrad.

▼ N O T E S:

//SUPPORTING CAST:
▼ ALLIES
Traveler-59 | The callsign for an old friend of his from his army days. Traveler-59 is the only one Gavin trusts enough to tell him of his abilities. Traveler-59 occasionally supplies Gavin with resources or intelligence…. And to make sure Gavin does not suddenly become Jack Torrance*points if you know the reference*

▼ FRIENDS
None…yet | Test

▼ ENEMIES
None…yet | Test

//STOMPING GROUNDS
◼ The Whispering Woods | Forests are usually rife with creatures to hunt and are generally unpopulated by humans. This makes the area the best place to rest during his visit. Gavin has established several camps he can move between to remain hidden.

//PARAPHERNALIA
◼ Howdah pistol | Gavin’s preferred sidearm is a Howdah pistol which he has normal and specially made pellet rounds for. Of course it generally is unused because of the Ríastrad , but damn if it isn’t an ego boost to have a mini shotgun/hand cannon.

◼Iron Mask | Nothing notable about this, just a human face shaped mask with holes for breathing and vision. It shows signs of aging and scratches reminiscent of scars.

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It's a good length, don't worry bout it ^^
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Yes. Lovely post. I will wait for @Lord Wraith's update and then I should be able to whip up something after work
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It's a good length, don't worry bout it ^^


As the actress said to the Bishop.
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Aaaand posted. And with that the Sucker for Pain arc is concluded. Good job @Superboy
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G M A N N O U N C E M E N T:

WEEK 03: Relationships are a very important part of life. Often people are defined by the relationships they make and this is no clearer than in the way we portray relationships in fiction. Spider-Man is known by both his love interests and his rogues. Many of you opted to note that you'll be making friends, allies and enemies within the IC on your character sheets. So on that note, having seen most of the cast in action already and with one secondary plot concluded, who do you want to interact with? Is there anyone on the cast you think would be a great ally for your character? Anyone you think your character would be drawn to romantically? Or is there someone you think would ultimately clash with your character, maybe or a rival or ultimately a bitter enemy?
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@Pirouette, sent Antonio your way, @SgtEasy, you wanted things hard for Tariq right? @FantasyChic, the hookers are still awaiting your rescue though they might not be happy with you cutting into their profits for the evening :P
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G M A N N O U N C E M E N T:

WEEK 03: Relationships are a very important part of life. Often people are defined by the relationships they make and this is no clearer than in the way we portray relationships in fiction. Spider-Man is known by both his love interests and his rogues. Many of you opted to note that you'll be making friends, allies and enemies within the IC on your character sheets. So on that note, having seen most of the cast in action already and with one secondary plot concluded, who do you want to interact with? Is there anyone on the cast you think would be a great ally for your character? Anyone you think your character would be drawn to romantically? Or is there someone you think would ultimately clash with your character, maybe or a rival or ultimately a bitter enemy?


So there is a high chance that Eli meets these two characters soonish due to being in the same story arc.

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I can see an accidental discovery of each other as their present missions might overlap. They would probably have an uneasy alliance at first. Since I can only speak for Eli, she will be primarily indifferent towards Priya since she is still slowly trying to think of humans as more than just a food source. She has the initial foundation but is still apathetic. One thing of note is that Priya has some political clout that may be noticed by Eli and seeing as her end goal at the moment is warning this world of her world, then Eli could be interested in maintaining contact which could lead to something a bit more than just uneasy allies.

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Quite the colorful character in Eli's eyes. Tariq is different and so is Eli. What I think really lends itself to becoming faster allies or friends than others is the fact that Tariq is only half human, meaning Eli isn't going to find him appetizing in the least bit. Plus, there is always the relation that both aren't from this Earth.

Finally, I chose an easy one...

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Enemies. Easy. Eli is a Vampyr and Claire is basically Buffy. Unless Claire can get over her self-righteous heritage and not try to kill Eli, then enemies they will remain.
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Ho damn, Alien vs Robot? And Priya is too busy to back Tariq up?

Ohhhh I am so ready to write this battle out :D are we going to write this like an arena type battle? With responses and you control the robot?
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Ho damn, Alien vs Robot? And Priya is too busy to back Tariq up?

Ohhhh I am so ready to write this battle out :D are we going to write this like an arena type battle? With responses and you control the robot?


I mean, as an actual police officer, Priya could try calling off the robot. However she's a detective not counter terrorism so she doesn't have any authority over it.
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Holler for help if you need it.
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Okay, so duck and dodge the robot until Priya can come and help? Great ^^

I'm toying with the idea of Alien either backing off as he is a smart warrior of his people, backed up by the wisdom of a whole species. Or go fight it, to honour the pride of his people. Might mix between the two, so that it's more in-character. Interesting how I'm still building a character through the posts XD I'll respond to your announcement once I get outta school.

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Hmmm, I don't think Tariq knows of Eli's existence currently.

Edit: If Priya won't be able to help, taking the robot down or the strategy of running away would both need someone's help. So Eli would probably be helpful XD
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Well.. I meant more figuratively and jokingly than having him actually call out for help. Although if Tariq could accidentally attract attention, she'll definitely be sympathetic to a sort of non-human.
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@Lord Wraith So I have a question? Is anyone still left up in the penthouse? I imagine the girls are still, but any of the baddies up there? Just wondering
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