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@Multimind Can I add a warrior from another faction? Seemingly he has traveled from the lands of the south, across the ocean. His goal? To discover and gain power over the northern lands and factions. He plans to assemble a group of people, hired swords, using guerrilla tactics to get the upper hand on the other factions. Maskin his soldiers as other powers to cause more chaos. Seeing as the lands now are entering war, he wants to "help" end it while making a name and reputation for himself with hopes in resulting to a position of power after the war has ended. The last part is his main objective. Cause problem and be the first one to solve it resulting in getting the favor of the people. And after amassing a sizable army he plans to return to the south and conquer their lands.

[Multimind]

@Bishop

Allow me to be perfectly clear here, the war is not so much going to be a "civil war", but more so a coalition of the forces of the city states against a hellish evil that is approaching from the western reach, veiled by the mountains.

A "LOTR" style mythical evil that seeks to gain control over the beasts and lessers of Saëmwythyr and conquer Greater Earth, starting with Saëmwythyr.

[Bishop]

Then, let me change his goals. He plans to be at the forefront of the battle against this evil. Earn a name and reputation and power during his victories against this menace. By accomplishing himself with his battle achievements, he plans to rise through the ranks. So his main goal is to be a general. After that, he plans to quietly dispose of his house/faction ruler and descendants while trying to get the position himself. The question remains though, can my characters still be from the southern lands?

Well most of these are just fluff I'll never witness. But that's the gist of his ambition. Since we are the heroes, I presume, do we have some military ranking or just a group of powerful individuals joining together and kicking evil arrse!?

[Multimind]

@Bishop

Yes, you can still be an outlander.

As an outlander though, your options are limited to an adventurer or mercenary type character.

He would have to extremely boost his reputation and standing within the realm for any sovereign to grant him any kind of title or position of power.

[Bishop]

Light

The Lightmare of SAËMWYTHYR

Gender

Male

Age

37

Race

Human

Personality

Decisive and with a clear goal, he will do everything in his power to achieve it. He can socialize fairly well but as soon as his goal enters the equation they are nothing to him. If you share the same goal as him consider yourself lucky. He is a powerful ally and if he sees you contributing towards your mutual quest he will grant you his protection. He sees people for what they can do, their power, not their personality and their good or bad choices.

Biography

Nobody knows of his past before he took on the title of Lightmare. It all started in one of his expeditions in a frozen wasteland on the northern range where he happened upon a buried nonagon pyramid, only the tip seen standing out above the snow, surrounded in ice. Using a crystal he made quick work of the giant glacier having a clear path to the pyramid's top. Getting close he studied the ancient writings on the structure's extremity immediately knowing to which culture it belonged to as he had encountered similar hieroglyphs on his travels before. Luckily he had learned some of its secrets on his past studies and knew how to activate it. The clouds were blocking the sun, a sickening darkness engulfed everything, the traits of a winter night in this part of the planet. Without using a sun crystal he wouldn't be able to even breath the lung freezing air. He searched in his satchel, finally feeling the ancient crystal with his fingers, swiftly taking it out. A rare crystal that allowed control of weather for a short time. Used carefully it could be catastrophic as it created a butterfly effect on that region's atmosphere, extending even outside it but with reduced effects.

In ancient times it was used as a way to convince people of the God-like power that the rulers of that time possessed, making it easier to control them. A lot of sacrifices and rituals that benefited those rulers took place in order to avoid their wrath. There was a catch though, in order to use the crystal in a way that affected a wide area the user was required to give his own life, consumed by it's immense power. The other option, in order to reach the same effect, is the consumption of the crystal itself, breaking it after usage. But that option was not even considered by the ancient rulers as the life of a human was considered even less than their "royal pet". People died every time that power was used.

The explorer used the crystal only to dissipate the smallest amount of clouds for a sun-ray to reach the pyramid's top, everything being calculated of course. Even this small act leaving him out of breath, exhausted but he had more to do. Exhausted as he was he got an ancient looking nonagon ring out of his pocket and placed it on top of the pyramid. The sooner he did this, the ring started rotating at eye dazzling speed, then the pyramid's top, then the whole thing itself! During his past explorations he had learned that each structure of this ancient civilization was like a puzzle, a ring always the key. Row after row the structure started rotating at an immense speed, the ice quickly melting everywhere around him, leaving the explorer to free fall. Mid way through the fall, the whole structure stopped in its tracks with a finally echoing *CLICK*. Mere moments later a beam of light shot up from it's top completely dissipating the clouds, cold and darkness, sun and warm light succeeding it. The explorer stopped mid air, frozen as a golden hue engulfed everything surrounding the pyramid in a wide are, including him. He was then teleported to the throne room in a kneeling position before a golden statue on a throne placed on top of a mini pyramid. The statue radiated an "Emperor" vibe as it stood out above all, literally and metaphorically. The thing was covered in a full body armor only the face, hands and feet protruding from it. The figure was carrying a strange looking staff that gave the impression of being a puzzle thing itself, many writings and lines covering it. The staff ended with 2 falcon-like heads, the explorer presumed, beside the heads 2 wings emerged from both sides creating the torso of a two headed bird creature. The armor had the same build as the staff minus the writings. Talking about armor, to his surprise he was covered with one himself, from head to toe. Suddenly, numerous visions clouded his consciousness, visions of lives past. He experienced century long battles, reincarnating again and again, the fighting seemingly never ending until it all stopped. When he woke up he was located in SAËMWYTHYR, encased in armor, knowing things and abilities he wasn't supposed to know although most of his visions were blurry whenever he tried to remember them, like trying to remember a dream you just woke from. His head was throbbing with pain along with his body which seemed...lighter? Also stronger and his movements were faster, his reflexes also enhanced. One goal was engraved in his soul, finally reemerging after such a long time. He felt more awake than ever, all seemed clear now. His soul purpose was to revive the once great Empire of Ghuul'Zashar. He was given the role of missionary with this mission and let the Sun be his witness as he achieves it!

From then on, he has been doing highly paid, considered suicide jobs for big rewards. Achieving a reputation in little time, more learned of his capabilities resulting in more demanding and also more rewarding jobs. People started calling him "The Lightmare" since he only acted during the day, a period in which is considered the safest-from-assassins time especially when you are in public. But since his tactic always involved a blinding flash before the attack, there were NO witnesses whatsoever to describe what happened, how the victim was killed or how the attacker looked. Word circulated that it was the work of GOD and not done by a creature or thing. With his not-so-small fortune he started his own organization with the main goal being the recruitment of young children and their training as ultimate blindly loyal soldiers of the upcoming Empire of Ghuul'Zashar.

So basically, I added some ancient relic pyramids and one of them, the one which he found, was located past the northern range on the snowy planes past the mountains.
I also added that the southerners use sun crystals for different things. The main attribute they possessed was light/warm/heat.
And he became part of an ancient and extinct race of warriors.
If you don't approve or don't like any of this, I can add that it was all an illusion. That all that happened were his memories being re written etc etc.

[Multimind]

@Bishop

Technically this is just the planning and discussion thread, though the character looks good.

Archive that CS of yours because the official CS will be posted in the true OP once I get it posted, and you will have some editing to do because the CS will be more detailed that that which you of constructed.

But as I side, archive that CS of yours and save it for the official OP.