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@Tasuke

I hope this setting works for you. This will be the first time I've used this particular character, so excuse me if there's a few oddities that maybe made more sense in theory than they do when applied to actual writing.
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A few things I'd like to know:

Could you describe the style of the city and its buildings as well as the tournament arena? I'd like to get a strong visual and pictures or a likeness would also be appreciated but not required.

Do you have issue creating an NPC(s) if I had Hisame come in as a competitor in the tournament? I think this particular path has a lot of potential; perhaps quite long but I perceive you enjoy writing to a great degree.

I noticed you only have a partial list of Truths? Do you plan to add more? I don't mind one way or the other.

By the way I am elated to see how much effort you put into your posts.

This shall be fun indeed.
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Hey, sorry it took me so long to get back to you. Alas, work likes to get in the way of things.

As for the city I picture it as a sort of sprawling futuristic metropolis with large, ultramodern style buildings but not crowded in together the way modern cities tend towards. The streets are wide, greenery abounds in tree lined avenues, tiered beds of flowers that decorate plazas, and numerous parks small and large throughout the city. Trying to think of an analog in a movie or show but nothing comes to mind immediately. But really, feel free to embellish and do with it what you like. It's all a spur of the moment creation that came about as I was writing the post.

And yes, feel free to make all the NPCs you like. I like this sort of thing to be very collaborative as far as scene building, so if you feel like it should be there or it furthers your side of the story, feel free to include it.

At the moment Enzo is only capable of utilizing seven of the Noble Truths. Through the course of his story I plan for him to master the others but that's for the future. Nothing will be changing about that any time soon. He still has a lot of learning to do before he is capable of the others.
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I am quite pleased by your answers; however the NPC question was more geared to you. If I had her enter the tournament it doesn't feel right making her opponent my own NPC. It would also make my posts quite long and one-sided for some time. Not to mention it's not nearly as fun fighting myself as you watch; since it naturally means more work for your posts I'll leave the preference to you.

I'll look up some examples of your city description for inspiration and attempt to post tonight.

My current availability is after 8pm CST - 2am CST Saturday and Monday - Thursday. I am off Friday and Sunday and may be able to post at lunch during work or in the early morning as well.

P.S. If you come up with a comparison or can find a good image for me that'd be great; the range of city styles Bing is pulling up is... in a word: vast.
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Ah, yes that's fine about npcs.
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I'm sorry for the delay. I've been swamped with business.

The post will be up tonight.
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After becoming stable again I can write more often; I'll be working to get a post up by Sunday at the latest; also revamping the profile with many buffs and tech additions.

I am also on Discord frequently and hear you guys have a room; if I may be invited it can be shared via PM.
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