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Okay this is the thing.
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Charater here:

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Did not build a character for Knightly setting. So ill be fighting with only my sword in its negate mode. I built it for TZ, which uses supernatural abilities like idk fire manipulation, wasn't expecting this. I removed the majority of my equipment listing.

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Inhumane Vessel: Negated for now, can die from being stabbed and shit, considering the situation, I don't want you making a whole new character cause I'm too lazy to make another one for this tier.

Millennia Mind: Hiken-Tsubame Gaeshi is busted against your character so I wont be using


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College aye what can I say. I’ll post soon
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That's a really weird way to describe what you're doing.
First off, it seems as if you are preparing for the attack which was feinted, meaning a jab with the spear head, bu then you seamlessly parry the swing coming from the side BEFORE Karaulish even lets go of the spear with one of his hands.
That's a little extreme, speed-wise, prediction-wise and also it seems you got it wrong. Karaulish let go of the spear with his left hand as he had issued the swing, meaning it was nowhere near connecting when he lowered his left arm. Also, I am still confused as to how he could see through the feint so easily. I'd like to imagine feints in roleplay lead to situations where a character either barely saves themselves from the actual attack, following the feint, or if the author of that character decides, get hit by the feint. I get that your character is really old and battle hardened to the point where he breathes fighting, but still.
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You over thinking guy. I’ll admit your post gave me quite the issue do to lack of detail. It was really hard for me to understand what was really happening because you used vague descriptions; “a little higher than before” and other shit, but I just pressed on. Your Feint is not easily “predicted” I didn’t even predict it, I acknowledge it in the narrative, but the character would complete his step after your feint, all while performing the parry. How?

```With a surprisingly quick maneuver, the old warrior feinted an upwards attack with the spear```
undisclosed attack that goes up but it doesn't. That's an action. I can act here, but even so it’s never stated where the head of ya spear is. The origin of your feint is not stated

``` in the process raising the weapon a little higher than it had been before```
This has to happen after the feint. That means the feint is an whole other action in itself which allows the spear to be suspended before being elevated. I complete my step at this moment, placing me passed the head, the metal bar would hit me instead. Since I completed my step after your feint, I can literally just see where ya spear is and move my blade there all while simultaneously moving forward.

Btw, boxers and other martial artist peek through feints all the time, I just step forward with you at a slower rate, my blade is already in a defensive position from my last post so I didn’t have to do much. Ya hand thing, see it wasn’t stated clearly when ya hand would be removed from it.

“”By performing this attack, however, he let go of the spear with his left hand, which went to the side of his body.””

It’s odd enough you put this detail at the end of the post and not at the beginning of the attack. I imagine you post details in sequential order, I see it says by performing this attack. So I wanted to assume it was at the beginning of the attack, but shit it could have been at the end of the attack.
I wasn’t gonna argue in ya next post if you said your hand had already been removed. Although I can’t say my post is hard to read considering it has every detail in it. Shit I may have actually missed something though lol. Yet to clarify;

1. Tojiko sees you step, when you step you feint (he does not know this is a feint, I never say he knows this)
2. Witnesseing your incoming attack he starts to step forward and begans to parry. I have no idea the origin of your attack. You say an upward attack but how low is the blade originally, so I have to take things into my own imagination. Even if it’s a feint, the spear is still there I can interact with it before your actual attack. Thus what I did, stepping passed the feint, moving my blade to put ya spear on my left side. This pretty much stops ya actually attack because of a we’ll designed feint. Just because it’s is a feint does not mean I can’t do anything, it put me in no danger, even in my last post I said one chance was all he needed get close and get passed the spear head.
3. Here is when you would do your attack but since I stopped that, do you still remove your hand? Cause it would never go into motion? That’s why I wish you would have said when.
4. After parrying the rest should be easy, bringing the spear up and over my head as I rush in. placing it on my right side, pinned because my body south be on the left side of the shaft and my sword the right. Than I get to you and aim for both your arms cause I wasn’t sure when you let go of the spear, but what I do know is ya other hand gonna have to let go, or you finna lose it.
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Okay, got you and got me.
I'll write now.
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