@Lord Wraith
I'll make some changes.
I'll make some changes.
@Lord Wraith
Finished the edits. Still feel that the end of the backstory could be improved upon and maybe the weaknesses as well, but I'd rather have your opinion on it before making any more changes.
@Lord Wraith Alright, I've read through it and know what's going on. I assume I start at Alexander's house, transition to him going to the class, finding out about the search for the missing student, and then have him become part of the search itself correct?
@Lord Wraith
Still writing my first post, doing a flashback to the events earlier in the day. Btw if you have any tips on how I could improve my writing, please do not hesitate to share them with me.
@Lord Wraith
Don't worry I'll have him remember the missing student and join the search. I'll probably edit into the post I just made. It may not seem like much but I'm doing all of this on a phone using mobile data, so it took me a while.
@Lord Wraith
Won't be posting for a while, mostly because I don't feel like it at the moment (and between this and that long fanfic I'm working on I need a little break). It won't be too long before I post again, but it won't be anytime soon. Just letting you know.
I have a question about Kaitlyn Sewart's disappearance. Are the local authorities/police investigating her disappearance? I ask because the post I'm working on has a scene where Alexander is in a local McDonald's (which I'm sure still exists) where a news report from a local T.V. station catches his attention, which leads to him remembering Elroy mentioning the missing girl earlier in the day.
@Lord Wraith
I'm going to move Alexander's CS over to the Characters Tab of the RP. I'll edit the one here afterwards so people know its been moved.
And this RP, even though it's just starting out, is awesome.