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Still working on her. Dunno if I should add more sections since shes a solo droid.


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Ellri Lord of Eat / Relic

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Review of sheet

  • Doesn’t stick to a droid degree.
    There’s a reason droids are classified by different degrees. All droids belong in one degree. Not up to four different degrees.
  • No flaws, no failures.
    Your droid is utterly devoid of character flaws. The fact that HK droids are banned in republic space is not sufficient to count as a flaw. it is just a fact.
    What you need to have is actual character flaws that limits him, her or it through capabilities and personality.
    Additionally, no individual with any depth of character has gone through life without even a single mistake or failure.
  • HK Chassis.
    Making an HK-droid, or a derivative thereof requires prior GM approval. You have not been given that approval.
  • Self-modification.
    As specified in the guide, droids need to be shut down for most types of modification. When offline, a droid literally can’t do anything, because it is offline. It not being applicable to your droid character is not something you may decide.
  • Power switch.
    This droid doesn’t have an external power switch. All droids are equipped with means for powering them down. A droid might also have a means for powering itself down, but that would be an addition, not a replacement.
  • Lack of comprehension of droid types.
    This droid has enough weapon systems to be considered a heavy weapons platform suitable for the toughest battlefields. The amount of weapons alone would mean it would stand out everywhere outside major army installations. As such, it could never function as an assassination droid anywhere else.
  • No memory wipe circuits.
    What even is a memory wipe circuit? there isn't any special circuitry for memory wipes. No droid architect would ever build a droid with sealed memory systems due to the fact that anyone who has more than basic knowledge of droids, let alone designs them, knows that the more memory a droid accumulates, the more eccentric and eventually dysfunctional it will become.
  • “Experimental”
    Being experimental is not sufficient reason to ignore the rules provided in the droid guide about modifications.


Conclusion:

This character concept as it stands is not even remotely balanced or functional, and it uses unapproved elements that require prior approval. The amount of problems with it far outweigh the functional elements. As such, it is denied.

Feel free to make a new character, but if you seek to make another droid, read the droid guide and follow it. Similarly, if you wish to make another character for which there is one or more guide(s), follow said guides.
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There is no point in making a droid character, they have no room for growth with the current sheet, hence why I haven't really updated this to remove the more OP stuff.
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