[Approved] Daughters of the Darth

[JessieTargaryen]

Vasnai'Brinme

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I typically write 2+ Paragraphs, I try to aim for more paragraphs but never do less than 2.
Do you enjoy writing collaborative posts for things like conversations, combat, etc.?
I do!
Is grammar and depth of writing important to you?
Its a bit important, but I won't freak out on somebody for not being 'good enough', if thats even a thing.
Are there any writing subjects you particularly enjoy exploring?
I like exploring the secrets of a galaxy, and also getting into what makes a character tick and the psyche of that character. I also enjoy combat writing and romance!
Is there anything you really dislike and want to avoid like the plague?
Not really!
Is there something you are uncomfortable with happening to your character?
Nope!
Do you have any short-term or long-term goals with this character?
I really think it would be interesting to just see where the galaxy takes her. Maybe learning to use her force powers a little (whether from formal training or not), but others lets see where it goes!

Slave's Holonet Ad

"I want to be free."

Name:
Vasani'Brinme
Species:
Twi'lek
Homeworld:
Korriban
Age:
18
Gender:
Female
Owner:
Krembal the Hutt
Previous Owner(s):
Krembal the Hutt
Occupation:
Slave - Dancer and Hutt's Prized Possession
Current location:
Nar Shaddaa
Degree of Loyalty:
Not Loyal
Ease of Training:
Easy (She caught on quickly and learned her duties easily, though the training itself was very harsh towards the slaves).
Resale Price:
Not For Sale (Would be in the very expensive range if she were)

Slave's Holonet Metadata Summary

_{Detailed appearance. Imagery insufficient.}

Vasani can be described as an exotic beauty by a large portion of the galaxy. Beautiful in every right by conventional standards, the girl is about 5' 5" in height, with an extremely athletic body. One which she earned through none other than spending her life dancing for the amusement of Krembal's patrons. Though she has a flexible build and athletic body, the girl does have rather pleasant curves in the right places to keep the eye on her. Her orange eyes are piercing, something many find attractive. Though these eyes are also windows into her soul, as one can usually tell how the girl feels at any given point by simply peering into her eyes. Her body is covered in black sith tattoos, standing out against her red skin and the only reminder of being the daughter of a sith. Her outfit typically consists of revealing outfits one might expect on a slave meant to be shown off, simply because she does not understand a life in which she can dress how she wants.

_{Report on natural ability with the Force, as well as all known Force Techniques and the skill level.}

• Skill Level: No training
• Force Technique/Skill Level: Telekinesis || Undiscovered Talent
• Force Technique/Skill Level: Force Throw || Undiscovered Talent
• Force Technique/Skill Level: Mind Trick || Undiscovered Talent

_{Report on skills and talents, including level of skill.}

• Talent/Skill Level: Dancing/Flexibility/Agility || Very Skilled
• Talent/Skill Level: Huttese/Basic/Ryl || Fluent
• Talent/Skill Level: Stamina || High Amount
• Talent/Skill Level: Flirtation/Seduction || Decent
• Talent/Skill Level: Intelligence || Highly Intelligent
• Talent/Skill Level: Knlowedge of Hutt Crime Underworld || Execellent

Explanation of skills/talents

The twi'lek does not have many skills that would prove useful outside of those that would benefit her in her current situation. She is quite the dancer, and rather flexible due to the way that she was raised. The girl also has a rather decent amount of stamina to boot. She is fluent in huttese, basic, and Ryl (along with the subtle movements of lekku twi'lek can communicate with). Otherwise, her skills also lie in seduction/flirtation, meant to entice patrons of the hutt so they would be more amicable to his offers. Other than these skills, the slave has very little other skills and is a bit of a blank canvas. Vasani is a highly intelligent girl, though she has never had a chance to show this in her life. Throughout her years as Krembal's prized possession, Vasani has learned much about how the Hutt underworld works. Things like the power structure, contacts to get in, all sorts of thing one could only learn from being so close to a rather influential player in said underworld at all times in their life. She has also obtained a few contacts, or at least the means to contact them from her years enticing others so they would be more... amicable to Krembal's offers.

_{Report on known combat experience, training and weapons training.}

No experience beyond the few failed escape attempts the young Twi'lek has made.

_{Does the Slave have or have they ever had, a bounty on them? Are they wanted?}

No.

_{Detailed notes on common/favored employers and any noteworthy contacts.}

Krembal the Hutt - A crimelord and prolific owner of a massive casino on Nar Shadaa. He is known for running one of the more successful casinos in the game and having a rather impressive amount of wealth to match it. His enforcers and drug empire is almost as successful, enough that many do not even dare to impede upon the Hutt's territory. Vasani is his prized possession since her looks are exotic, and he uses her as a bit of a status symbol.

_{Detailed notes on known rivals and enemies.}

N/A.

_{List and description of other known associates.}

• Klorro Bwad: A hutt rival of Krembal, though the two never met Vasani knows how to contact the hutt after listening in while several mercenaries discussed which hutt's job they should take.
• Trask Vod: A male Weequay slaver, the two were not on fond terms due to Vanasi's constant decisions to snub the Weequay, but he owes her after she found evidence that the slaver was working for Bwad as well after he had been drinking. She kept this a secret with the hopes of a favor down the line.
• Larsk Purc: A Nikto informant working for Krembal and a few other hutts, specializes in getting info from the areas around hutt space and organizing jobs. Fond of Vasani due to her attempts to make the Nikto more amicable to Krembal. Also known to give information to whoever is willing to pay his price.
• Slepp Vus: A male trandoshan bounty hunter, typically does work around Nar Shaddaa and hutt space. Not well known to Vasani beyond how to contact him.
• Qoful Enil: A female trandoshan bounty hunter, works alongside Sleep Vus.
• Tu Jhusa: A bounty hunter Selkath who worked under Krembal several times against his will as the hutt held the poor man's family hostage. The two once attempted to plan her escape before the Selkath was sent off on a long-range mission to ensure Krembal's empire in the farther reaches.
• Wesall "Fixxer" Sea: A male drug dealer and smuggler for Krembal's empire. Has known skills in pushing his product as well as smuggling it around the galaxy. Claims he can get any product anywhere. He was responsible for helping keep Vasani drugged after her escape attempt. Easy to contact, but might also snitch one out to Krembal for a bonus pay.
• Hira'niseela "Numa": A twi'lek slave dancer working under Krembal, was kidnapped from her home at a young age and has spent 26 years living under the hutt. She is Krembal's second most prized, and an excellent translator. As such she often translates when Vasani is not capable. The two were very close, with Vasani calling Hira by "Numa", which means sister.

_{List of known belongings, including but not limited to planetary surface property, civilian and military vessels, vehicles, weapons, tools.}

• Clothes: Vasani is provided with only one set of clothing per day, and has seven different outfits which she is given on the day it is decided she will wear them. Each takes the form of either a metal bikini*, colored in tones of red, purple, and black that all compliment her skin tone and show off the slave's body.
• Collar with Leash: Vasani always is wearing a collar with a leash attached to it following her attempted escape attempts. This leash is either linked to the hutt's dais next to her master, or it is attached to the cage which she is dancing within.

*

The bikini outfits are similar to Leia Organa's slave outfit.

_{Psychological evaluation of Slave.}

A wickedly intelligent individual, Vasani'Brinme is quick to pick up on whatever lessons are taught to her to help her better serve under Krembal. She has an oddly curious nature that somehow has managed to survive throughout all of her years as a slave. Typically she comes across as a rather flirtatious and sultry individual, as that is how she is supposed to be acting towards patrons to entice them whenever Krembal is around. Though in her eyes one can clear as day see the look of a suffering, scared young woman. One who desperately craves to be freed from the clutches of the Hutt.

In the deepest parts of her mind, a place where the girl tries to keep her most important secrets hidden from all others are where her true colors would really show. These colors show a girl who is still suffering from the effects of being abandoned to something akin to what others would describe as hell. She knows her mother willingly gave her away as if she were worth nothing to her. As such, the twi'lek is constantly trying to seek out any form of attention from others (who don't repulse her, such as Hutts), for that verification that she is, in fact, alive and a person. Validation that she was worth something more than a piece to be thrown aside as it suited others. This searching for validation comes in a variety of forms, but all can easily agree that none of them are particularly healthy for the young girl.

Vasani is also rather guarded when it comes to interpersonal relationships. After years of emotional abuse and manipulation at the hands of the hutt and his patrons, the twi'lek has very high walls up to prevent others from getting close. Trust is a commodity that is about as rare with the girl as a hairless Wookie. It can be seen in the few candid interactions she has with others. This is shown in how she withdraws from others, often trying to retreat away while also ensuring to keep a distrustful eye upon those around her. Expecting them to torment her even further in this hell that become her life.

_{List and description of known and suspected flaws. To be put into a restricted database.}

• Drug Temptation: Due to her experiences with illicit substances, Vasani always has that dark temptation in the back of her mind to return to using these substances. As the high did afford the girl a sense of peace in a life she otherwise felt consisted of suffering.
• Slave Life: Due to living as a slave dancer and prize her entire life under Krembal, Vasani has no skills beyond what she needed in her day to day life as a slave. Vasani has no skills and understands little of how to function in the outside world.
• Physical Strength: Vasani is not all that strong physically, falling just beneath an average girl of her age in strength.
• Force Sensitivity: Vasani is force-sensitive but unaware of this fact, as such those who are also force-sensitive would be able to easily tell she is and overwhelm her without the girl having much of a chance to react.
• Impulsive: Vasani is rather impulsive, and very emotional. She often enough will act on her emotions without particularly thinking through the consequences. Something that gets her in a fair amount of trouble with the hutts who own her.

_{Known interests of the slave.}

None, she is not allowed time to discover herself or indulge in her own desires. Beyond her burning desire for freedom.

_{Major achievements on record.}

N/A.

_{Major escape attempts on record. Confidential.}

Vasani has only had one significant escape attempt since she has become old enough to even understand the situation that she is in. The escape attempt occurred just after she turned 17 years old. Having behaved well for the last few years under the hutt's thumb, the slave was allowed some small rewards for keeping in line with the rules. This included times where the collar firmly fastened around her neck would be released after the casino had closed and she was allowed to walk freely around one of the rooms in the casino. This, of course, proved to be what gave the girl the chance to try to make an attempt to escape. One of the days that she was being let free, the girl waited until her guards had been about to leave the room before charging out after him. She didn't really focus on anything besides running for everything that she had in her and managed to duck blaster bolts through the casino and nearly made it out the exit. That is until one of Krembal's enforcer droids stepped and knocked the would-be escapee unconscious before returning her to her owner. As a punishment for her "crimes", the girl was kept at Krembal's side at all times from that point on and even worse was continually drugged with just a bit of Krembal's own products. Enough to keep her calm and ensure another escape attempt did not occur, though not enough to cause her to be addicted. A fine balance, and one that only recently just ended whenever the hutt felt she had learned her lesson and would not attempt to escape once more.

Interview

_{Personal biography, as detailed by the subject for future record. Acquired shortly after last achievement of note.}

Vasani'Brinme was the firstborn of the two daughters of Sith Lord Atroxa and born on the imperial world of Korriban. Born a mere few seconds before her twin sibling, the girl was not long for life among her mother and her sister. As when the two were still young, just after they had received their sith tattoos like their mother, they were tested for their force sensitivity. Upon finding that the older of the two was not force sensitive to any degree, the child was quickly sold into slavery by her mother. The Sith Lord chose to sell her daughter outside of the empire in part for two reasons, the first being that the sale to the hutt outside of the empire enacted a favor which she needed. The second being that the Sith Lord did not much want the shame of having a non-force sensitive daughter to be known. Therefore, after the sale in secret to the hutt Atroxa passed off a lie that her young child had died early in her life. This, along with the favor being the removal of an inconvenient imperial encroaching on Atroxa's political territory by Krembal was what finalized the decision to see to Krembal. So Brin was sold to Krembal, a crimelord based out of Nar Shaddaa who offered a rather good price for an investment that he knew would later come to bring him rather good profits. With that deal set in stone, the daughter was soon send off towards her knew life as a slave under Krembal the Hutt. Here it was ordained that she would be raised and that her days would be forever in service to her new owner, the sole being in charge of her life.

Growing up in a Hutt's grasp was not exactly the most pleasant of childhoods. Her early years were spent learning how to speak various languages to assist in translating for the hutt, as well as learning how to be his personal server. She was tasked with ensuring his cup was never empty, and that he always had gorgs stocked that he could eat whenever he particularly pleased. It did not take the girl long to pick up on the various languages and tasks that she was assigned. During this time, she was also continually manipulated to be steered away from anything that could begin to resemble free will. The lessons on how to perform as a dancer for the hutt started to begin during these formative years of her life. As she grew older, more attractive and more skilled as a dancer the girl quickly became a favored possession of Krembal. For she was what most of his patrons considered to be an exotic beauty, and would work as something as a status symbol for the hutt. So she was relegated to dancing, and having a place next to the hutt on his dais. As such, she soon also took up translating the languages she knew for the hutt and soon became a face that most of his regular clients had come to know well.

At around 14, Vasani started to realize that not everything she was experiencing was exactly... something that she liked. When asking about the freedom that she had observed patrons coming and going with, she was quickly informed that such was not her life. In response to her questioning, Krembal had the girl beaten and punished for daring to ask such questions. Over time, she slowly started to realize that the world she had somehow come to accept was falling apart and see was starting to see the ugly truth. Where once she had thought she was seen as a servant, something to appease a lord, she started to see that she was property. Of value along the same lines a rigged slot machine that ensured money for the hutt was of value. A deep rooted hatred started to grow within the girl as she started to crave an ending to this life. To the fear, pain, and the treatment she was starting to realize was not an aspect of life she wanted to simply accept. Instead a hunger for the freedom she saw others having started to grow within herself. A desire to escape the shackles that held her down now.

At age 16-17, the young twi'lek started to act out against the hutt against what most would consider to being better judgment. Desperately grasping for chances that might result in her release, as she started to figure that perhaps if she was no longer his favorite she would be moved away from the creature that she found so vile. Yet this proved to not be the case, as the hutt decided to give her a little freedom to see if that would inspire the girl to be a bit more loyal to him. Of course, this quickly resulted in the slave attempting to escape from the casino before being stopped at one of the main entrances by one of Krembal's enforcer droids. From here, he had her brought back and kept at his side at all times. On top of that, she was drugged with some of his own supply to ensure that she stayed complacent. It was also a punishment he felt the girl would hate, and one he was certain would teach her a lesson. This treatment went on for nearly a year until she had just turned 18, and the hutt finally felt she had learned her lesson. As after the treatment, she seemed to be behaving and acting exactly as he had wanted her to be. Although in reality, the young slave was searching for the next opening that would take her away from this vile creature.

[JessieTargaryen]

Talik Gida

How long do you usually write?
I typically write 2+ Paragraphs, I try to aim for more paragraphs but never do less than 2.
Do you enjoy writing collaborative posts for things like conversations, combat, etc.?
I do!
Is grammar and depth of writing important to you?
Its a bit important, but I won't freak out on somebody for not being 'good enough', if thats even a thing.
Are there any writing subjects you particularly enjoy exploring?
I like exploring the secrets of a galaxy, and also getting into what makes a character tick and the psyche of that character. I also enjoy combat writing and romance!
Is there anything you really dislike and want to avoid like the plague?
Not really!
Is there something you are uncomfortable with happening to your character?
Nope!
Do you have any short-term or long-term goals with this character?
I would like to see Talik eventually develop to become a lord or a darth. Eventually coming into direct conflict with her sister, otherwise, lets see where the Galaxy takes her!

Imperial personnel files

"From the force, I draw strength. From strength, comes power."

Name:
Talik Gida
Species:
Lethan Twi'lek
Pureblood percentage:
0 %
Homeworld:
Korriban
Age:
18
Gender:
Female
Rank:
Sith Apprentice
Master:
Sith Lord Kallei
Former master(s):
None.
Apprentice(s):
N/A.
Sphere of influence:
Sphere of Mysteries (Espionage, Assassination, and Holocron Recovery)

Imperial Intelligence Reports

_{Detailed appearance. Imagery insufficient.}

Like her twin sister, Talik is generally regarded as an exotic beauty. Standing at a height of 5'5" the girl has a toned body from years of training how to fight at the Academy. With some rather appealing curves to accompany her, Talik is something which draws attention where she goes. Something which the girl is rather content with, as she wants to ensure her enemies and allies all know that it was she who did those actions. She dresses in a mixture of black robes and armor that are meant not to be bulky. This of course meaning that while the armor is flexible and the opposite of bulky, it will not afford as much protection. The girl can be rather vain at times, and as such typically dresses in a way to ensure she looks good for the occasion. Her orange eyes typically are critical as they look over others, and her expression one of superiority as she sees herself a step above just about all other creatures. Talik's tattoos are very similar to those of her mother and cover almost the entirety of her body.

_{Report on natural ability with the Force, as well as all known Force Techniques and the skill level.}

• Force Technique/Skill Level: Force Speed || Above Basic Training, Below Intermediate
• Force Technique/Skill Level: Telekinesis || Intermediate Training
• Force Technique/Skill Level: Force Throw || Intermediate Training
• Force Technique/Skill Level: Telekinetic Defense || Intermediate Training
• Force Technique/Skill Level: Force Sight || Basic Training
• Force Technique/Skill Level: Force Sense || Basic Training
• Force Technique/Skill Level: Precognition || Basic Training
• Force Technique/Skill Level: Mind Trick || Basic Training
• Force Technique/Skill Level: Force Jump || Above Basic Training, Below Intermediate
• Force Technique/Skill Level: Force Choke || Basic Training
• Force Technique/Skill Level: Force Lightning || Basic Talent
• Force Technique/Skill Level: Force Stasis || Intermediate Talent
• Force Technique/Skill Level: Force Rage || Undiscovered Talent

_{Report on skills not directly rooted in the Force, including level of skill}

• Skill/Experience Level: Combat Awareness || Trained Talent
• Skill/Experience Level: Sith Code || Basic Training
• Skill/Experience Level: Sith History || Basic Training
• Skill/Experience Level: Interrogation || Intermediate Training
• Skill/Experience Level: Torture || Intermediate Training
• Skill/Experience Level: Unarmed Combat || Intermediate Training
• Skill/Experience Level: Blaster Combat || Basic Training
• Skill/Experience Level: Persuasion || Intermediate Training
• Skill/Experience Level: Tactics & Strategy || Intermediate Training
• Skill/Experience Level: Espionage || Trained Talent
• Skill/Experience Level: Archeologist || Basic Talent
• Skill/Experience Level: Politics || Basic Training
• Language/Knowledge Level: Ryl || Fluent
• Language/Knowledge Level: Basic || Fluent
• Language/Knowledge Level: Huttese || Fluent
• Language/Knowledge Level: Sith || Fluent
• Language/Knowledge Level: Shyriiwook || "I don't speak carpet."

_{Report on known combat experience, training and lightsaber training.}

• Lightsaber Form/Skill Level: Form IV Ataru || Well-Trained Talent
• Lightsaber Form/Skill Level: Form III Soresu || Basic Training
• Exotic Form: Jar'Kai
• Exotic Form: Trakata
• Exotic Form: Mou Kei

_{Detailed notes on political influence and associates.}

The daughter of the Sith Lord Atroxa, Talik does not possess much by way of political influence. What little she does have is merely sway over those who answer to her mother. Talik has gained some acquaintances through her various assignments, though typically these acquaintances aren't much by way of political influence. Contacts in a criminal underbelly here, a low-level governmental clerk here. She is very much just beginning her political career, being so young.

_{Detailed notes on known rivals and enemies, outside and within the Empire.}

• Hitû Datea: A sith pureblood, Talik's main competitor and rival at the academy. Talik graduated ahead of him in standing, having pulled ahead at the end. Also an apprentice under Lord Kallei's rival.
• Prolboe Gaah: A hutt rival of Whalod Nin, and one Talik has angered by stopping his assassins during their attempt on Whalod.
• Xuva Supro: A Zabrak assassin who landed in jail after Talik handed him over to local forces on an independent space, to earn a favor from the government.
• Veron Jek: A former human politician and reformist within the Empire, who managed to evade Talik's attempt to silence him and his views. Currently hiding out in Hutt Space.

_{List and description of other known associates, including underlings.}

Associates:

• Sith Lord Atroxa: A sith lord in Empire, and the mother of Talik.
• Whalod Nin: A small-time Hutt, operating within Hutt space. Owes Talik for taking care of would-be assassins.
• Q-59 & Jarak: A bounty hunting human and droid duo frequently enough in Talik's employ.
• Sith Lord Kallei: The former trainer of Talik, now deceased.

_{List of known all ownerships, including vessels, non-standard equipment, slaves and locations.}

• Fury Interceptor "Black Rose": Lord Kallei's former Fury Interceptor, taken by Talik once she discovered her master's demise. It was formerly named Dark Hammer under her former master, but Talik has rebranded the ship. It is colored jet black and tuned so there is minimal external lighting. Otherwise equipped pretty standard, the thrusters, and shields have been augmented for moving faster and handling harsh climates. It houses two speeder bikes in the cargo bay, as well as a revolving inventory of cargo meant for usage on various missions. The Black Rose is also equipped with full living quarters for the captain of the ship, with upgrades to be a bit on the luxurious side and even contains an exquisite bath. Something which Talik is particularly fond of having aboard. The crew consists of imperial personal loyal to Kallei and her apprentice, along with a small set of droids aboard. A single M6 Series Imperial Medical Droid, single X-2 series Imperial Astromech Droid, and four Sith War Droids, Mark I. It also houses the ability for a few imperial soldiers to be brought aboard.
• Wardrobe: Talik has a rather large wardrobe to satisfy her desire to have outfits to look good no matter the situation.
• Twin Sabers: Talik posses two curved hilt lightsabers, which she often dual-wields in battle.
• Various Adventuring Gear: Talik posses some gear not typically associated with a sith, such as a grapple gun and the likes for retrieving holocrons within old ruins and the likes.

_{Psychological evaluation of candidate.}

Typically a determined and driven young candidate, Talik constantly is striving to improve herself to better achieve her goals. Constantly studying, and practicing for both knowledge as well as usefulness in the field she is seemingly a rather competent candidate with a future ahead of her. However, she does have some issues with respect to her feelings of superiority and short-fused anger that leads to foolish decisions in the field. She is a highly intelligent individual but will act impulsively at times. She can be very flirtatious and willing to use wiles to get her ways or simply satisfy a need at times, even putting aside certain responsibilities for after. Mental state is overall decently balanced, with a few small issues that can be fixed with time and corrective measures.

_{List and description of known and suspected flaws. To be put into restricted database.}

• Superior Attitude: Talik is known to have a bit of an ego and think herself superior to others, a personality trait that can lead to her making enemies easier and at times easier to be exploited.
• Rage: Talik has a short fuse and burning anger that will lead her to act impulsively to try to destroy whatever provokes her ire. Rational thought can even be tossed aside at times.
• Stamina: Talik's stamina is not as spectacular as that of other combatants, something which would make longer, drawn-out fights much more difficult than brief and explosive encounters for her.
• Pleasure Addicted: Talik is at times rather addicted to the pleasures of the world. Be it food, art, drink, or more commonly indulging in pleasures of the flesh.
• Appearance: Talik is often rather vain in nature and likes to ensure she is physically appealing or at least always looks "good".

_{Known interests of the candidate.}

• Linguistics of the Galaxy: Talik has a known interest in the linguistics of the galaxy, this being some more of personal interest than of furthering her own goals.
• Combat Styles: Talik has shown in an interest various combat forms, constantly improving herself in using the force, lightsaber, unarmed, and blaster based combat to ensure brute effectiveness in the field.
• Sex: Talik has no hesitation in engaging in some of the more... primal indulgences that go along with this. Typically she aims purely for the casual end of the spectrum, a satisfaction of her needs with no emotional attachment. Occasionally one may arise, and in those times they must also be dealt with, permanently.
• Jedi and Sith History: Talik has an interest in the history of the Jedi and the Sith, finding it useful for understanding and exploiting both sides to know where they came from. Not to mention, it is a topic she genuinely finds interest in.
• Holocron Hunting: Talik finds satisfaction in hunting down and recovering the lost Holocrons of the Sith. The more remote, dangerous, or well hidden a Holocron the more exciting.

_{Major achievements on record.}

• Strong experience in Ataru and understanding of Soresu, Age 14
• Attracting the attention of Sith Lord Kallei, Age 15
• Eliminating problematic politician with known reformist views, Age 15
• Disappearance of Revanite Sympathizer, and subsequent purging of Revanite Cell in Hutt Space alongside Lord Kallei, Age 17
• Recovery of Lost Holocron found in a forgotten temple, Age 17
• Recovery of Lost Holocron found among Revanite Sympathizer and silencing of Sympathizer, Age 18

_{Major failures on record. Confidential.}

• Insubordination against the Overseer during the Academy days, punishment was issued.
• Slaughter of a local planetary gang due to backlash over comments made towards her, resulted in information on a high-risk threat being lost.
• Lost track of Veron Jek during an attempt to silence the politician, allowing him to escape into Hutt Space with intelligence on some of the Empire's military movements he tried to use as leverage to push reforms.
• Loss of Holocron on a retrieval mission when her anger led her to track down and attack another local gang, Holocron was stolen from her targets and disappeared before she could recover it.
• Failure to protect Lord Kallei from an attack by her rivals, and to make it back in time to claim the power sphere.

Interview

_{Personal biography, as detailed by the candidate for use in imperial archives. Acquired shortly after last achievement of note.}

Born the younger of the two twins to Sith Lord Atroxa on the Imperial planet of Korriban, Talik was found to be force sensitive whenever her mother tested the twins just after they were old enough to receive their sith tattoos. Pleased with the results of that test, Atroxa kept Talik at her side while Vasani was sold away to a Hutt on Nar Shaddaa. Her young life was very quickly straight to business before she was sent off to the Academy. Atroxa trained her daughter from a young age, tutoring in the basics of saber combat as well as the ways of the force. The goal of this being to ensure that her daughter would turn out to be anything except a disappointment in her time at the Sith Academy. In order to ensure that Talik stayed in line, Atroxa ensured that the young girl knew about the sister who had been sold away to the Hutt Biothem. Using this as a threat towards Talik should she ever fall behind in her studies, or try to resist the daily training. Due to this, Talik grew up constantly trying to please her mother, while also being assured that she was going to be superior to those within the Sith Academy when she entered. This, in turn, developed and eventually turned into the attitude of superiority that the girl carries herself with these days.

In the Academy, Talik was shown to be rather competent and above the average point of most of her classmates. This, of course, being due to the tutoring and training her mother instilled from a young age. A sith pureblood within in her class, Hitû Datea, soon came to be a bit of rival towards Talik. Both were ahead of their classes, but both also carried attitudes of superiority. The resulting rivalry became rather vicious and fueled by hatred for each other. This continued to grow as the Academy had the students start practicing against each other in the form of sparring. During these sparring matches, Hitû quickly discovered that Talik had not particularly built up a resistance to telekinetic attacks from the force. This led itself to the pureblood's little gang of classmates using this tactic to push Talik around in the hopes of wounding the girl. Thus, forcing her out of a spot where she could feasibly compete with the pureblood. Growing annoyed with their tactics, Talik continued to study and work yet harder at the Academy, working on and vastly improving her telekinetic defense. This all came to fruition towards the end of their years at the Academy, when she had finally managed to build herself to a point she could resist the attacks of her would-be bullies. Along with her vastly improved combat skills, the girl decided that perhaps a bit of revenge was in order. Over the next couple of days she hunted down and beat each of the little gang into submission, forcing them to acknowledge her as stronger than Hitû. When they had all been taken out of the picture, she turned her attention on the pureblood and gave him a dose of the medicine as well. Though she waited until the final sparring matches of their time at the academy to do so, combining her defense with the usage of Soresu to create a rather potent defense against him, which once he faltered turned into a brutal display of Ataru.

The result of her revenge in the ring and her training at the Academy was that Talik captured the attention of a Sith Lord just about the time she was graduating at the age of 16. Sith Lord Kallei, one of the mystery sphere of influence. Her rival from the Academy had been taken under the wing of a Sith Lord by the name of Ryutz, a rival of her Kallei herself. Under her new master, Talik practiced and developed her skills further while also ensuring Kallei's sphere of power steadily grew. The two worked well together, dropping would-be threats to the Empire while also recovering some of those lost secrets held within Holocrons. At times, Talik was even trusted by her mentor to take on solo missions. This, of course, led to the occasional failure in her assigned missions as Talik's short-fused anger was starting to show through a bit. Most of these situations being something like the girl losing a target after her rage cost them information, or she was outsmarted after being incited into violence. She also lost a holocron along the lines of the same principle, but despite this, she was overall a rather successful young apprentice. Her master working with her to use the short-fused anger to gather strength within the dark side, utilize it to draw even more power from the force and destroy her enemies.

The most recent mission that Talik was sent out on was to ensure a revanite sympathizer was... silenced to stop his treacherous teachings from spreading further. Sent out on her master's ship, the Dark Hammer, to ensure that this was resolved in an expedient manner. The girl succeeded on the mission and was rather efficient in the manner, heading back towards Korriban within about two days of being dispatched on the mission. Though things would not seem to be going well on the homefront, as her master was not responding to her hails onboard the ship. Though the reasoning to this was soon found out when she arrived at Korriban where they were supposed to meet once more, only to find evidence of a battle in the ruined building. Along with the corpse of her master left in the middle, clearly killed by some of his rivals. Deciding that she would pick the bones of his power sphere's corpse, she first claimed the ship as her own and made its crew aware of who was their new captain. Shortly after, she started to realize that the power sphere had already been claimed and taken by the apprentices of her rivals. Moving quickly, Talik had the ownership of the ship, now dubbed the 'Black Rose', confirmed to be hers. Then set out to try to find her next assignment, or maybe even a new mentor...

[Ellri]

Review of Vasnai’Brinme

Suggestion: Add these two fields to the Holonet Ad section:
[b]Owner: [/b]
[b]Previous Owner(s): [/b]

Possible other fields to consider adding: (you can reflavor them if you feel something else would be better)
[b]Degree of Loyalty: [/b]
[b]Ease of Training: [/b]
[b]Resale Price: [/b]

Force throw is a subset variant of Telekinesis. It is unusual with a talent for a subset without having talent for the core ability.

Idle musing: we suppose that there’s no better example of having a price on one’s head than being a slave.

Possessions section:
While slaves do not have property, they are likely to have been provided specified clothes and objects owned by their master for personal use in ways that benefit their master. Other than when it is specifically of benefit to the master, she is unlikely to walk about completely nude, right?

Think about what she might have with that in mind. Some things to consider:
Clothes - Is she provided only one set or multiple sets?
Shock collar - Does her master use that on her? If yes, always or only occasionally?
Collar with Leash - Does her master use that on her? If yes, always or only occasionally?
Communicator - Does she have one? If yes, are there hard-wired limits as to who/what it can communicate with? If she has one, where is it located?
Self-defense tools - Is she always by her master’s side and protected, or does she have access to equipment to defend herself when elsewhere at her master’s behest?
Kill Switch Implant - Is she enough of a prize possession that her master would rather have her dead than in the possession of anyone else? If she has one, what would trigger it and does she know about it?

We are not saying she should have all of these, but that you should consider which of them she might have, and which she definitely doesn’t have.

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In this era, Force Sensitivity cannot be tested properly at birth. Imperial children are tested fairly early in childhood, the time depending, among other things, on their ancestry and prominence. Even species such as Sith Purebloods who are 99.99% force sensitive are not defined as Force-sensitive until they prove it somehow in their early childhood.

Was her mother a Sith at the time of the birth? If so, what rank did she hold?
Where was she born? If in the empire, why was she sold to a hutt rather than one of the imperial slave markets?

With the above in mind… What compelled her mother to sell her? Was her father involved in anything?
If you can’t find another justification while taking the above in mind, perhaps one child went with the mother, the other with the father, then the father died, got into debt or some such thing, which caused her to become hutt property?

Something about the name “Biothem” doesn’t feel “hutty” to us. It feels a lot like it is Biochem with just one letter replaced. No idea if this thingy is good, but here’s a hutt name generator we found just now.

If she grew up knowing nothing but slavery… what made her hate the situation she is in? Remember, indoctrination/stockholm syndrome can cause people to accept the strangest things. We don’t mind her hating the situation. We just want to know how that hate came into being and (ideally) roughly when it started forming. Is her master aware of it?

[Ellri]

@Jasonhero

Review of Talik Gida

Chain lightning is usually a technique that can only be learned after gaining more than basic knowledge of Force Lightning.

Is Atroxa a Sith Lord or a Darth? The two terms are not interchangeable.

Bounty-Hunting droids are extremely unusual, due to the simple fact that an unaccompanied droid is considered a free droid in the regions bounty hunters are most likely to be found while working. See the Droid Guide for more details.

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Some of the notes concerning early life from the previous review apply here too. You can probably surmise which these are, and if not, ask us.

How old do you put her at when she rose to the rank of Apprentice?

[JessieTargaryen]

@Ellri I have done the requested updates.

For Vasani, I answered everything except stuff about her father, as he was simply not involved in any decision involving the children. It was more about heirs than about a romantic tie. As well as the other things you requested.

For Talik, answered/inserted everything and added a human companion to the droid bounty hunter (as his owner most likely, though they're listed as a duo). Removed the Chain Lightning ability.

I hope this satisifes everything and if something needs to be added/clarified please let me know!

[Ellri]

Sounds like fairly reasonable solutions.

Still feels odd of course to see someone sell their child, but at least there's a fairly reasonable reason.

Minor thought: Could there perhaps be a part of the sale agreement that she is ideally not to be resold, or at least to be kept out of imperial hands? Or were the imperial ties of her mother kept secret?

There's no doubt more we could've nitpicked at, but you covered the important parts we spotted fairly well. We'll see about having another GM check these two sheets to see if they too feel they are ready for approval.

[Ezekiel]

Now that Ellri has gone over the force side of things with you In happy to also give my stamp of approval.

Welcome to the Game :)