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@Ghost Note Thank you for the feedback. This is what happens when I make CSs at work and my attention is split. I made the changes and cleaned it up. I wasn't too sure what to do with the abstraction description. Can you tell me exactly what you're looking for in the description if the rewrite isn't up to snuff?
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@silvermist1116 So everything looks good. I just want to be clear since you listed the creative defense. Is that the only thing Elle can do? Like Elle can't go out and grab something?
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Alright, I'm looking for Co-Gms for the RP. Who wants to step up?
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@Ghost Note I hadn't thought about that. If part of creative defense is to grab to deflect and defend would that be okay?
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@Ghost Note I hadn't thought about that. If part of creative defense is to grab to deflect and defend would that be okay?


Yeah just add that to the sheet
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@Ghost Note I added it.
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LIMITS ⫻ While inside of Elias, Elle can only sense what Elias senses. This functionally means that the Apparition cannot react to what Elias doesn't see, but while out she can react a bit more independently. It takes a few seconds for the Apparition to manifest as well. The Apparition can be commanded by Elias to an extent, but her primary function will be protecting Elias. She cannot travel more than two meters away from him and the largest she can create a barrier is twenty feet in diameter. The Creative Defense can take a great deal of punishment, able to withstand a barrage of bullets but Extra-Normal attacks are far more effective against it than conventional. The Apparition accumulates damage in the form of cracks before the whole barrier breaks, but the Apparition can take a ton of damage.

WEAKNESSES ⫻ The Apparition's Creative Defense puts a certain type of stress on Elias. Whenever it's struck Elias feels a headache and dizziness for a few seconds before it fades. The stronger the attack, the worst the effect, and it can possibly end in nosebleeds for Elias.
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I removed the Apparition's ability to shapeshift into human form to make Affixed, Adjoined, etc, make more sense. Also, I thought out the first few arcs of the story - it's gonna be gr8.

And horrible.

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