[OOC] Ultimate Comics: DC - Shadows Among Us

[Gowi]

You post it and edit it if problems/unfinished.

[Archangel89]

I've posted Jared's origin (including Kent Nelsons) any thoughts since this is the first time I have ever touched a character like this.

[Prince Potter]

Gowi said
Your profile seems in order as well so post it in the approved CS link I mentioned, though I would say to anyone referencing Gotham's university; it's University of Gotham, not Gotham University as stated (if I recall) in some notes or my CS. If I forgot to mention it, my bad, but yeah.

Sounds good to me. Any idea when the fun starts?

[Gowi]

I'm going to give a lot of folks time to get some sheets up; we're still missing some returns and I'd like to see what they do.

[Sloth]

Gowi said
I'm going to give a lot of folks time to get some sheets up; we're still missing some returns and I'd like to see what they do.

I know you want to see my Dick. It's okay, Gowi.

[Rade]

Generally speaking, it'd probably be wise to wait until this site is a little more secure and functional.

[Gowi]

I'd like to wait until more formatting choices are available, but in my opinion it seems functional enough.

[thatguy]

Finished cyborg's sample post, and the cs

[Gowi]

Queen Bee as a "club owner" as a sort of cover would be interesting, but I'm not completely sure about that bit; especially still with my concern with the Psimon stuff and I have a lot of concerns about The Fearsome Five turning into The Fearsome Five + One. The Fearsome Five in Jinx's are sort of made out to be these metahuman kids who are meant to be agents of subterfuge and such.

[thatguy]

If you want me to take out reference to the 5, I can do that.

[Gowi]

I think it'd be a good idea since I'm practically running Jinx and friends and I have a beginning arc in Gotham half-figured out.

[thatguy]

Okie doke, ill edit them out tomorrow

[Prince Potter]

Gowi said
Your profile seems in order as well so post it in the approved CS link I mentioned, though I would say to anyone referencing Gotham's university; it's University of Gotham, not Gotham University as stated (if I recall) in some notes or my CS. If I forgot to mention it, my bad, but yeah.

I was thinking of making a few more tweaks. Fixing the Universifty of Gotham thing, and maybe adding a part on how each Year of the Superheros and how it affected Jonathan. But I don't really care one way or another about polishing it up a bit. As long as I'm accepted! :)

Oh, but I can't post in the Accepted profiled thread anyway. So you'll have to post my CS.

[Gowi]

C'est la vie. Revise your profile and tell me when it's done and I'll post it; but you should be good to post when we start.

[Unknown100]

Gowi said
So far so good though.Still looking at this one; not much of a shift but that's understandable, I have to wonder why she didn't fill out more of a role in year three or not though. Can you elaborate on such?

Well none of Zatanna's choices, battles or scenes seemed to get mentioned in the intro post, so I imagined year three was the time she spend in a coma and battling small time gangsters (I think, that fits with Batman's back story too).
Only as my character's story began last time, did she step up to fight larger villains.

[Gowi]

So you are starting over(ish), ah. I see. If there's anything you want mentioned in the plot, tell me.

[Unknown100]

Well , I imagined, I continued, right where I left off actually. Maybe I have forgotten something. Dunno.

The last part of the backstory in the CS is pretty much, what I did with the character, before the site went down.

When it ended Zatanna and her father had battled Zachary and Manuel Carlito, at Gotham National Bank, and defeated them. Unfortunate both villains disappeared. And since Zatanna had so obviously teleported through Gotham (to save her father) the secret identity of Zatanna Zatara was not so secret anymore.
They had interrogated the killer doll and found out about the Council of dark magical user, who greatly outnumbered them, 10 ot 1.
They are planning their next move with the computer genius, Lucas Carr.

I don't know what in the CS or told her that fits best being mentioned in the intro.

[Archangel89]

It sounds like Zatanna and Stevens might make a interesting team Ben

[Unknown100]

Archangel89 said
It sounds like Zatanna and Stevens might make a interesting team Ben

Oh yeah, that sounds like an idea ;)

[MST3K 4ever]

I'll get my CS in the depository either today or tomorrow. Sundays I usually back off and take it easy.