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It's just a bow made by elves, I can change it to "Longbow". I'm sorry, I should have been more specific.
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Its fine no need to change, if it was magic you would put enchanted elvish long bow

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Yay, thank you ^^
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Name – Keros Na’khann

Sex - Male

Race - Orc

Class - Mage

Basic Background – Raised in a tribe of Orcs, it was quickly obvious that he was not ‘one of them’. He displayed a type genius not easily found within the orc society. He was branded as defective and an outcast. After being initially cast out, the shaman took pity on him and trained him in the art of magic. When the shaman died, he was exiled and found his way on to St. Christopher.

Appearance - Keros is a 6'5" tall Orc with medium gray skin. His body is muscular and heavily built with a large frame. He has sharp teeth and grown out claws. His black hair is grown passed his shoulders, the sides pulled back and braided, lain over the rest of it. He has a large black tribal tattoo covering his entire back, which can be seen on the tops of his shoulders. He typically walks barefooted.
What is your quest? – To change the way Orcs are viewed by the world and to show fellow Orcs that brilliance is nothing to be ashamed of.

Inventory -
~A simple cloth robe
~Metal fingertip coverings on his right hand
~An ordinary pendant

Other - N/A
Hp - 2
Mana - 3

Strength
Unarmed - 5
Throwing - 3
Melee - 2
Intimidation - 5

Range
Long - 0
Hand - 1
Small - 0
Explosive - 0

Intelligence
Light Magic – 3 +1
Dark Magic – 4 +1
Knowledge – 3 +1
Perception – 3 +1

Diplomacy
Barter - 0
Charisma - 0
Courage - 2
Leadership - 0

Survival
Reflex - 3
Crafting - 1
First Aid - 2
Stamina - 5

Stealth
Steal - 0
Stealth - 0
Lockpick - 3
Agility - 3
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Name - Fon lighheartRace - ElfClass - RogueBasic Background - Basically spent his free time training in the woods to learn basic combat skills, he was always a naturally gifted thief and socialite. His classy swagger and high level of confidence catches a lot of attention from all types of interesting people. He's a last killer and will always go out of his way to rescue a damsel.What is your quest? - As a neutral chaotic character he accepts any quest given to him. He finds it's easier to float by in the wind than to spend a lifetime in struggle.InventorySmall napsackPair of daggersRed hatTan jacketTan shirtBaggy brown pantsTall dark brown boots.Other - N/AHp - 5Mana - 0StrengthUnarmed - 5Throwing - 0Melee - 3Intimidation - 0RangeLong - 2Hand - 0Small - 0Explosive - 0IntelligenceLight Magic - 0Dark Magic - 0Knowledge - 0Perception - 0DiplomacyBarter - 0Charisma - 4Courage - 0Leadership - 0SurvivalReflex - 2Crafting - 0First Aid - 0Stamina - 2Stealth - 5 +1Steal - 5 +1Lockpick - 3 +1Agility - 4 +1I borrowed ishvals cs as a background.


Hi your character sheet is better but you can not go over 5 points on a single skill
the +1's mean that your stealth stuff is at 6 which wont give you anymore boosts then if they where on 5
my suggestion would be to lower the stealth ones down by one and use the 4 extra points on other skills.
Sorry if this was all confusing but I am here for any help if you need it.
also it looks like you have only used 35 points out of a possible 48
Maybe you could put the 13 extra points you will have from these edits into some of the skills you have put as zero?
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ShadowGhoul said
Name – Keros Na’khannSex - MaleRace - OrcClass - MageBasic Background – Raised in a tribe of Orcs, it was quickly obvious that he was not ‘one of them’. He displayed a type genius not easily found within the orc society. He was branded as defective and an outcast. After being initially cast out, the shaman took pity on him and trained him in the art of magic. When the shaman died, he was exiled and found his way on to St. Christopher. What is your quest? – To change the way Orcs are viewed by the world and to show fellow Orcs that brilliance is nothing to be ashamed of. Inventory -~A simple cloth robe ~Metal fingertip coverings on his right hand~An ordinary pendant Other - N/AHp - 2Mana - 3StrengthUnarmed - 5Throwing - 3Melee - 2Intimidation - 5RangeLong - 0Hand - 1Small - 0Explosive - 0IntelligenceLight Magic – 2 +1Dark Magic – 4 +1Knowledge – 3 +1Perception – 3 +1DiplomacyBarter - 0Charisma - 0Courage - 2Leadership - 0SurvivalReflex - 3Crafting - 1First Aid - 1Stamina - 5StealthSteal - 0Stealth - 0Lockpick - 3Agility - 1


You have 4 more points to spend.
The *1 are bonus points
I suggest filling the skills that you have put to 0
you never know when you may need to use them.
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Fixed my points.
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I will put the intro post up in 12 hours
(Uk lunch time :D)

Characters can be accepted and introduced when the RP has started.
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Hey, I see that the IC has already started but may I join?

((You are officially being stalked! Congrats man!))
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Its my charismatic charm ;P

The IC hasn't started yet so you are fine. Any questions just ask!
just post your CS and I will help with any query's.
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One question. How will we roll the dice?
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I was thinking I would roll for people but if people would rather not have that I can take a majority vote and you guys can role for yourselves
i.e using actual dice or online dice
all I ask is that honesty is key because hey its not fun if we don't lose rolls sometimes.
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solamelike said
Its my charismatic charm ;PThe IC hasn't started yet so you are fine. Any questions just ask! just post your CS and I will help with any query's.


OK it will be up as soon as possible!
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I would presume each post is one turn in a combat scenario, and everyone can do one thing per turn so to speak (With the obvious addition of writing in the gaps of moving around and whatever, we're not rocks xD). With that said, I would personally vote for you rolling for all of us.
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Shard said
I would presume each post is one turn in a combat scenario, and everyone can do one thing per turn so to speak (With the obvious addition of writing in the gaps of moving around and whatever, we're not rocks xD)


Bingo

Though there wont be set turn patterns.
Someone may want to find out something about someone first before attacking them for instance.
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We'll just have to be mature and professional! ^^
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Ok sorry to do this but a few things wrong D:
You can not go over 5 points on a skill. Including the bonus points from that class.
The bonus points from the class effect all stats in that stat range.
i.e for you it adds +1 to all intelligence stats meaning a +1 to
light magic, dark magic, knowledge and perception
I kind of feel a staff and a wand are not needed and so would rather you chose one or the other

With these edits I will look again and decided if accepted.

EDIT - I see whilst I was typing you fixed the +1 problem :D
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Well then, I totally read that wrong!
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