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We are all put on this earth to do something. Now we are here to survive.

This is a survival-esque RP where a community of varied races fight alongside each other to stay alive.

We are all a unit based mainly fight and adventure loving. At least that's what we're made to think...











My application -

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Name - Amelia Talirin
Age - 19
Gender- Female ♀ (CODES : Alt + 11 = ♂, Alt + 12 = ♀ )
Sexuality - Hetrosexual
Rank - Trainer
Race - Human
Appearance - A tall, lithe girl with short, straight and side-swept hair. Green eyes and a few freckles over the bridge of her nose. She's often in black uniform with a red ribbon-belt tied loosely around her waist to symbolize her leadership place in the Stealth team.

Personality - She's a tough leader to say the least, constantly working everyone to their limits, however to balance this harshness she is kinder in person, she refuses to allow any of her initiates or warriors go through mental training without her present and will never turn someone in need of help down. She's sarcastic and funny and outgoing. She's like a big sister to a majority of the members of the 'Correction' Operation, even though she may be younger than them. She's the newest Stealth leader as the previous died before Amelia even turned 20 and may be slightly under-experienced.
Backstory - Born into the civilian live she watched the 'Correction' operatives leap around the city gracefully, but most of all she attempted to spot the stealth force. She was well off, as an apothecary's daughter she got medicines when she was ill and the high pay allowed a decent supply of food, so she trained, with every stick found. She got a large stick and called it a sword, broke it in half and dual wielded "Daggers" and even attempted archery, in which she failed at.

By the time she was ten she was tall and strong and she changed her look from pretty little girl to strong warrior in an attempt to fit in as soon as she joined the force. I mean that's what she was going to do! She flipped her hair to the side and cut it short, the ends jagged and uneven but that's what happens when it's cut by an inexperienced apothecary owner. At 14 she joined the Correction operation straight off and, due to her previous 'training' she took well and got a warriors promotion within a year, however back then there was a large attack at the time and promotions were easier to get. This changed a year later as some 'experienced' fighters had poor fighting abilities and required further training. By 17 she got a deputy's spot and loyally followed the previous leader - Darren Ollismith - until he died abrubtly in a 'mistakes' surprise attack. Amelia, under-prepared and under-qualified took the lead of the Stealth team and has been learning from other leaders since.

Fighting Specialty - Stealth.
Weapons of choice - Dual wielding swords and daggers.
Strengths(Max 3) - Stealth, agility, fear resistance
Weaknesses(At least 3) - Brute force, ranged attacks, A pressure point on her side, by her stomach, Heavy weapons
FEARS (VERY IMPORTANT- Bold main fear- at least 4) - Water, harassment, rejection/loneliness, fighting dogs

OOC

Acivity (1-10) - 8-10??
Do you understand the History? - Yep!
Do you understand the Base Layout? - Yes again.

Interest Check here

Hello! I see you're looking at my RP, Sorry if things change and I ask of anyone to change their application for said reason, this is sort of WIP so it can be a better RP for everyone here! I will make announcements on what's changed in separate posts to make it clear for you all!
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The District
A large, sprawling city walled in by massive steel walls in a perfect circle and encompassed by treacherous mountains that even the Mistakes have difficulty maneuvering. The frontline, as it's called, sits on the eastern side, and it is where the Base resides. Whilst the city is compressed into a certain portion of this walled-off area, there is a large expanse of flat and empty land between the Wall and the City just in case the civilians are threatened with an all-out invasion. Under the mountains are emergency shuttles lead to a secondary underground city, filled with supplies and resources to rebuild and reclaim their home if such an invasion occurs.

Whilst it has the potential to be full of crime, It's impossible to do so with the Defence team breathing down the neck of almost every single scrap of the City. Those who break the law are taken away and never seen again. It's very propaganda-heavy, the most important part being the national anthem, which is played almost everywhere. Despite that, people tend to get along pretty well..but there's a clear divide between civilians and soldiers. The two classes only mix with the veterans, those who are 40 or over and return back to their homes intact. They're generally well-respected and play a major role in keeping the sharing system active, and keeping crime rates down. People respect the over 40s.

The actual grounds of the City involve a large, dusty and flat plain from years of construction and trampling of the grass. Outside of the City it is a windswept wasteland which slowly turns into a vast, and thick, forest full of Mistakes.

As for the technology, the Engineering Team pride themselves on their security system. The district is not only fitted out with security cameras which set off alarms when tampered with -and- lock all doors in a 5 metre radius, but it ranges as far as microphones on the walls to pick up conversation, and loudspeakers peppering the lamp-posts to spew out propaganda at every opportunity. The TVs only show 2 channels - the News, and a channel all about Public Service Announcements.

Good food is difficult to come by, along with organic exotic luxuries like silk or recreational drugs. Most of the meals are mycroprotein-based, with artificial vitamin supplements added to them. Those who can afford it get the luxury of sugary foods, but in order to get these rare supplies the Aerial team has to import them, and the Aerial team's cargo is closely inspected by the Defence Team.



The Top Dogs - NPC list

Michael Rookwood: Defence Team Trainer, he's the public face of the Government. Respected and feared, his sneering visage looms over almost every street corner in posters, his influence found all over the streets and in the military itself. From him spawned the colloquial phrase "Rookwood Watches", which is meant to be a sign of patriotism.

Melody Sparks: Engineering Team Trainer, generally shy and quiet, but vastly intelligent. She makes sure everything in the District is running smoothly, and the blame lies on her alone if it isn't.

"Ace": Aerial Team Trainer. He is, assuredly, the weirdest Trainer in all of the District, keeping his team practically in the air 24/7.

Teresa: Head Chef. Those caught stealing more than their fair share of rations will be reprimanded! (NB: Whilst Teresa is actually 'Head Ration Dispenser', she tends to hit people with a ladle for not calling her a head chef. Not even Rookwood messes with her on that lone matter.)

Scarlet: Talk about Scarlet, get shot. Simple as.
More to be added.


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I don't need to point out who it is I'm talking to since my thread is so abandoned! However! Other than a few confusing mistakes which are mainly grammar, your relation to the general idea is admirable. Please DO learn the layout as it's sort of very important.

Accepted!
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Jessikka said
Other than a few confusing mistakes which are mainly grammar, your relation to the general idea is admirable.


Jessikka said
Please DO learn the layout as it's sort of very important.


I'M ON IT, JESSIKKA MA'AM.

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I'M ON IT, JESSIKKA MA'AM.


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I saw the Interest check and was interested, I'll work on a cs
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(Yeah new people!)

I look forward to it!
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Hey, Jessikka! It's Nathaniel (Brockyfang) here under the request of Nyzath!

I hear you need a "Trainer" for the main solders of the Offensive Team? I would be happy to take up that role, if, of course, you trust me enough :)
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Heckie yeah! Make an app, please!
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Jessikka said
Heckie yeah! Make an app, please!


Haha, working on it.
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Name: Ashley " Ash " Stryker

Age: 36

Rank: Veteran/Ranged

Race: Human

Appearance: Ash has tanned attractive skin, with a stoic but beautiful facial features, she has bright blue eyes that oddly change to a bright blood red when she get angry, she had a small black mole under her left eye, she has long flowing purple hair that stops at her lower backside, and most of it covers her forehead just above her eyes. Ash has an athletic build with strong leg muscles and curvaceous figure with well-endowed breasts, she has a slim waist, flared hips, and round rear. She has various scars along her back, chest, and abdomen, on the back of her neck she has a bar code tattoo that she had gotten with her unit.

The clothes she usually wears is a light armored version of the standard operations uniform, with lace up black boots, with a black balaclava that shows her bright blue eyes, along with a pair of black leather gloves. It would only be on Rare occasions that she would be seen wearing black short sleeved button up shirt showing her cleavage, with dual shoulder holsters holding one automatic pistol and semi-automatic pistol, she wears a pair of khaki pants with her same lace up boots but with the strings colored blue, with a silver wrist watch on her left wrist.



Personality: Ash keeps her self stoic both mentally and in facial expression, it comes from a couple of things in life that happened to her, under her stoic farce she has posttraumatic stress of losing her entire unit, but with enough medication she got over it somewhat but is still plagued by the past from time to time. Unlike everyone else she doesn't understand jokes and has a very dry humor.

Ash is very skilled in hand to hand combat and firearms, having a vast knowledge of firearms and how to use them, she is also extremely intelligent and crafty, she is so skilled in both the two fighting styles that she can mix both up almost simultaneously. She harbors a lot of love for her single child, and she would kill anyone that would dare mess with her kid. Without her medication she can be very different and violent from little things, and she won't hesitate to just pull her gun on whatever is giving her problem and just shoot it.

Back story: Ash was one of the children brought up living the life of war, she was trained in shooting and hand to hand combat, and excelled in both being the top in her class and in her squad, when she reached the age of 20 she and her squad was assigned to be escort for scientist that would journey out of the city and out of the area to gather new research materials. On their first mission their helicopter was shot down, their pilot and co-pilot were killed, they slowly had to journey back to the city but almost everyday they lost someone, till it was just Ash on her own, while she was on her own she traveled day and night killing anything that gotten in her way between the city and when she had gotten back she climbed the wall free handed and was brought back into the city.

When she had a psyche analysis test they found out she had ptsd and gave her a temporary discharge to get herself together, during that time she did manage to get some of her sanity back and fell in love with a man that was a civilian weapon smith, that built weapons for military. Soon her discharge was extended after she had gotten pregnant and given birth to two twins, Ash and her husband took care of both their children, when the twins turned four, Ash had gotten a call asking if she would return to duty, she told them she would have to think about it but said she would most likely report back to duty.

Weapons of choice: H&K 45, Glock-18

Fighting Specialty: Ranged mostly

Strengths: Strength, Endurance, Firearms

Weaknesses: Stealth, explosives, Heavy weapons

FEARS:

-Death of any of her children (it would more than likely make her crazy)

-Seeing the City in Chaos or completely destroyed.

-Losing her entire squad (self explanatory)

-Being lost outside the city (Self explanatory )

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Acivity; 8,5

Do you understand the History? - Yes

Do you understand the Base Layout? - Kinda
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First of all, what team is your character going to be in?

A few notes on your backstory, I see that you said you'd changed the history but I'm going to have to make a few notes? If you wouldn't mind.

  • Your character would have to have been... Nine? For his addiction to become as severe?

  • Although your reasoning to be an older recruit is pretty sound, the police would have hunted you down, since it's like a tradition, you'd be breaking the rules? That's why I used a set age, really

  • I did sort of say 3 maximum, maybe get rid of the ones I scored out? Or whatever you feel would match your character!


  • These can be easily fixed though!

    1. Your characters addiction could be less severe and the strange attitude can be from street fighting or other hardening activities you'd said you indulged in. Also cocaine would be hard to get now, any cocaine would go for thousands, which, being poor, might be hard to get!

    2. You were late to the ceremony?

    3. See the scored out strengths that I put in the hider above and consider removing those or some of the others!

    Please don't get discouraged! It's just you application has a few minor mistakes that I'd just like to see you fix, alright?
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    A very decent, lore-abiding application and a nice concept in general, also very impressive to be able to make out of what patchy history and facts we've been spewing forth whilst you were writing it! It's a bit of an improvement on our behalf - we'll try to make a more concise "history and background info"for all of you, but if you've read it all carefully, you'd notice how...well, messed up the District is. -Very- dictatorship-styled, and the Defence Team get in on everything.

    Things that you'll have to alter, Spriggs:

    ● It looks like Ash has had a pretty tough life, and whilst the Squad part was understandable and medication would've been taken for it...they wouldn't have let Ash back on the team after the car crash. Logically, they would've let Ash back in by the skin of her teeth after being prescribed anti psychotics - nobody wants a crazy soldier in their army.

    ● What team is she in? Ranged, or Offensive...? I'd assume one of the two, judging by her fighting style. (Join ranged, we're much better than Hovelmeier's team*)

    *We're completely NOT biased against whichever team you choose, mind. They all basically work together in training, missions, etc.
    Things that we're going to improve: We're going to add a quick 'opening' to the plotline, and get a floorplan for the base. Also, the CS template is under work, but only add the extra details if you want to. We do, however, want you both to take a look at fixing the alterations before being accepted. Thanks for applying, though; it's really inspiring for the two of us to see people interested enough to join up.
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    Someone's watched Divergent read the books or both
    I'm surprised I don't see the Name Tris listed
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    I've never seen divergent, or read the books, but Jess did yesterday. Since I am mainly working on Plot, I can't tell whether or not it is similar to Divergent. But I do know its all coming from my gloriously untainted braincase, so rest assured - it probably isn't over 70% Divergent ripoff!
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    No worries I read the first book yesterday an then saw the movie today

    It was the part about :
    A train takes you above the city to a building rooftop, it's.. Not slowing down? You look out the doors and spot people leaping to the rooftop, drawing a breath you step back and do the same. "The only way in is to jump." you hear and get pushed to the edge and you glance down, a hole leads to blackness. Will you jump?

    That is pure Divergent

    I loved the book and thought the movie rushed the plot as well as liberally changing many subplots from the book

    I have read a good deal of the OOC an do find it very interesting
    Presently I'm struggling with the either or decision of group as well as fears

    If you should experience anything akin to writer's block I can offer my documented Attention to detail skill.
    I love filling in the blank spaces, also as a military brat I am a font of operational information

    My Father was SBS and I loved reading all the articles I could about them and any books dad left laying about
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    Stitches said
    A very decent, lore-abiding application and a nice concept in general, also very impressive to be able to make out of what patchy history and facts we've been spewing forth whilst you were writing it! It's a bit of an improvement on our behalf - we'll try to make a more concise "history and background info"for all of you, but if you've read it all carefully, you'd notice how...well, messed up the District is. -Very- dictatorship-styled, and the Defence Team get in on everything.Things that you'll have to alter, Spriggs:● It looks like Ash has had a pretty tough life, and whilst the Squad part was understandable and medication would've been taken for it...they wouldn't have let Ash back on the team after the car crash. Logically, they would've let Ash back in by the skin of her teeth after being prescribed anti psychotics - nobody wants a crazy soldier in their army.● What team is she in? Ranged, or Offensive...? I'd assume one of the two, judging by her fighting style. (Join ranged, we're much better than Hovelmeier's team*)*We're completely NOT biased against whichever team you choose, mind. They all basically work together in training, missions, etc.Things that we're going to improve: We're going to add a quick 'opening' to the plotline, and get a floorplan for the base. Also, the CS template is under work, but only add the extra details if you want to. We do, however, want you both to take a look at fixing the alterations before being accepted. Thanks for applying, though; it's really inspiring for the two of us to see people interested enough to join up.


    Shes in Ranged.

    Do you want me to completely change her history to something else or just alter it a little ?

    Rumi Wasbi
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    Spriggs27 said
    Shes in Ranged. Do you want me to completely change her history to something else or just alter it a little ?Rumi Wasbi


    Just alter it a little, please ^-^
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    Kon'nichiwa Spriggs kun

    Kon'nichiwa Jessikka sama
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