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I can teach you some if you want, I'm Chinese (born in China, living in Canada).My character is not impressed.


Your Chinese? I study in Dalian haha
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I know I just joined the forum, but mind if I join? I was RPing on another site, but the RP section is almost dead, so I came to this site looking for a new RP site. Here's my idea for a character.Name: Kal O'twa'laAge: 32Sex: MaleAffiliation: Grey Paladin (Republic sympathies)Physical Description: (roughly like Cable from X-men), Human (assumed full blooded), Caucasian, 5'8, stocky build, 105 kilograms. He wears armor made from the hides of Mynocks, making it more resistant against energy weapons than most natural materials. Bionic left eye and arm, from a particularly serious battle against the denizens of the lowest levels.Mental Description: Cold and calculating, he cares only about protecting his people, and won't hesitate to kill anyone that threatens them. The harsh life he has lived in the depths of Coruscant have made him a ruthless warrior, at least to any that threatens him or his. He is a talented mechanic and slicer who salvages and repairs what he can in order to make life in the sublevels easier for him and his people. History: Born on Sublevel 107 of Coruscant to a refugee, he grew up never seeing the sun. At the age of twelve, he ran into a couple hiding out in the higher-up sublevels, a Grey Paladin and a Former Jedi that had left the order shortly after passing the Initiate trials to become a Padawan. They taught him to use the force, and occasionally still instruct him when he has questions, though he chose not to join the Paladins.When he finally did see the surface at the age of nineteen, he was overwhelmed by the openness of everything. He returned to the sublevels, this time going even deeper to escape galactic affairs, to sublevel 200, and built a community in some of the abandoned storage areas down there and slowly built his society, one based on charity and freedom. When his hunters started running into CIS droid troops, however, he once again decided to brave the surface, if only to end the threat to his people.Equipment: Carries a 0.7 meter long Vibroblade on his back, a DC-17 blaster pistol (sold to him by a Black Market dealer) hangs on his right side. On his left hangs a blue lightsaber built from salvaged parts, made with a synthetic crystal, grown to mimic those found that are occasionally found in the asteroid fields orbiting stars that have gone Supernova. The crude nature of the lightsaber and the crystal used in its construction, however, means that, though it causes more damage than a typical lightsaber, it quickly depletes the antiquated powercell it was built with.Other: Force powers: Healing, Electric shock (destroy droid type), force lightning, medium telekinesisI figured a character like this could show up at the temple to ask for help, and the fact that I'm not quite up on recent events wouldn't really matter.


Give me a minute to think this over, it is simple yet it works.
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Your Chinese? I study in Dalian


我以前住在北京, 我给大连北京的问候.
Translation: I used to live in Beijing, best wishes from Beijing to Dalian.
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Nariata said
Give me a minute to think this over, it is simple yet it works.

I came up with some NPC companions for him if you want to see them:

Aichkay - Droid, C1 protocol with military droid tactical programming and a few personality subroutines from the same military droid. Named for the HK droids of 3000 years ago he learned of from holorecords he found at the age of 16, Kal built it to serve a similar function.
Briansk- Echani female, used to be a protector-slave for a Hutt, rescued by Tek. Prefers close combat, and is the best person in the squad at hand-to-hand.
Tek- human male, medium complexion, two meters tall, skinny but muscular, former bounty hunter. Fell in love with Briansk and rescued her from her master. They ran away to the lower levels to escape its wrath, and ended up finding Kal's community. Heavy weapons and demolitions expert for the team.
Po'mali - Twilek male, pale green, 40ish years, Survivalist, has a knack for finding whatever you need salvaged. Leads the teams salvage operations expert and battle medic, and is average in many other areas, such as fighting (best with blaster), repair, slicing, and medical care.

As these are NPCs, anyone can control them is they need to, just keep it consistent with what we know about them. Ex: Tek wouldn't be flirting with you, as he is in a serious relationship, but Po'mali might, especially if you are a twilek woman.
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Ok. The only questions are what will your characters role in this be? What do the bionic attachments do? (Increase strength, improved vision, etc?) What is his fighting style/skill level?
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Ok. The only questions are what will your characters role in this be? What do the bionic attachments do? (Increase strength, improved vision, etc?) What is his fighting style/skill level?


They will basically come to the surface looking for Jedi assistance in driving the battle droids out of their territory. When they find that the droids are trying to conquer the planet, they will side with the GAR against them, even going so far as to run joint missions in the sublevels.
His bionic arm has approximately five time the strength of a normal human arm, and is more durable against damage, though not against electricity. He cannot channel the force through his bionic arm.
The eye was salvaged from a droid, and as such has an expanded frequency range which reaches into the infrared, and has the ability to zoom in up to 10x, giving him ten times the distance vision in that one eye.
The implant which controls the bionic enhancements is outdated, but stable enough to block a small number of pain receptors should the need arise. It also records his bio-readings for medical use.

He has received basic training in several lightsaber forms, though he prefers Echani vibroblade styles popular among special-ops troops across the galaxy, regularly practicing with Briansk to perfect his technique. His lightsaber training generally only helps him see flaws in his opponent's techniques, which he seems to have a knack for. As he was trained by a Gray Paladin, he sees the force as a tool, something to be used when it is needed, but not revered. As such, he tends to only use it in battle when the need arises, though is quite proficient at reading his opponents position and moves, as well as weaknesses.
He once took out a Rancor that a "crazy old Twilek" had kept as a pet, along with other exotic pets. It had broken free after his death and, when it got tired of eating Kinrath and Kath hounds, moved a bit to close to the settlement for comfort. His team lost two people, but he managed to defeat it when he stabbed it in the back of the throat with his light saber.
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I'll say accepted. Might be useful for my plans:)
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OK. Post is finally up,clocking in at 6 pages in length. It may not be the best but allows us to move on.
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may i have Morrin engage Anora in combat?
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may i have Morrin engage Anora in combat?


Uh, Nya and Morrin just went on a wild goose chase and apparently missed their targets (since Nariata didnt even mention us). I guess we can circle back to the AA gun and try to take it back.
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Uh, Nya and Morrin just went on a wild goose chase and apparently missed their targets (since Nariata didnt even mention us). I guess we can circle back to the AA gun and try to take it back.


i posted so i am waiting for you to post
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Ok, I posted. It's only a page or so of text, but things are set up for us to meet each other.
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gcold said
Uh, Nya and Morrin just went on a wild goose chase and apparently missed their targets (since Nariata didnt even mention us). I guess we can circle back to the AA gun and try to take it back.


Oh! You were there? I must have misread your post, if i did i will say sorry xD I thought you were just departing haha

EDIT: TheUnkown - Ohhh you :D That shall be interesting to say the least.
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Oh! You were there? I must have misread your post, if i did i will say sorry xD I thought you were just departing haha


We were, but you fast forwarded immediately. Don't worry about it, Yog and I'll will catch up to you, just make sure Anora's ready for another fight.
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She's feeling the wear by now. She will fight but you guys have the advantage :P For the fight itself, should we collab it?
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She's feeling the wear by now. She will fight but you guys have the advantage :P For the fight itself, should we collab it?


yay! everyone gang up on the Sith.
You could always surrender to me, then escape after you recover. Or pull some dirty Sith trick and escape with Mandalore.

collab? do you mean, do it in PMs tonight, then condense and post it afterwards? We'd have to come up with a reason why both of us are there, like her seeing you take the lift down and following, or something. She could even attack you on the surface while you retreat.
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Titanpad the entire post. I figure that it would evolve into two collabs, the fight with the Republic forces with the retreat down followed by the fight with your forces.

Blackguard is not Sith :) Just assumed to be!
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Titanpad the entire post. I figure that it would evolve into two collabs, the fight with the Republic forces with the retreat down followed by the fight with your forces.Blackguard is not Sith :) Just assumed to be!


I had to look up titanpad. Good idea. We'll have to PM to coordinate when.
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Im GMT+8 TMZ. I think the best choice would be to wait for the weekend, allow Gcold and Yog to post an arrival post then go into combat post. Then a filler post from some random people then our collab.
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Im GMT+8 TMZ. I think the best choice would be to wait for the weekend, allow Gcold and Yog to post an arrival post then go into combat post. Then a filler post from some random people then our collab.


Sounds good. I'll get my next IC up soon. Let me know when you have titanpad ready.
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I'll post whenever. I'm open almost any night from now until four or five hours from now. I'd like to do it as soon as possible, though, as we re stuck until we colab.

Well, technically, I do have about half a page to a page of character development I could post, but having them discuss other uses for the area they are in isn't exactly interesting. I figure I'll post it just prior to the cargo elevator's activation.
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