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Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by SkyLily27
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*cough cough* we are talking about a setting where a 13 something year old that drives a motorcycle, has acrobatic skills that would put batman to shame, beats up criminals that are three times his weight on a weekly basis.I'd be concerned with parents letting their 15 year old girl run around fighting crime while wearing fishnet stockings


There are two outfits I never said which one she mainly wore and if you read the other it gives a view of where her abilities stand. You also got to think about her parents and how she grew up.
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Wait shes 15 and can drive a motorcycle, Damn where is this taking place at the let a short 15 year old drive a motorcycle ?


*coughcough*robin*coughcough*
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Really ? I couldn't tell, maybe it's that shitty Teen titans go that's aired that made me forget that.

Thanks for helping me remember Matt.
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Name: Olivia Queen (Liv is her nickname. Some people call her 'her highness' due to her last name to annoy her) Alias: Has been called by two different names, Black Hawk and Black ArrowAge: 15Gender: FemaleAbilities/Skills: -Acrobatics-Driving any vehicle-Investigation-Martial Arts: She is one of the most skilled martial artists on the planet. Currently being trained by her mother in: ~Aikido ~Boxing ~Capoeira ~Dragon Style Kung Fu ~Hapkaido ~Judo ~Jujutsu ~Krav Maga ~Muay Thai ~Pressure point fighting ~Savate ~Tae Kwon Do ~Wing Chun-Tactical AnalysisPowers: Hawk Call- (Her version of the Canary Cry) a potent sonic attack, able to damage and stun foes or objects, to the point of shattering metal. She possesses a incredible degree of control over her vocal cords. This enables her to mimic sounds and generate any sound she desires, even developing several abilities. The Hawk Call has been able to reach 300 decibels, which is enough to make a person's ears start bleeding even if they're not the attack target. But that was only an accident at a younger age, she still is learning how to control her vocal cords like her mother.Weaknesses: -Mention of her past before learning about what her parents do-Ranged powers because she is an amazing fighter and archer but she doesn't have as much of an ability like the others-Olivia is a very feisty girl and can and will punch you if you annoy her-Although she keeps it a secret, Olivia is extremely afraid of StormsEquipment: -Specially made Black Bow with high tech arrows that have different functions-Martial Arts Weapons (Mainly a specially made metal pole that she keeps on her waist in its compounded form)Personality: Olivia is not your typical girl. She doesn't go for all that romantic gestures like candles, flowers, or cutesy things. Olivia is the type of girl that likes to get out and get dirty. She was taken hunting and has become very accustomed with nature and doesn't mind being dirty. But just like her mother she wears makeup and things to enhance her natural beauty. Olivia is also extremely feisty and is often easy to annoy which ends with her snapping at you whether verbally or physically. Olivia is very offended by sexist comments which makes her strive to be dependent causing her to not be that much into teams. She is also like her father and mother in how they both are seen as flirty(her father) and seductive(her mother) often using these traits to benefit her. She can be seen as irresponsible but when it comes down to it Olivia is very serious.History: Olivia was born into the Queen family, with two parents that she thought were simply business people. Unfortunately, that wasn't true. Olivia's parents were both part of the Justice League, there names were Oliver Queen, a.k.a The Green Arrow; and Dinah Lance, a.k.a The Black Canary. Due to this Olivia was targeted by an unknown enemy who hated her parents. At the age of five she was kidnapped and taken to an abandoned house in the middle of the woods. There the unknown enemy left her tied up and alone for a week that just happened to be a week where a bad storm raged on for seven days. After the week was over her parents were lured out and they fought against the enemy's henchmen but they never fought against the actual one behind the kidnapping. After a year had passed since the dreadful time in Olivia's past and since her parents had told her everything about their lives, she began training. Her parents couldn't agree on which of their skills they would teach her so they both taught her their strengths. As they trained her they discovered Olivia's power that was like Dinah's Canary Cry. That became another skill her parents helped her learn. At the age of fourteen her parents told her that there was going to be a new Young Justice and that she was going to be apart of it. Olivia didn't want to but her parents forced her thinking it would help her become more of a people person.Appearance: Weight: 107 lbs(pure muscle)Height: 5'3" (yeah she is short deal with it!)Olivia has beach blonde hair with stunning, crystal blue eyes that prove she is the daughter of her parents. She also has a curvy, athletic build and a natural beauty like her mother. Costume: Goes between the one in the hider and the one at the top of the Character SheetOther: Although it may seem like she is a talented fighter because she has learned a lot. She is still not responsible and screws up a lot. Sometimes letting herself become distracted or fighting with her emotions instead of how she was taught by her mother.

Not accepted. She just screams OP... I can honestly say that I don't even know where to start with this one...so I am going to deny her overall instead of write 4 paragraphs on what you need to fix just to try it... Plus we have more than enough agile/stealthy bat-man like characters... and since your character surpasses every single one of the other characters in this area, I'm gonna say no.

I'll be giving a more detailed reason on why I say no once I'm on the PC instead of my phone.
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Ok, I'm not going to fight it but I don't agree but I respect your decision cause you're a Co-gm. Just count me out. I think I have too much school stress anyways to take on a roleplay.
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Just forget I was ever here sorry for the inconvenience. I think I need to extend my break from roleplaying for schools sake. Bye Demon I'll see you when I am no longer stressed with school
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Ok, I'm not going to fight it but I don't agree but I respect your decision cause you're a Co-gm. Just count me out. I think I have too much school stress anyways to take on a roleplay.


I do apologize with having to deny you, but as I said there is just so many things that I found wrong that She'd barely get accepted even if I tried to help fix the CS. Even then your character will be stepping on a lot of the other players toes... Making it to where either they are left behind as the useless character or you are, which is unfair to both of you. If it was any other character type she might have been accepted easier but as I said, we have too many batman like characters.

My main worries however came from the fact that she's flawless in martial arts, she can drive ANY vehicle and the fact that her power SHATTERS METAL (Just doing that puts her voice up to the ability to kill a city, especially since most metals wouldn't break easily by sound)

If you'd ever like to come back you'll always be more than welcome too. Either way, have fun RPing and I do wish you luck on your journey.

I wish you luck on your schooling as well.
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Well, Imma post now for Mindjack. I'll post for Elín when I figure out what to do with her :c
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I'll be posting tomorrow ^.^
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Sorry double post.
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Is there room for any more?^^
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So, Arachnid is following Red X and Alexandre near a park while most others are screwing around in the YJ HQ. Am I correct?
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Yes you are exactly right ^.^
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Is there room for any more?^^


We have quite a large sum of players, though one did just leave just now so I'll say that there is a possibility that we can squeeze you in... so For now I'll allow you to PM your CS to me until we get a definite answer...

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So, Arachnid is following Red X and Alexandre near a park while most others are screwing around in the YJ HQ. Am I correct?

You are 100% correct on that assumption... most of the team is getting waffles, my character walked off though I might also teleport him with the group as well. I'm still deciding lol xD
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Alright. Then Mindjack will detect people with his telepathy and start to follow as well.

XD You won't believe how hard it is to work with Elin right now
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Alright. Then Mindjack will detect people with his telepathy and start to follow as well.XD You won't believe how hard it is to work with Elin right now


I honest'y thought Mindjack would be harder than Elin since we're on an island covered in plant life.
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Yeah but I can't find a reason WHY she is there. Kinda didn't make her have any connection and a reason why she is a part of YJ. it's the Why that's getting to me.
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Yeah but I can't find a reason WHY she is there. Kinda didn't make her have any connection and a reason why she is a part of YJ. it's the Why that's getting to me.


Than what you do is just, simply have her there and then add the reason later on. At least then you'll be able to have time to further develop her and create that reason.

Starting off is never easy, but once you start it's all easy RPing from there.
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Myeah, fair enough.

Now to do an IC post for the first time since RPG crashed
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Myeah, fair enough. Now to do an IC post for the first time since RPG crashed


Lol same xD
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