The problem is even further back than my previous post. It came about when you wrote this:
"Lazlo continued advancing towards a junction in the hallway which led to an elevator as he responded, "Activate your KDF and BME applications, then eliminate them with prejudice. I'm leaving the top floor to you."..."Standard Deep Space Raider gear." he mumbled to himself, tossing a few papers out of the guy's pocket as he searched for a feeder. It took a few seconds before he managed to find it - it was attached on his left ankle, below three layers of clothing. Lazlo frowned after seeing this, then activated his communicator again as he stood up and rushed down the hallway toward the shielding subsystem. After confirming that he wanted to speak through everyone's communicator, he declared, "Be careful, they have feeders and kinetic ammunition. If you see them sparking or gesturing toward you, find cover." He then quickly continued his journey through the mid-level as Gunther responded by giving him the status of the crew, having eliminated the two remaining combatants in the Oxygen subsystem room."
Ryen and Seita are standing right outside the galley by the elevator. When I read that my line of thinking was- "Huh, Lazlo didn't see them as he rushed past. I guess then the rooms are on the other side of the subsystems from the cockpit? Maybe the the hallways bend? Well, if he didn't see them, then I guess they shouldn't have seen him either." If I 'ignored' your character it was only because mine were ignored first and I thought that's what we were going with. I was simply trying to be flexible.
Either way, I've had just about enough. I don't mind disagreements but I feel that they've happened too often and it's getting to the point where we're constantly bickering. I'm no longer having fun writing for this and have been doing so out of obligation rather than want. Maybe I'm just not a sci-fi writer. Either way, it was nice writing with you while it lasted. So long and thanks for all the fish.