[OOC] Living in Aincrad: a SAO RP

[Jangel13]

okay now let me know if any of that was wrong

[Frettzo]

Jangel, what I recommend is for you to try and structure your posts a little more clearly--What I mean by that is that you could try to separate your posts into two paragraphs. Right now it's kinda hard for me to read the blocks of text you write, and I believe that an ideal paragraph should be 5 sentences/lines in length. Also another tip for concise writing- A paragraph is an idea, and the next paragraph is the continuation of that idea.

Imagine you're walking into a bakery; the first paragraph would be the description of the place and its customers, and the second would be the things you decide to do at the place.

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Otherwise, if you feel like this is too much to ask, just format your posts a little better. Put your dialogues in bold and avoid run-on sentences.

[FujiwaraPhoenix]

Seconded. I have some difficulties reading and making coherent ideas from your posts, which on occasion will obscure ideas that would otherwise be loud and clear.

That aside, I think that seeing Angelo giving out free handouts to people will more likely than not serve to grind Fujiwara's gears even further. I mean, dude's a thief, after all.

[Little_ninja]

No-one seemed to bother interacting with poor Yui who was at the door since about 1600.
She's part of the party too guys!!!

[FujiwaraPhoenix]

Fujiwara's too angry to notice, and Ayame was inside the inn cooking. Don't look at me!

[DELETED7282737]

*sniffels
"i dont mind ill just"
*heads into forest and goes offline

kidding xd

[Frettzo]

Beginning to work on a post xd

[DELETED7282737]

Im going to edit my post

[Frettzo]

Do I have to ask for permission to interrupt your IC hate-session with Angelo with a nice dose of funny? xD

[MarshiestMallow]

go on, bring funny in. a

[Little_ninja]

Yeah that's fine

[Jangel13]

Frettzo said
Do I have to ask for permission to interrupt your IC hate-session with Angelo with a nice dose of funny? xD

for gods sake save me from this lol

[Frettzo]

xD Just wait for a while, I'm tweaking it up a lot, and I still got about 1/3 of it to write.

First time actually trying to write something funny, and writing while looking at a tutorial isn't exactly the quickest thing to do xD

[Little_ninja]

Why are you looking at a tutorial?
What kind of tutorial?
A tutorial for how to write funny things?
Lol

Just go with it, if it's funny, that's good, if not then oh well

[Frettzo]

It just teaches some rules for comedy. Trying to incorporate them and stuff. Just about to say screw it and post what I have xD The group is not supposed to be that good--After all, they usually hunt monsters after working as performers for the day.

Edit: There we go, the show goes on for about 5-7 minutes before the dancers invite people onto the stage. Who Cascabel and the other guy take an interest in, though, will be left up to someone who needs the interaction. All I ask is for that peep to let me know that they want the interaction, and we'll set up a collab pad :p

[FujiwaraPhoenix]

And then suddenly switch flicked, Fujiwara goes into hyperrational mode. Giant counterargument ensues. Yeah. I'll explain those switches... Eventually. Yeah, let's go with that.

I don't know if what I had him say in the argument is okay, though. I'd think that items like that would be pretty rare... Right?

[Jangel13]

its a crappy sword!! its no better then iron! all it has it a chance to do extra damage to dark monsters is that so rare!? its like an enchantment for gods sake!

[FujiwaraPhoenix]

Usually, when a sword has 'silver' in the name it refers to something of decently high value. You don't see newer players in an MMO flaunting around things like that and all.

On that note, the bonus could be what makes it rare. You know, it could have a normal stat layout and all that, but the bonus damage is what makes it valuable. Also rarity for rarity's sake.

[Jangel13]

in this case silver came from someone thinking that when you use SILVER on a werewolf it kills them! the silver refers to its ability against dark monsters their is nothing valuable about other then its ability that's worth no more then 150 col! or 200 at best! it is a crap sword! it was meant to be a peace offering because I went out of my way to use the last of my money to buy something special for someone who hated me the most! the reason it cost me so much was because im a level 3 and I barley have money to spend anyways! why is it so bad for my character to try and make up!?

[MarshiestMallow]

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I got nothing.