~Meanwhile, outside of Magical Christmas Land~
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Tuujaimaa The Saint of Wings
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Durnehviir
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I was joking. I didn't actually wanna know. Lol
Needs moar IC (Serves as encouragement for whatever we are still waiting for).
AeronFarron
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I agree!
The GM said we're waiting on a temp from SoleAccord. I guess he/she is making a second character.
Tuujaimaa The Saint of Wings
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【Full Name】
Yodai Touho
【Alias】
Windspeaker Touho
【Sex】
Female
【Age】
37
【Sexuality】
Bisexual; Prefers Women
【Birth Country】
Shimogakure
【Current Village[】
Konohagakure
【Organization】
Leader of the Windspeakers
【Shinobi Rank】
Ex-Kage of Shimogakure
【Personality】
Yodai Touho, before her coronation as Windspeaker, was a troubled woman. Nights of dreamless sleeps and sleepless dreams wore at her confidence, at her faith in herself, until her soul was exposed to the elements that govern the realms of body and mind. For most, an exposed soul leads to trepidation, and to doubt, and eventually to the great sleep - but not for Touho. Touho persisted, despite her exposed soul, and faith brought her back from the darkest place she had ever been in. It has been said, all too often, that once you reach rock bottom there is only one way to go - up. From the depths of despair did Touho rise, opening herself fully and truly to Fuujin, and she prospered.
Windspeaker Touho was never particularly determined or passionate in her youth - days would sail by, and she would sail by with them, idly waiting for something exciting or interesting to happen to her. She had daydreams of fantastical adventures, of a higher purpose, and occasionally of what life could have been like if she had taken a different path. For one who dwells in the dark recesses of the idle mind, the light can become hard to bear, and so did Touho retreat further into the depths of imagination. For the longest time she was stuck there, waiting for something to bring her unrealistic dreams to fruition, until before she realised it she was living her life inside a dream, only waking when she retreated deep into slumber and imagination.
Truth is a light that reveals everything - for better or for worse - and for one so used to the darkness the truth can be unwelcome. The truth offers no comfort, only the harsh gaze of reality, and Touho was used to nothing but comfort for most of her younger life. When shown the path, confronted with the great light, it seems like the best thing to do is retreat, and retreat Touho did until she was back in the comfort of the dark. Change rarely comes easily, but despite her initial apprehension Touho soon begun to see sense, to see the illusions that she had wrapped herself in for what they were, and turned to the light with her exposed soul. The light changed her, not because she saw some grand truth and was stricken by epiphany, but because her very soul was exposed to the universal truth - and at that moment she truly began to believe.
After that, Touho had a life of purpose. She was a Windspeaker, one committed thoroughly to Fuujin, and she used her newfound faith to give herself purpose. She is dedicated to her path, and she knows full well that she cannot retreat into the dark like she did as a child. This inner strength has shown itself multiple times, allowing her to make decisions that weaker beings would falter at, and allowing her to live full well with the consequences of her actions. Perhaps in these times it could be said that she has little appreciation for life or anything she does not deem holy; that may well be true, but it gives her the strength to do what she feels she must, and her convictions are true enough to justify her actions - at least, they are to her and to Fuujin.
Touho is polite, well-spoken, and above all else kind. She may not have suffered the awful fates of some, but she knows that only chance spared her from such things and she shows the compassion and mercy towards the broken and less fortunate people that she feels they deserve. She looks after the lesser most people under her care, and through everything cares for them as much as she cares for herself. Certain values are expected of those who claim to be closest to any deity, and Touho delivers fully on these expectations. She is not kind for fear of damnation, or for any corrupt reason - she is kind because she sees herself and what she could have been a hundred thousand times over whenever she looks at anybody less fortunate than herself, and she would never wish the fate of the less fortunate on anybody because she knows how close she was to becoming one of those people.
There are few truly good souls in the world. Most are marred by imperfection and sin, and even those that claim to be truly pure hold impurity at their core. Perhaps Windspeaker Touho is one of these truly good souls - or perhaps she is not. She does not know, and for the most part, she does not care. Windspeaker Touho burdens herself only with her god and with her people - and for her people, there is no decision so hard that she cannot make it. Brutality and lack of emotion may enter into her heart, for a time, if a situation demands it - but above all else she cares for her people. Everything she does is for their wellbeing, and for the prosperity of her god. If this does not make her a truly good soul, then she is not a truly good soul - at the end of the day, she cares little for virtue, for virtue does not protect what she holds dear.
【History】
"Until Fuujin found me, all I knew was hunger. I hungered not only for food, but for purpose, for a reason to go on. Now I have found that reason - or, more accurately - that reason has found me." - Windspeaker Touho
The woman known as Windspeaker Touho started out life as an orphan, her father dead before her birth and her mother dead giving birth to her. In Shimogakure, this was not necessarily an uncommon fate. There were two major paths for an orphan in Shimogakure - to go to an orphanage, where you would be beated, mistreated, and probably dead within five years... Or to go to the Temple of Fuujin, to be raised as an acolyte, and to be given purpose. Few were given the luxury of the Temple's life, but Windspeaker Touho was chosen - it was said that there was a presence about her that made the priestesses think of Fuujin, and in that respect she was worthy to join the temple.
Touho's early life - or what she remembers of it - was a mixture of chores, scriptures, and more chores. Life was not easy, but every day she ate well and she was kept warm, which was not a feat that all of the inhabitants of Shimogakure could boast. She felt content with her simple life. Days rolled by and as soon as Touho reached the correct age, she was trained in the arts of the Ninja, that she might serve her new god better. At this point, Touho was an arrogant teenager, and she thought she knew everything. She began to doubt that Fuujin even existed, lost faith in the scriptures she had been taught, and rebelled against the system that had spared her from death.
One night, after a particularly intense day of training, Touho found herself at the altar to Fuujin, questioning why she had been put on this path. She must have made some noise, for the revered priestess heard her, and she came over to comfort the young Touho. She explained that Fuujin's winds crossed many paths, and that while the current state of affairs may have seemed bleak, it was just a point on the journey leading Touho to her absolute destination. All she could think was that the revered priestess was full of herself.
Over the years, Touho's training increased and she became increasingly adept at Fuujin's arts, and she began to see more and more how right the revered priestess was. She dedicated herself to Fuujin's cause entirely, opting to join the military ranks of the priesthood, and continued down the path that she was set on. It was the least she could do for the people that saved her from an otherwise horrible life. Around when Touho was nineteen, her town was attacked by forces of an unknown affiliation. The temple of Fuujin was left intact, and none inside were harmed, but Touho could not stand idly by while the rest of her townspeople suffered.
With what seemed like practiced ease, Touho repelled the invaders through the use of her increasingly powerful wind techniques and killed their leader without a second thought. She saved her townspeople and was made Kage of Shimogakure for her selfless efforts to keep her people safe. She found that, in time, the position of a Kage was one she was good at, and under her reign the village prospered the most it had ever prospered. However, evil in this world does not rest for too long, and after what seemed like mere hours oppression reigned over the Windspeaker's life, as the Empire swept across the world like a plague of locusts. Seeing no alternative, the Windspeaker peacefully surrendered in order to avoid as much death as she could, though her cooperation with the Empire was strained at best.
Seeing her lack of commitment, the Empire replaced her with a figure that would comply more readily with their requests. After being expelled, the Windspeaker took it upon herself to join with the resistance centered in Konohagakure - she could not stand idly by while her people suffered under the yoke of oppressors. She joined the fight, as she had once before, to keep her people safe.
【Chakra Nature(s)】
Fuuton; Hyouton
【Weapons/Tools】
Generic Tools in Surplus
【Other Specialties】
Windspeaker Touho is incredibly adept at both Taijutsu and Ninjutsu.
【Kekkei Genkai】
Name: Hyōton
Type: Ninjutsu
Clan (If Applicable): N/A
Description: Ice release.
【Canon Jutsu】
Basic Academy Techniques
【Custom Jutsu】
Name of Technique: Megumi no Fuujin [Grace of the Wind God]
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Range: Personal
Nature Type: Fuuton
Symbols of Fuujin: 1
Description: By channelling a constant sphere of wind chakra around herself, Windspeaker Touho is able to levitate as if held aloft by currents of wind. She gains a sphere of influence around herself with which she can manipulate wind in myriad ways. The sphere extends six feet from Windspeaker Touho in any given direction. While within the Megumi no Fuujin, Windspeaker Touho is immune to all friendly Fuuton techniques. Windspeaker Touho’s control over the wind is so proficient that she is able to essentially fly.
In addition, instead of performing handsigns, Windspeaker Touho is able to invoke symbols of Fuujin with simple movements that are not necessarily restricted to movement of the hands/arms. These movements can be changes in stance, but are often invoked with movements reminiscent of handsigns.
Weakness: Interpret it yourself.
Name of Technique: Megumi no Fuujin: Kin'yoku no Michi [Grace of the Wind God: Path of the Ascetic]
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Within the Megumi no Fuujin
Nature Type: Fuuton
Symbols of Fuujin: 2
Description: Windspeaker Touho causes the boundaries of the Megumi no Fuujin to intensify greatly, causing it to deflect all physical objects or projectiles that come near it, but doing so requires intense focus that prevents the use of other techniques and movement.
Weakness: Interpret it yourself.
Name of Technique: Megumi no Fuujin: Hyōgi-kai no Ishi [Grace of the Wind God: Will of the Council]
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: Megumi no Fuujin
Nature Type: Fuuton
Symbols of Fuujin: 2
Description: Windspeaker Touho creates innumerable blades of wind invisible to the naked eye within the confines of the Megumi no Fuujin. The blades cannot leave the sphere, but are so sharp and numerous that almost anything that comes into sustained contact with them will suffer immense damage. The blades can be condensed into single, visible blades that can be launched outwards from the Megumi no Fuujin at a significant reduction in power. The blades are shaped like crescent arcs, and despite their relatively reduced firepower they move very quickly and are difficult to avoid.
Weakness: Interpret it yourself.
Name of Technique: Megumi no Fuujin: Reitekina Yoroi [Grace of the Wind God: Spiritual Armour]
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Range: Personal
Nature Type: Fuuton
Symbols of Fuujin: 5
Description: Windspeaker Touho condenses the Megumi no Fuujin, removing all access to its abilities except its levitation and flight, and coats herself in a thick veneer of wind. All physical projectiles that would come into contact with the armour are deflected, and Windspeaker Touho’s speed is vastly increased. In addition, Windspeaker Touho’s taijutsu attacks become significantly more deadly, using the force of the wind surrounding her to lacerate the areas she hits subcutaneously. If she would hit an open wound, she is instead able to cause major damage to internal organs in the surrounding area.
Weakness: Interpret it yourself.
Name of Technique: Kaiko no Fuujin [Wind God’s Dismissal]
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Mid
Nature Type: Fuuton
Symbols of Fuujin: 1
Description: Windspeaker Touho creates an incredible gust of wind in a single direction, buffeting anything it hits and sending them flying backwards. The gust persists for ten seconds, gradually decreasing in potency as it does so. If an object moves with the gust, its speed is dramatically increased. While Windspeaker Touho is within the Megumi no Fuujin, she is unaffected by the technique unless she chooses to be.
Weakness: Interpret it yourself.
Name of Technique: Seidō no Fuujin [Wind God’s Sanctuary]
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Nature Type: Fuuton
Symbols of Fuujin: N/A
Description: Windspeaker Touho creates a ring on the ground, up to fifty feet in diameter. The ring creates a stream of wind that physical objects and chakra cannot pass through in either direction, allowing her to provide sanctuary to allies or isolate enemies. The wind only lasts for a maximum of sixty seconds. This technique can only be used once per battle.
Weakness: Interpret it yourself.
Name of Technique: An’un [Gathering Clouds]
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Personal
Nature Type: Fuuton
Symbols of Fuujin: 4
Description: Windspeaker Touho gathers Fuuton chakra, disabling the use of non-Megumi no Fuujin techniques. For every five seconds that she gathers chakra with Gathering Clouds, she is able to use any non-Megumi no Fuujin technique (with the exception of Rite of Frostfall) with no additional chakra cost and no preparation.
Weakness: Interpret it yourself.
Name of Technique: Kamikaze no Fuujin: Ran’un [Wind God’s Divine Whirlwind: Storm Clouds]
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Long
Nature Type: Fuuton
Symbols of Fuujin: 3
Description: Windspeaker Touho gathers immense amounts of Fuuton chakra and unleashes the chakra in a constantly expanding sphere. The sphere will travel for fifty feet before dissipating, carrying any physical objects with insufficient mass or not rooted to the ground with it. As soon as the sphere dissipates, strong winds begin to gather in the area that disrupt movement and leave small lacerations in exposed skin.
Weakness: Interpret it yourself.
Name of Technique: Kamikaze no Fuujin: Arashi [Wind God’s Divine Whirlwind: Tempest]
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Long
Nature Type: Fuuton
Symbols of Fuujin: 6
Description: Kamikaze no Fuujin: Arashi cannot be used until Kamikaze no Fuujin: Ran’un has been used.
Windspeaker Touho increases the intensity of the winds created by Ran’un, causing them to become strong enough to cause light cuts through leather armour and cut deeply into exposed flesh. The winds become strong enough that moving against their currents is nigh impossible without a significant amount of physical force, and the winds are so intense at the edges of the technique that physical objects and people can only breach the barrier with moderately high levels of force.
Weakness: Interpret it yourself.
Name of Technique: Kamikaze no Fuujin: Hayate [Wind God’s Divine Whirlwind: Hurricane]
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Long
Nature Type: Fuuton
Symbols of Fuujin: 12
Description: Kamikaze no Fuujin: Hayate cannot be used until Kamikaze no Fuujin: Arashi has been used.
Windspeaker Touho brings the winds to their most intense level, strong enough to uproot old trees with ease and severely damage plate armour. The area of the technique doubles, and Windspeaker Touho has complete control over the direction of the winds at all times. By focusing on specific areas, Windspeaker Touho is able to manipulate the air pressure in order to achieve various effects, and is able to sharpen the winds to create gusts with the same cutting power as the Wind Release Slash.
Weakness: Interpret it yourself.
Name of Technique: Namida no Fuujin [Tears of the Wind God]
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: Medium-Long
Nature Type: Fuuton
Symbols of Fuujin: 2
Description: Windspeaker Touho condenses Fuuton chakra into orbs, roughly a foot in diameter, and hurls them. At any point along the path, or when the orbs reach a hundred feet away, they explode in a sphere of wind identical to Fūton: Atsugai at maximum power. Windspeaker Touho can only make one orb every five minutes.
Weakness: Interpret it yourself.
Name of Technique: Keibetsu no Fuujin [Wind God’s Contempt]
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Nature Type: Fuuton/Hyouton
Symbols of Fuujin: 3
Description: Windspeaker Touho creates a gust of wind imbued with Hyouton chakra, resulting in a freezing cold gale that can freeze any water it comes into contact with within a few seconds. The gale is persistent and extremely easy to control, but it cannot leave a fifty foot radius of Windspeaker Touho. The wind is strong enough to knock projectiles off course. For the duration of the period Windspeaker Touho chooses to control the wind she is unable to use other non-passive techniques, but she is able to move.
Weakness: Interpret it yourself.
Name of Technique: Shidō tame Tangan [Plea for Guidance]
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Nature Type: Fuuton/Hyouton
Symbols of Fuujin: 3
Description: Windspeaker Touho sends a freezing blast of extremely harsh wind in a direction and maintains her pose as she does so, prolonging the freezing wind for as long as she maintains the pose. The wind is so cold that ice begins to crystallise on all physical objects caught within it for more than a few seconds, and after four seconds caught in the wind the target is encased in a block of solid ice.
Weakness: Interpret it yourself.
Name of Technique: Tenno Shimo no Hairetsu [Heavenly Array of Frost]
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Nature Type: Fuuton/Hyouton
Symbols of Fuujin: 1
Description: Windspeaker Touho unleashes a fast, expanding sphere of wind from herself, knocking back all enemies without sufficient mass. Additionally, the sphere leaves behind a thin veneer of frost chakra, causing any physical objects (but not people) that pass through it to be coated in the chakra and frozen solid. Katon techniques that would pass through the chakra are immediately snuffed out if they are B-Ranked or lower.
Weakness: Interpret it yourself.
Name of Technique: Akishimo no Gishiki [Rite of Frostfall]
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Range: Mid - Long
Nature Type: Fuuton/Hyouton
Symbols of Fuujin: 10
Description: Windspeaker Touho prepares a vast amount of Hyouton and Fuuton chakra, and unleashes an immense hailstorm in a three hundred foot radius around herself. The storm is so vicious and so cold that enemies with insufficient insulation will succumb to frostbite and hypothermia rapidly. The winds are not particularly strong, but if this technique and Kamikaze no Fuujin: Hayate are active in the same location, the result is a storm so powerful that it threatens destruction on the scale of the Bijuu.
Weakness: Interpret it yourself.
Name of Technique: Totsuzen no Akishimo [Sudden Frostfall]
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Range: Personal - Short
Nature Type: Hyouton
Symbols of Fuujin: 6
Description: Windspeaker Touho emits a two dimensional ring of freezing chakra from her body, extending up to thirty feet away from her. Two seconds after the ring has passed through a physical object, it is completely coated in ice and begins to sink into a deep freeze. Fuuton techniques that pass through the ring become extremely frigid, gaining the freezing quality that the ring has.
Weakness: Interpret it yourself.
Name: Akira Gengai
Title: Akira of The Red Mist
Age: 17
Gender:
Male
Appearance:
Skills:
Akira possesses the ability to communicate with insects of all kinds but can directly influence the actions of the Red Chimeran Hornets directly due to his connection to the queen red chimeran hornet. Exceptional strategist. Impressive pain tolerance. Adaptability. Photographic memory and vivid recollection. Espionage & Tracking. Recognizing and dispelling Genjutsu. He is more physically powerful than he looks. Excellent hunter and stealth expert.
Tools:
Not sure if I would list the Red Chimeran Hornets here or not, so I am. Red Chimeran Hornets, poison bombs, explosive tags, tripwire, kunai and shuriken
Title: Akira of The Red Mist
Age: 17
Gender:
Male
Appearance:
Akira
Personality:
Like any other child, Akira was born nice, sweet and lazy, but that has been beat out of him at a young age. He was taught the harshness of the world firsthand through various forms of mental conditioning. He has been conditioned by his clansmen to be intelligent, powerful and trustworthy. Taught to think of the well-being of others as having equivalent value to his own. Taught that in order to succeed he would require the full cooperation from others and give his own. Akira however is a rebel at heart and doesn't give two shits about what traits his clansmen think best he had. He chooses to believe what he wants to believe and thus second guesses himself much more often than anyone else does. He finds comfort in those that look down on him, believing that one day they'll realize how awfully wrong they were and wish to apologize.
Those who have high standards of Akira make him sick to his stomach as he thinks that they are attempting to pressure him into something they think he normally wouldn't do. He hates to think that he is being manipulated or used only as a tool. It is for this reason that he takes enjoyment in saying as few words as possible, believing that the less information a person has, the less likely he can be manipulated. Akira however is not your average Joe, he has been hardened for war. He is cold, relentless and unmerciful to all who dare bare their fangs at him. As a child introduced to violence, Akira doesn't mind killing someone who has done him or another wrong. While he might publicly deny it, it is the first thing that comes to his mind when he feels one should be punished.
Akira typically hides how he truly feels about something or someone and only speaks up when he foresees a problem in the near future. He has more of a black & white attitude towards people and only few things fall into the area described only as being 'gray'. He prefers to battle quickly and make moves in constant succession in order to force opponents to move faster. This high speed game of chess forces opponents to move or wait as he makes his own. He believes that by moving faster it increases he chance of error. He also enjoys taunting and talking down to his enemies in order to get them to make their 'move' faster.
Recent History:
Akira is a member of the Gengai, a side branch of the Kagewari clan which is a sister clan to the once famed Kamizuru clan. The Gengai have been long since been outlawed by the Kagewari after a failed attempt to forcefully reunite the Kagewari and Kamizuru despite clan differences and public opinion. Every member who participated or voiced an opinion with this motion in favor were called Uragirimono and were exiled from the village. This is known as the First Swarm to both Iwagakure and the Kamizuru clan.
The uragirimono later calling themselves the Gengai still had powerful ties to the village, and used these ties to bring about peace through destruction. Fearing that an attack on the village would jeapordize the lives of all the clans, rogue members of the Gengai surrendered to the village using information as leverage to secure their safety. The Gengai easily crippled the opposition using its resources and led an unsuccessful siege on the village. The village's opposition was utterly obliterated and the only remaining Gengai were those that had back-stabbed their brethren.
While the Tsuchikage agreed to pardon their crimes the Gengai were still looked at as the black sheep of the village, especially by the Kamizuru and Kagewari who disowned them. This however was until the Kamizuru's defeat by the Aburame after attempting to claim Konoha and most of its members were lost. The Gengai acted as a means to replenish the village's lost military force and later established itself as a re-owned clan of its own.
Specializing in militarizing insects(particularly hornets and bees) similar to the Aburame, the Gengai made a name for itself when Akira was born. While his skills as a ninja weren't the most impressive among his peers, Akira takes the spot light from his kin due to his ability to host the red chimeran hornets. A dangerous parasitic insect by nature that ravages the body of most organisms it is allowed to infest. Known as the red mist to many other countries, the red chimeran hornets are native to Iwagakure as dangerous pests that devour all who cross them.
The only other ninja said to have successfully hosted the cruel insects was the First Tsuchikage. Akira however is in no way regarded by the clan as a curse as a jinchuuriki is regarded by their village. Instead the clan looks at him as a Messiah, as does the Kagewari and Kamizuru clans. Someone who will save them from their past failures and bring the clans out of obscurity. In order to ensure his success as a ninja all the clan members came together in order to vote upon how Akira's future would unfold.
Allegiance: Rebels
Chakra Nature: Earth
Rank: Chuunin
Jutsu:
Crimson Chimera Swarm: Honeysuckle
Akira directs the Red Chimeran Hornets to spit at the target, Their extra thick saliva is highly toxic due to its high pH balance but is particulaly useful in quelling insect outbreaks, and fires. Their highly acidic saliva quickly breaks down organic and non organic material and thus prolonged contact with the saliva can lead to acid burns and eventual death if one remains covered in the acidic saliva for too long.
Crimson Chimera Swarm: Underground Land Trap
Akira directs the Red Chimeran Hornets to dig tunnels under the earth for approaching victims to fall within once the loose ground is stepped on. These particular tunnels can be quite fragile and collapse upon the hornets if even so much as even a small animal walks upon them.
Earth Release: Antlion Technique
Earth Release - Earth Spear
Earth Release - Rock Pillar Spears
Earth Release - Earth and Stone Bamboo Shoot
Crimson Chimera Swarm: Heat Seeker - Red chimeran hornets gather upon the foe and while stinging, the hornets vibrate their bodies to create large amounts of friction. This friction produces a ton of heat in order to kill the target by cooking them from inside their own skin. Occasionally some red chimeran hornets may explode due to their vulnerability to intense heat.
Earth Release: Termite Mound
After performing several hand-seals, by placing both hands on the ground Akira summons several mounds of earth surrounding the opponent(s). These mounds are entirely hollow but act as a means of safely transporting small lifeforms from one area to another easily. Large mounds can be created as well in order to camouflage the user during espionage missions.
Crimson Chimera Swarm: Mass Production Technique
By compensating the queen chimeran hornet with chakra, she mass produces eggs that skip the larvae stage and hatch directly into nymph chimera, ready for battle. The queen chimera can produce about sixty eggs per minute and the eggs take less than five minutes to hatch. These nymph hornets are underdeveloped and were not made to last and eventually drop dead in approximately 10 minutes after hatching.
Unlike their adult brethren, their bodies are soft and extremely flammable due to containing a protein mix similar to that of gun powder. The small nymphs possess six hairy legs and an abdomen that can spew water resistant webs of fine silk to ensnare prey. They possess mandibles that inject a powerful neurotoxin into their victims, and are considered great swimmers capable of swimming easily through powerful currents of water due to their relatively thin bodies.
Nymph hornets exit the body through Akira's pores and fully mature into adult hornets upon contact with the nitrogen and oxygen in the atmosphere. While they lose the neurotoxin contained in their mandibles, they trade it off for three pairs of strong wings and a dangerous stinger capable of inducing drowsiness and intense slumber. Their mandibles while no longer toxic are extremely powerful enough to tear and consume the flesh of an adult human as well as crush rock betwen them.
Adult chimeran hornets gain an additional four legs for a grand total of ten hairy legs which give them the flexibility, speed and appearance of being spiders when they land or are viewed properly scurrying across the ground or skin. Adult chimeran hornets possess extremely durable exoskeletons making them extremely resistant to physical injury enough that senbon won't harm them by shuriken and kunai will due to their weight. They are very capable diggers capable of unearthing hidden prey or digging making tunnel traps for larger would be predators to fall in.
Red chimeran hornets are particularly effective at dismembering other insects with their scythe like legs but usually do not in favor of implanting their parasitic offspring inside the prey. Chimeran larvae feast upon their host's blood, chakra and flesh in an attempt to quickly obtain the mass of their parents which makes them pretty voracious. Worm like in appearance, larvae can quickly quickly evolve into the nymph stage within just two days, and nymph who have successfully completed the larvae stage can produce up to ten eggs inside its victim before its imminent departure.
Personality:
Like any other child, Akira was born nice, sweet and lazy, but that has been beat out of him at a young age. He was taught the harshness of the world firsthand through various forms of mental conditioning. He has been conditioned by his clansmen to be intelligent, powerful and trustworthy. Taught to think of the well-being of others as having equivalent value to his own. Taught that in order to succeed he would require the full cooperation from others and give his own. Akira however is a rebel at heart and doesn't give two shits about what traits his clansmen think best he had. He chooses to believe what he wants to believe and thus second guesses himself much more often than anyone else does. He finds comfort in those that look down on him, believing that one day they'll realize how awfully wrong they were and wish to apologize.
Those who have high standards of Akira make him sick to his stomach as he thinks that they are attempting to pressure him into something they think he normally wouldn't do. He hates to think that he is being manipulated or used only as a tool. It is for this reason that he takes enjoyment in saying as few words as possible, believing that the less information a person has, the less likely he can be manipulated. Akira however is not your average Joe, he has been hardened for war. He is cold, relentless and unmerciful to all who dare bare their fangs at him. As a child introduced to violence, Akira doesn't mind killing someone who has done him or another wrong. While he might publicly deny it, it is the first thing that comes to his mind when he feels one should be punished.
Akira typically hides how he truly feels about something or someone and only speaks up when he foresees a problem in the near future. He has more of a black & white attitude towards people and only few things fall into the area described only as being 'gray'. He prefers to battle quickly and make moves in constant succession in order to force opponents to move faster. This high speed game of chess forces opponents to move or wait as he makes his own. He believes that by moving faster it increases he chance of error. He also enjoys taunting and talking down to his enemies in order to get them to make their 'move' faster.
Recent History:
Akira is a member of the Gengai, a side branch of the Kagewari clan which is a sister clan to the once famed Kamizuru clan. The Gengai have been long since been outlawed by the Kagewari after a failed attempt to forcefully reunite the Kagewari and Kamizuru despite clan differences and public opinion. Every member who participated or voiced an opinion with this motion in favor were called Uragirimono and were exiled from the village. This is known as the First Swarm to both Iwagakure and the Kamizuru clan.
The uragirimono later calling themselves the Gengai still had powerful ties to the village, and used these ties to bring about peace through destruction. Fearing that an attack on the village would jeapordize the lives of all the clans, rogue members of the Gengai surrendered to the village using information as leverage to secure their safety. The Gengai easily crippled the opposition using its resources and led an unsuccessful siege on the village. The village's opposition was utterly obliterated and the only remaining Gengai were those that had back-stabbed their brethren.
While the Tsuchikage agreed to pardon their crimes the Gengai were still looked at as the black sheep of the village, especially by the Kamizuru and Kagewari who disowned them. This however was until the Kamizuru's defeat by the Aburame after attempting to claim Konoha and most of its members were lost. The Gengai acted as a means to replenish the village's lost military force and later established itself as a re-owned clan of its own.
Specializing in militarizing insects(particularly hornets and bees) similar to the Aburame, the Gengai made a name for itself when Akira was born. While his skills as a ninja weren't the most impressive among his peers, Akira takes the spot light from his kin due to his ability to host the red chimeran hornets. A dangerous parasitic insect by nature that ravages the body of most organisms it is allowed to infest. Known as the red mist to many other countries, the red chimeran hornets are native to Iwagakure as dangerous pests that devour all who cross them.
The only other ninja said to have successfully hosted the cruel insects was the First Tsuchikage. Akira however is in no way regarded by the clan as a curse as a jinchuuriki is regarded by their village. Instead the clan looks at him as a Messiah, as does the Kagewari and Kamizuru clans. Someone who will save them from their past failures and bring the clans out of obscurity. In order to ensure his success as a ninja all the clan members came together in order to vote upon how Akira's future would unfold.
Allegiance: Rebels
Chakra Nature: Earth
Rank: Chuunin
Jutsu:
Crimson Chimera Swarm: Honeysuckle
Akira directs the Red Chimeran Hornets to spit at the target, Their extra thick saliva is highly toxic due to its high pH balance but is particulaly useful in quelling insect outbreaks, and fires. Their highly acidic saliva quickly breaks down organic and non organic material and thus prolonged contact with the saliva can lead to acid burns and eventual death if one remains covered in the acidic saliva for too long.
Crimson Chimera Swarm: Underground Land Trap
Akira directs the Red Chimeran Hornets to dig tunnels under the earth for approaching victims to fall within once the loose ground is stepped on. These particular tunnels can be quite fragile and collapse upon the hornets if even so much as even a small animal walks upon them.
Earth Release: Antlion Technique
Earth Release - Earth Spear
Earth Release - Rock Pillar Spears
Earth Release - Earth and Stone Bamboo Shoot
Crimson Chimera Swarm: Heat Seeker - Red chimeran hornets gather upon the foe and while stinging, the hornets vibrate their bodies to create large amounts of friction. This friction produces a ton of heat in order to kill the target by cooking them from inside their own skin. Occasionally some red chimeran hornets may explode due to their vulnerability to intense heat.
Earth Release: Termite Mound
After performing several hand-seals, by placing both hands on the ground Akira summons several mounds of earth surrounding the opponent(s). These mounds are entirely hollow but act as a means of safely transporting small lifeforms from one area to another easily. Large mounds can be created as well in order to camouflage the user during espionage missions.
Crimson Chimera Swarm: Mass Production Technique
By compensating the queen chimeran hornet with chakra, she mass produces eggs that skip the larvae stage and hatch directly into nymph chimera, ready for battle. The queen chimera can produce about sixty eggs per minute and the eggs take less than five minutes to hatch. These nymph hornets are underdeveloped and were not made to last and eventually drop dead in approximately 10 minutes after hatching.
Unlike their adult brethren, their bodies are soft and extremely flammable due to containing a protein mix similar to that of gun powder. The small nymphs possess six hairy legs and an abdomen that can spew water resistant webs of fine silk to ensnare prey. They possess mandibles that inject a powerful neurotoxin into their victims, and are considered great swimmers capable of swimming easily through powerful currents of water due to their relatively thin bodies.
Nymph hornets exit the body through Akira's pores and fully mature into adult hornets upon contact with the nitrogen and oxygen in the atmosphere. While they lose the neurotoxin contained in their mandibles, they trade it off for three pairs of strong wings and a dangerous stinger capable of inducing drowsiness and intense slumber. Their mandibles while no longer toxic are extremely powerful enough to tear and consume the flesh of an adult human as well as crush rock betwen them.
Adult chimeran hornets gain an additional four legs for a grand total of ten hairy legs which give them the flexibility, speed and appearance of being spiders when they land or are viewed properly scurrying across the ground or skin. Adult chimeran hornets possess extremely durable exoskeletons making them extremely resistant to physical injury enough that senbon won't harm them by shuriken and kunai will due to their weight. They are very capable diggers capable of unearthing hidden prey or digging making tunnel traps for larger would be predators to fall in.
Red chimeran hornets are particularly effective at dismembering other insects with their scythe like legs but usually do not in favor of implanting their parasitic offspring inside the prey. Chimeran larvae feast upon their host's blood, chakra and flesh in an attempt to quickly obtain the mass of their parents which makes them pretty voracious. Worm like in appearance, larvae can quickly quickly evolve into the nymph stage within just two days, and nymph who have successfully completed the larvae stage can produce up to ten eggs inside its victim before its imminent departure.
Skills:
Akira possesses the ability to communicate with insects of all kinds but can directly influence the actions of the Red Chimeran Hornets directly due to his connection to the queen red chimeran hornet. Exceptional strategist. Impressive pain tolerance. Adaptability. Photographic memory and vivid recollection. Espionage & Tracking. Recognizing and dispelling Genjutsu. He is more physically powerful than he looks. Excellent hunter and stealth expert.
Tools:
Not sure if I would list the Red Chimeran Hornets here or not, so I am. Red Chimeran Hornets, poison bombs, explosive tags, tripwire, kunai and shuriken
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Name: Akira GengaiTitle: Age: 17Gender:MaleAppearance:Skills: Akira possesses the ability to communicate with insects of all kinds but can directly influence the actions of the Red Chimeran Hornets directly due to his connection to the queen red chimeran hornet. Master strategist. Impressive pain tolerance. Large chakra reserve. Adaptability. Photographic memory and vivid recollection. Swordsmanship. Espionage & Tracking. Recognizing and dispelling Genjutsu. He is more physically powerful than he looks. Excellent hunter and stealth expert. Tools: Not sure if I would list the Red Chimeran Hornets here or not, so I am. Red Chimeran Hornets, poison bombs, katana, explosive tags, tripwire, kunai and shuriken
Not wanting to step on your toes, but just giving you a heads up: My character can understand hornets and has a summon contract with hornets.
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She can also understand and simulate their pheromones, thus having a measure of control over them.
She can also understand and simulate their pheromones, thus having a measure of control over them.
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Name: Uchiha Katsu
Title: Blue Sabre
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Personality: Katsu is a strange young boy. Of course, that sounds vague, but you’ll understand what I mean. He’s a highly intelligent and calculating child. He’s mostly shy when he’s being sincere to someone he isn’t close to, however he can act as if he knew the person for years, speaking comfortably when he’s lying or trying to impress someone.
He's very compassionate and kind but can kill people he doesn't know without having any moral contradictions. This tends to give people around him an uneasy feeling when they're with him, as there have been rumours about him having killed his own mentor but people who truly know him know this to be untrue, knowing his kind nature.
He's uncannily intelligent and seen as one of the brightest youths of the Uchiha clan.
Recent History: Ever since he was a child, Katsu always spent time with his master Uchiha Konoe, the oldest Uchiha alive. He was one of the greatest swordsmen alive, including the younger shinobi. Katsu would train with Konoe day and night. He would neglect spending time with his family to train, trying to master his ninjutsu and kenjutsu. When he first got his sharingan, Konoe agreed to bring him to a mission. On this mission, Katsu showed merciless actions, killing the contracted man with no hesitation. The innocent expression on his face never faded away as he pierced the chest of the unarmed target. After that day, Konoe started bringing Katsu along as his apprentice. One day, they were sent on another mission. When only Katsu returned, the jolly smile on his face had disappeared. The look in his eyes had changed, even his sharingan. He was shunned by most of the Uchiha community, thought of as a kin-slayer. When he had come back, the third comma in his sharingan was complete.
Allegiance: Rebels/Konoha
Chakra Nature: Lightning, Wind, Fire
Rank: Chu-nin
Jutsu:
All E-Rank Academy Jutsu
Sharingan
Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Cloud Style Flame Beheading
Wind Release: Wind Cutter
Wind Release: Dust Cloud Technique
Wind Release: Vacuum Wave
Wind Release: Vacuum Blade
Wind Release Slash
Wind Release: Vacuum Serial Waves
Raikiri
Custom Jutsu
Name: Lightning Release: Thunder Charge
Rank: B
Range: Self
Nature: Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: Charges power to surround the user with weak electricity, shocking upon contact, increasing his speed drastically and making Lightning Releases stronger. When there are rain clouds, the user can call down lightning from the skies to themselves to make the effect far stronger.
Weakness: It wind releases weaker and makes the user very vulnerable to wind attacks.
Custom Jutsu
Name: Lightning Release: Thunderbolt
Rank: C
Range: Middle-Far
Nature: Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: Shoots a weak bolt of lightning from the user's body. Becomes stronger if Thunder Charge was used.
Weakness: Is weak against wind attacks.
Custom Jutsu
Name: Fire Release: Hellfire
Rank: A
Range: Short
Nature: Fire, Wind
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: This jutsu shoots up dark flames around the user in the form of pillars. The user can manipulate from where it's going to come.
Weakness: Is weak against Water attacks.
Custom Jutsu
Name: Lightning Release: Divine Blade
Rank: A
Range: Middle
Nature: Lightning
Type: Kenjutsu
Effect: Created by Katsu himself, this move creates a shaped object made out of lightning. The more capable of shaping jutsus the user is, the better it can be shaped and grown. If used with a weapon, it can take the object's shape and grow in the same proportions.
Weakness: Is weak against wind attacks.
Custom Jutsu
Name: Wind Dance
Rank: S*
Range: Short
Nature: N/A
Type: Kenjutsu
Effect: This is a technique Katsu learned using his sharingan. He followed the movements of his sword-master Konoe, copying them. After several years, he was able to master it. It's a sword technique used with wind techniques.
Weakness: The technique's very smooth but is useless against numerous opponents.
Skills: Katsu can use his sharingan's genjutsu and copying ability quite well. He has an exceptional talent in Ninjutsu and Kenjutsu. The other attribute that separates him from most shinobi is his amazing speed.
Tools: Long Katana
Fuma Shuriken, Shuriken and Kunai
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Title: Blue Sabre
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Personality: Katsu is a strange young boy. Of course, that sounds vague, but you’ll understand what I mean. He’s a highly intelligent and calculating child. He’s mostly shy when he’s being sincere to someone he isn’t close to, however he can act as if he knew the person for years, speaking comfortably when he’s lying or trying to impress someone.
He's very compassionate and kind but can kill people he doesn't know without having any moral contradictions. This tends to give people around him an uneasy feeling when they're with him, as there have been rumours about him having killed his own mentor but people who truly know him know this to be untrue, knowing his kind nature.
He's uncannily intelligent and seen as one of the brightest youths of the Uchiha clan.
Recent History: Ever since he was a child, Katsu always spent time with his master Uchiha Konoe, the oldest Uchiha alive. He was one of the greatest swordsmen alive, including the younger shinobi. Katsu would train with Konoe day and night. He would neglect spending time with his family to train, trying to master his ninjutsu and kenjutsu. When he first got his sharingan, Konoe agreed to bring him to a mission. On this mission, Katsu showed merciless actions, killing the contracted man with no hesitation. The innocent expression on his face never faded away as he pierced the chest of the unarmed target. After that day, Konoe started bringing Katsu along as his apprentice. One day, they were sent on another mission. When only Katsu returned, the jolly smile on his face had disappeared. The look in his eyes had changed, even his sharingan. He was shunned by most of the Uchiha community, thought of as a kin-slayer. When he had come back, the third comma in his sharingan was complete.
It started off as any other mission. Katsu and Konoe were accompanied by 2 other chunins, leaping from tree to tree in the forest, looking for their targets. Though this time, things wouldn’t go as smoothly as they had previously hoped.
When they spotted their prey, Katsu’s scanned it with the Crimson Eyes. He quickly drew his sword and leapt down when he had confirmed the chakra flowing inside the target. With his eyes not as well adjusted as Konoe’s, he wasn’t able to realize that the amount of chakra in that body couldn’t have belonged to their target, who was an A-Class criminal. Konoe shouted after him after he understood that it was just a clone. When Katsu’s sword stuck into it, the body evaporated as Konoe had expected. Before Katsu realized what was going on, he noticed a sizzling noise from behind. There was a dark colored explosive-tag attached to the tree. When it suddenly exploded, he flew over to another tree, hitting his back. Summoning tags and more explosive tags started being revealed, the summoning tags shooting projectiles and the explosive tags igniting. Suddenly Konoe’s two chunin subordinates were riddled with shuriken and kunai, dying before being able to understand what had happened. The explosives around Konoe blew up but Konoe appeared from the smoke of the explosion.
The criminal they were looking for appeared in front of the old man, and blasted him away with a fireball. Konoe fell next to Katsu, rolling and leaping to his feet. Katsu got up the moment he saw Konoe. He wiped the blood from his mouth, readying himself for a fight. The man appeared behind the two, swinging his exceptionally long katana towards the two. They both blocked it but Konoe’s arm strength was weaker, making him fall back. Seeing this the man made four hand signs and shot a wave of slimy water at Katsu, pushing him back. Katsu was unable to see what the criminal was doing at the time but after a few seconds, he shocked the water and jumped out. He saw that the man still hadn’t killed Konoe, who was almost completely immobile with a strange new scar across his chest. The boy rapidly shifted his hands and breathed in. When he released his breath, large amounts of wind started flowing towards the man but he responded with a fire blast. Katsu’s eyes widened when he saw the counter-attack. He quickly jumped out of its way, leaping up to a tree. He bounced off from branch to branch and came down behind the man. With a grin on his face, he stuck the blade into the man’s spine but something he hadn’t expected happened. The man disappeared in smoke and in his place was the old man. Katsu almost dropped his sword when he saw this but he didn’t get the chance. He could hear the man’s steel swinging through the air behind him. He quickly pushed the old man off with his sword with his foot and turned around, clashing swords. There were tears rolling down his cheeks, slightly disrupting his sight. The third comma on his sharingan slowly appeared. He let out a cry of anguish and rushed at the man, the sword surrounded by an electric field. He swung it before he reached the criminal, the electric field growing enough to reach him. He quickly ducked and shot five fireballs at once, knocking the boy back, rendering him unable to battle. His sword was out of reach and the man’s skill was far above his own. He forced himself to his feet as the man slowly walked towards him. Horse Snake Ram Monkey Boar Horse Tiger. He shot the fireball to the ground between them, making smoke rise. Through the it, he caught a glimpse of the man’s face, locking eyes. When the smoke cleared, the man saw that the boy was nowhere to be found. The boy watched him in fear, sitting right in front of him. The man left after looking around for a while, leaving the boy alone. He rushed over to his old master and called out his name, hoping that he would respond but the old man was already dead. Katsu quickly picked Konoe’s body up, forgetting about his fellow Chu-nin. He quickly carried him back to the village, leaving a trail of blood behind.
When they spotted their prey, Katsu’s scanned it with the Crimson Eyes. He quickly drew his sword and leapt down when he had confirmed the chakra flowing inside the target. With his eyes not as well adjusted as Konoe’s, he wasn’t able to realize that the amount of chakra in that body couldn’t have belonged to their target, who was an A-Class criminal. Konoe shouted after him after he understood that it was just a clone. When Katsu’s sword stuck into it, the body evaporated as Konoe had expected. Before Katsu realized what was going on, he noticed a sizzling noise from behind. There was a dark colored explosive-tag attached to the tree. When it suddenly exploded, he flew over to another tree, hitting his back. Summoning tags and more explosive tags started being revealed, the summoning tags shooting projectiles and the explosive tags igniting. Suddenly Konoe’s two chunin subordinates were riddled with shuriken and kunai, dying before being able to understand what had happened. The explosives around Konoe blew up but Konoe appeared from the smoke of the explosion.
The criminal they were looking for appeared in front of the old man, and blasted him away with a fireball. Konoe fell next to Katsu, rolling and leaping to his feet. Katsu got up the moment he saw Konoe. He wiped the blood from his mouth, readying himself for a fight. The man appeared behind the two, swinging his exceptionally long katana towards the two. They both blocked it but Konoe’s arm strength was weaker, making him fall back. Seeing this the man made four hand signs and shot a wave of slimy water at Katsu, pushing him back. Katsu was unable to see what the criminal was doing at the time but after a few seconds, he shocked the water and jumped out. He saw that the man still hadn’t killed Konoe, who was almost completely immobile with a strange new scar across his chest. The boy rapidly shifted his hands and breathed in. When he released his breath, large amounts of wind started flowing towards the man but he responded with a fire blast. Katsu’s eyes widened when he saw the counter-attack. He quickly jumped out of its way, leaping up to a tree. He bounced off from branch to branch and came down behind the man. With a grin on his face, he stuck the blade into the man’s spine but something he hadn’t expected happened. The man disappeared in smoke and in his place was the old man. Katsu almost dropped his sword when he saw this but he didn’t get the chance. He could hear the man’s steel swinging through the air behind him. He quickly pushed the old man off with his sword with his foot and turned around, clashing swords. There were tears rolling down his cheeks, slightly disrupting his sight. The third comma on his sharingan slowly appeared. He let out a cry of anguish and rushed at the man, the sword surrounded by an electric field. He swung it before he reached the criminal, the electric field growing enough to reach him. He quickly ducked and shot five fireballs at once, knocking the boy back, rendering him unable to battle. His sword was out of reach and the man’s skill was far above his own. He forced himself to his feet as the man slowly walked towards him. Horse Snake Ram Monkey Boar Horse Tiger. He shot the fireball to the ground between them, making smoke rise. Through the it, he caught a glimpse of the man’s face, locking eyes. When the smoke cleared, the man saw that the boy was nowhere to be found. The boy watched him in fear, sitting right in front of him. The man left after looking around for a while, leaving the boy alone. He rushed over to his old master and called out his name, hoping that he would respond but the old man was already dead. Katsu quickly picked Konoe’s body up, forgetting about his fellow Chu-nin. He quickly carried him back to the village, leaving a trail of blood behind.
Allegiance: Rebels/Konoha
Chakra Nature: Lightning, Wind, Fire
Rank: Chu-nin
Jutsu:
All E-Rank Academy Jutsu
Sharingan
Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Cloud Style Flame Beheading
Wind Release: Wind Cutter
Wind Release: Dust Cloud Technique
Wind Release: Vacuum Wave
Wind Release: Vacuum Blade
Wind Release Slash
Wind Release: Vacuum Serial Waves
Raikiri
Custom Jutsu
Name: Lightning Release: Thunder Charge
Rank: B
Range: Self
Nature: Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: Charges power to surround the user with weak electricity, shocking upon contact, increasing his speed drastically and making Lightning Releases stronger. When there are rain clouds, the user can call down lightning from the skies to themselves to make the effect far stronger.
Weakness: It wind releases weaker and makes the user very vulnerable to wind attacks.
Custom Jutsu
Name: Lightning Release: Thunderbolt
Rank: C
Range: Middle-Far
Nature: Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: Shoots a weak bolt of lightning from the user's body. Becomes stronger if Thunder Charge was used.
Weakness: Is weak against wind attacks.
Custom Jutsu
Name: Fire Release: Hellfire
Rank: A
Range: Short
Nature: Fire, Wind
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: This jutsu shoots up dark flames around the user in the form of pillars. The user can manipulate from where it's going to come.
Weakness: Is weak against Water attacks.
Custom Jutsu
Name: Lightning Release: Divine Blade
Rank: A
Range: Middle
Nature: Lightning
Type: Kenjutsu
Effect: Created by Katsu himself, this move creates a shaped object made out of lightning. The more capable of shaping jutsus the user is, the better it can be shaped and grown. If used with a weapon, it can take the object's shape and grow in the same proportions.
Weakness: Is weak against wind attacks.
Custom Jutsu
Name: Wind Dance
Rank: S*
Range: Short
Nature: N/A
Type: Kenjutsu
Effect: This is a technique Katsu learned using his sharingan. He followed the movements of his sword-master Konoe, copying them. After several years, he was able to master it. It's a sword technique used with wind techniques.
Weakness: The technique's very smooth but is useless against numerous opponents.
Skills: Katsu can use his sharingan's genjutsu and copying ability quite well. He has an exceptional talent in Ninjutsu and Kenjutsu. The other attribute that separates him from most shinobi is his amazing speed.
Tools: Long Katana
Fuma Shuriken, Shuriken and Kunai
Theme
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come on GMs let's get this rp started
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haha!!!
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I know I'm being a little impatient by asking this but... Could I get some feedback on my app?
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You're a 16 year old Jonin with one of the most powerful versions of the Uchiha bloodline, and I don't even really get what happened for him to get it because you just glanced over that part as if it didn't matter. Those are my only suggestions to work on but my opinion doesn't really count here, so go ahead and ignore me. I do want to know what happened there though, he just kinda left on a mission and came back sad from where I'm sitting.
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I know I'm being a little impatient by asking this but... Could I get some feedback on my app?
Yeah just a little bit ...
Anyway limited detail on this mission that apparently went so wrong that only your character returned. You didn't describe the time between meeting your master to losing him, so awakening Mangekyou makes little sense to me. You could've only known him for a month or a week as far as any of us would know. Age doesn't really MATTER per se, I mean Sasuke got his at 16 under stressful conditions: Killing a brother he looked up to, and discovering that Itachi was just doing what the Leaf needed him to do. Your origin doesn't exactly cover that very well, so here's what we'll do: You can use this incident to unlock Stage 3 of the Sharingan, but there's too little information on his growth with his Kekkei Genkai to warrant you having the most powerful form that doesn't involve an eye transplant. Sorry, it makes us uneasy, and the Mangekyou is a lot of power. Doesn't help that if you're suspected of killing a fellow Uchiha to awaken it, the Hokage, who is an Uchiha himself, would likely hesitate on seeing you progress unless you could explain what had happened in detail with a good team nearby knowing that what you say is truth and not fabrication.
Jounin isn't given based on power alone. You need to show excellent qualities in leadership and have a level-head, as well as the skills to get the job done. To that end, I don't think your reasoning for reaching Jounin is acceptable and I'll need to ask you to find another way to make it work or settle with Chuunin. Jounin aren't typically 'loners', not saying they can't be, but they at least need to know what it means to lead people and you didn't mention much experience in that field.
So fix these bits and we'll see where we're at. Other templates are currently under heavy review, we'll let you know ASAP folks.
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chukklehed said
You're a 16 year old Jonin with one of the most powerful versions of the Uchiha bloodline, and I don't even really get what happened for him to get it because you just glanced over that part as if it didn't matter. Those are my only suggestions to work on but my opinion doesn't really count here, so go ahead and ignore me. I do want to know what happened there though, he just kinda left on a mission and came back sad from where I'm sitting.
SoleAccord said
Yeah just a little bit ...Anyway limited detail on this mission that apparently went so wrong that only your character returned. You didn't describe the time between meeting your master to losing him, so awakening Mangekyou makes little sense to me. You could've only known him for a month or a week as far as any of us would know. Age doesn't really MATTER per se, I mean Sasuke got his at 16 under stressful conditions: Killing a brother he looked up to, and discovering that Itachi was just doing what the Leaf needed him to do. Your origin doesn't exactly cover that very well, so here's what we'll do: You can use this incident to unlock Stage 3 of the Sharingan, but there's too little information on his growth with his Kekkei Genkai to warrant you having the most powerful form that doesn't involve an eye transplant. Sorry, it makes us uneasy, and the Mangekyou is a lot of power. Doesn't help that if you're suspected of killing a fellow Uchiha to awaken it, the Hokage, who is an Uchiha himself, would likely hesitate on seeing you progress unless you could explain what had happened in detail with a good team nearby knowing that what you say is truth and not fabrication.Jounin isn't given based on power alone. You need to show excellent qualities in leadership and have a level-head, as well as the skills to get the job done. To that end, I don't think your reasoning for reaching Jounin is acceptable and I'll need to ask you to find another way to make it work or settle with Chuunin. Jounin aren't typically 'loners', not saying they can't be, but they at least need to know what it means to lead people and you didn't mention much experience in that field.So fix these bits and we'll see where we're at. Other templates are currently under heavy review, we'll let you know ASAP folks.
Thank you both for the feedback. I usually tend to get carried away at first and sometimes need an outside look to fix the things I wrote. I'm really sorry for being a bother and I'll start fixing it right away :D
EDITED - (I'll keep looking into what you said, trying to perfect the app)
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Name: Akira Master strategist. Impressive pain tolerance. Large chakra reserve. Adaptability. Photographic memory and vivid recollection. Swordsmanship. Espionage & Tracking. Recognizing and dispelling Genjutsu. He is more physically powerful than he looks. Excellent hunter and stealth expert.
Please tell us how much chakra the queen demands to mass produce that fast, the pros outweigh the cons but I just want to know how much it takes to make this technique happen.
As far as skills go, you have way too much. Not even Itachi or Kakashi could have all those perks and they were geniuses in their own right. Going to ask you to remove at least a couple of those, perhaps the 'master strategist' bit and maybe the 'physically more powerful than appears' bit. People like filling in a lot of holes in their characters arsenal, but I ask that you not make your character a master of just about everything at 17 years old. No matter how hard he was beaten, you can't excel in every category.
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Just to put it out there; I edited and added the story about Konoe(the swordmaster)'s death. Not because I'm expecting more feedback so quickly, just saying it :)
I wouldn't want to be greedy, now would I? :(
I wouldn't want to be greedy, now would I? :(
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